Tangled: A Rikara SS. *Completed* (Note on Page 44) - Page 27

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Aarathi85

All the three parts were wonderful but the part 12 was awesome...beautiful rikara moments...



I'm glad you enjoyed it. I spent so much time on it.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm


then old take your time :D can't wait for the last part hopefully you will come back with something as beautiful as this story :D



Thank you. I'm flattered!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: reenzreenz

Oh god, u r updating the last part.. waiting for a perfect ending.



I hope I do it justice.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Before I begin, I want to thank each of everyone of you for your support. This includes the likes, comments and silent readers as well. I have never been one to complete a story but your comments are truly what made me go on. This story was also a highlight in my otherwise mundane life. Coming to the next part, this will be the last part and I have never written anything like it. Hope you like it.

Part 13

Gauri and Om bid her friends goodbye and left the venue. They had nearly made it to the car when they heard Rudra calling out to them. Hearing him, they stopped, as he caught up to them. See you at home O?' Rudra asked, panting. Om had just opened his mouth to answer when Gauri spoke I think We'll go back to Oberoi Mansion. Ye pag phera bohot lamba chala.' (this pagh phera has gone on for too long) Gauri looked up at Om, who was holding her by the waist. I agree,' Om said with a smile before bending down and whispering waise bhi tumhare ghar pe koi na koi aa jata hai disturb karne,' (Anyways someone or the other always disturbs us at your house) into her ear. Gauri blushed. Finally, happy that all was okay between the two of them, Rudra let the two lovebirds be.

Om opened the car door for Gauri and she stepped in. Their fingers brushed and Gauri felt her fingers tingle which Om had just touched a few moments ago. Om slid into the driver's seat and turned towards her. To chalien Mrs. Oberoi?' (Shall we Mrs. Oberoi?) he winked at her. Gauri's mouth turned into an O. Om wouldn't let go of her hand on the entire ride and kissed it from time to time.

Once at Oberoi Mansion, Om parked the car and rushed towards Gauri's side to open the door for her. Gauri stepped out of the car but before her feet could hit the ground, she found herself being lifted off the ground and into Om's arms. Ye kya kar rahe hai aap?' (What are you doing?) Gauri questioned. This is how I imagined bringing my bride home,' Om shrugged. Gauri blushed. Seeing her go pink, Om couldn't help but place a kiss on her cheeks. Feeling his lips on her cheeks, Gauri blushed even more if that was possible.

Om stealthily made his way up the stairs, lest they woke his mother up. Once reached their room, Om stepped inside and closed the door with his foot. Gauri was so lost in the moment that she didn't hear him talking to her. Gauri turn the light on for me,' Om said, still carrying her in his arms. Gauri did as she was told and the whole room came alive with many fairy lights dotted throughout the room. Gone was the couch and his art supplies, Only the bed remained. Om put Gauri down gently and let her take the scene in.

The bed was decorated with a mixture of red and white flowers. Gauri moved towards the bed and picked a petal in her hand. Ye aap ne kab kiya?' (When did you do this?) Gauri asked, turning towards him. Rudra,' Om smiled, now next to her. Seeing her head dip, Om wondered if it was too soon. But I told him to stop at the fairy lights. The bed and flowers were his touch.' Om tried to salvage the situation.

Gauri was still looking at her feet when Om took her hand and pulled her on the couch, with him. He began tracing her mehendi with his finger trying to find his name. Beautiful,' he murmured. Thanks.' Gauri replied shyly. Sensing her shyness, Om continued to trace her mehendi. When he found his name, He brought her palm close to his lips and kissed it. Gauri looked up and they shared an eyelock.

Gauri, thank you,' Om finally said. For what?' For being my wife,' Om replied, kissing her other palm. Ever since I was young, I've always been alone. Even though I had a family, I felt alone and I learned to live with it. That's until you came into my life. Our marriage may have been under unusual circumstances but I wouldn't have had it any other way. Even before I knew you, I was protective of you and before I even knew it, you were my wife and now my life and I thank my lucky stars every day for you' Gauri had tears in her eyes. He had said everything so simply yet beautifully. Gauri ever since you came into my life, you've made it beautiful. Yours is the only face I want to wake up to every morning and I never want to go to bed without seeing it. I never knew what longing was until I met you. I love you Gauri.' Om finally finished, looking up at Gauri for a reaction. Gauri couldn't wait any longer so she just slammed her lips on his. She kissed him slowly, then a little faster, making up for lost time.

Om was shocked at first but soon he began responding. Her kiss made all the atoms in his body alive. Suddenly his hands starting roaming on her back. They finally broke for air. That was my line. So is that a yes?' Om asked, lifting her chin. Gauri kissed him again and mumbled a yes against his lips.

