Tangled: A Rikara SS. *Completed* (Note on Page 44) - Page 28

That was amazing loved it so much.
Superb.

An amazingly written Ending desr!
It was perfect just like we anticipated
Loved their Consummation ( very well written dear, very ht and sensual)
Loved the Bold Ri and NaughtyKara 👏
They found themselves in each other, they found happiness and ove :D

Really hoping for an epilogue if you have time



And rudra is surely my favorite how he had the whole room decorated to perfection amazing
Can't believe it is already over :( 😆

Originally posted by: Aphrodite26

Awesome and hot... BoldRi... ShockedKara.. Naughtykara ..❤️

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

That was perfect ending

Thank you so much for writing this story

Finally they confessed their love and consummated their marriage

Beautiful

Can we expect an epilogue??? I would love to see them with kids

Thanks. This was so challenging to write but well worth it. Thank you for your compliment, means a lot coming from you. I'll pen something down.

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

Too Hott

Loved this naughtykara😳he is soo romantic

Mind blowing update

Thank you love.

Originally posted by: priyadil

Awesome update dear..

Finally, Om-Ri became Rikara

Love, passion, care, respect will fill their New found love life..

Rudra was the matchmaker who always supported to find these two souls are to be soulmates.

He was, is and will be a amazing brother than a brother-in-low to Om

your wonderful writing skills penned down Om's naughtiness, Gauri's boldness in their sensuous togetherness very well.

I hope it would be a FF than a ss...Is their any possibility of that...

pls do continue or hope to read your skillful writing in another rikara story

Thank you for the wonderful story

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
About time it happened!
Rudra was just perfect!

Thank you for your kind words. I feel so flattered. I wanted this story to be short so people aren't waiting for updates everyday. I will write an epilogue. Thanks once again.

Originally posted by: reenzreenz

Fabulous update. If u can just give some epilogue.

Thank you. I will do that soon.

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Ahaan..!! Rudra did an amazing job..I loved the way he supported Om from the starting...though ShivKara is brothers here, OmRu gave me the feelings of brotherhood...
Finally they were home...yes, Gauri's maayka safar was too long...
Did he just pour his heart before her..?? I still can't believe..Omkara expressed his feelings in the simplest way..but it was too beautiful to cherish it whole life..
Gauri was quite bold answering him...Their first kiss..haaye..!! Sensuous..hot hot stuffs...
So it was the last part..no, I'll really miss it..you penned down their journey of falling in love so beautifully...can't get enough of this..can we expect an epilogue..?? 😳

He supported Om more than his sister lol.

I couldn't write an intense scene so kept it simple for the confession.

Thank you for your comments and kind words. I will surely write an epilogue.

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

That was amazing loved it so much.
Superb.

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

An amazingly written Ending desr!
It was perfect just like we anticipated
Loved their Consummation ( very well written dear, very ht and sensual)
Loved the Bold Ri and NaughtyKara 👏
They found themselves in each other, they found happiness and ove :D

Really hoping for an epilogue if you have time



And rudra is surely my favorite how he had the whole room decorated to perfection amazing
Can't believe it is already over :( 😆

Thank you so so much. Your words are what kept me going. I can't believe it's over either. I will write an epilogue.