They broke apart a second time when Om started to kiss her earlobe. He kissed it slowly and began nibbling it. Om,' Gauri moaned. He turned to look at her face, as if to memorise it. He eyes were closed, hair a little messy and she was biting her lower lip.

Om removed earrings one by one while she just savoured his touched. He kissed behind her ear while she ran her arms over the buttons of his kurta. She wanted him to be rid of that wretched thing. Om began kissing her shoulders when her pallu got in the way. He moved it harshly and pulled her blouse down to get better access to her shoulder. He kissed her shoulder blade moving towards her cleavage, while his hands unwrapped the saree and it fell into a pile on the floor. Gauri was lost in the sensations. It was only when she couldn't feel his lips that she opened her eyes to see him admiring her. Beautiful,' Om said appreciating her beauty. You talk too much!' Gauri said, amazed at her own boldness. Then let's not talk,' Om said carrying her to the bed.

He sat her down on the flowers and began kissing her again while untying the dori of her blouse. Gauri kissed his jaw, savouring every bit of it. Her fingers managed to undo the buttons of his kurta and he assisted her in getting rid of it. Gauri ran her fingers through his chest while she pulled him towards her and kissed her.

Om touched her nipple through her blouse and growled. Soon her blouse was off as Om began torturing her breasts one by one, first with his hands then with his mouth. He moved to her stomach when he noticed the chain around her stomach. He dipped his head down and removed it with his teeth. This wretched thing has been playing havoc with my senses all evening,' Om said harshly.

Om rid himself of the clothing on his lower half and proceeded to do the same with her. Gauri bit her lower lip, whispering a Om. Say it again,' Om whispered, coming close to her. Om,' Gauri whispered with eyes closed. I love it when you call me Om,' Om said kissing her again, laying his body gently upon her.

They were lost in each other, kissing and exploring when Gauri felt his finger in her most intimate part. If Gauri thought, the build up was pleasurable, she had no words for this. He moved his fingers inside her as she writhed in pleasure. Soon her fingers were replaced by his lips and Gauri wrapped her legs around his shoulders. He came up to kiss her one last time before entering her. This went on all night as they became one in every sense. When both were fully satiated, they fell into a deep slumber.

The next morning Gauri woke up feeling a hand on her breast. The events of last night came back to her and Gauri blushed. She looked at Om, only to find him still sleeping. Gauri tried to wiggle out of his hold. Where are you going?' Om said half asleep. Shower,' Gauri said biting her lower lip. I'll join you,' Om said sitting up with a mischievous smile. Gauri seized this opportunity, to yank the sheets from him and ran towards the bathroom. Haaye,' Om said, touching his chest.

Om had just got out of the shower when he saw Gauri struggling with her saree. Without a word, he went towards her and took the material from her. He began wrapping the pleats one by one. When he was satisfied, he tucked it in, lingering his fingers on her skin more than was necessary. Gauri closed her eyes. How do you know this?' Gauri questioned, when he was finally done. I'm an aritist biwi,' Om whispered into her eyes. Do we really need to go to this wedding?' he said blowing a strand of hair away from her face. Yes, now go get ready,' Gauri said, throwing his clothes at him.

Epilogue: Page 41

Edited by StarryStarryNyt - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome and hot... BoldRi... ShockedKara.. Naughtykara .. ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
That was perfect ending
Thank you so much for writing this story

Finally they confessed their love and consummated their marriage

Beautiful

Can we expect an epilogue??? I would love to see them with kids
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Posted: 7 years ago
Too Hott
Loved this naughtykara😳he is soo romantic
Mind blowing update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update dear..
Finally, Om-Ri became Rikara
Love, passion, care, respect will fill their New found love life..
Rudra was the matchmaker who always supported to find these two souls are to be soulmates.
He was, is and will be a amazing brother than a brother-in-low to Om

your wonderful writing skills penned down Om's naughtiness, Gauri's boldness in their sensuous togetherness very well.

I hope it would be a FF than a ss...Is their any possibility of that...

pls do continue or hope to read your skillful writing in another rikara story

Thank you for the wonderful story
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fabulous update. If u can just give some epilogue.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ahaan..!! Rudra did an amazing job..I loved the way he supported Om from the starting...though ShivKara is brothers here, OmRu gave me the feelings of brotherhood...
Finally they were home...yes, Gauri's maayka safar was too long...
Did he just pour his heart before her..?? I still can't believe..Omkara expressed his feelings in the simplest way..but it was too beautiful to cherish it whole life..
Gauri was quite bold answering him...Their first kiss..haaye..!! Sensuous..hot hot stuffs...
So it was the last part..no, I'll really miss it..you penned down their journey of falling in love so beautifully...can't get enough of this..can we expect an epilogue..?? 😳
Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago

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