Tangled: A Rikara SS. *Completed* (Note on Page 44)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Prologue

Gauri put the final touches to her make up and pinned her red ghunghat (veil) on. She had dreamt of this day ever since she was a little girl, scribbling away in her notebook, crossing out old ideas and adding new ones in. Now that little girl was all grown up, her book long forgotten but not before she etched every single detail to memory.

Two big palms suddenly covered her eyes. 'My eye make up Ruud,' Gauri smiled and turned around to face her brother. 'My older sister, about to be married. Where did the time go?' Rudra said dramatically. This earned him a smack on his arm. 'I'm only a minute older than you,' Gauri replied, annoyed. 'Older being the operative word Ri.' Rudra cackled. 'I wish di was here.' Gauri sniffed. 'Me too but right now she needs some time alone,' Rudra answered, suddenly serious. Soon Gauri's best friend, Richa entered the room. Rudra knew this was his cue so he dashed off but not before kissing Gauri on her forehead, followed by a thumbs up.

Gauri sat in front of the mirror and took her reflection in. 'A green saree, just like in your book,' Richa mused. 'It was my Mother's,' Gauri beamed. 'Your something old... how's this for something borrowed?' Richa said adding a delicate brooch over her pallu, which Gauri recalled being Richa's favourite from their teenage years. 'But what about your something blue?' Richa asked, pretending to think. 'I know,' Richa squealed. 'Shivaay's eyes!'

In another room, Shivaay held a picture of Gauri in his hand. He ran his thumb over her cheek. 'The day is finally here, my dear Gauri,' and his lips pressed into a smile.

Part 1: Page 3

Part 2: Page 5

Part 3: Page 7

Part 4: Page 10

Part 5: Page 13

Part 6: Page 16

Part 7: Page 19

Part 8: Page 23

Part 9: Page 25

Part 10: Page 29

Part 11: Page 30

Part 12: Page 34

Part 13: Page 38

Epilogue: Page 41

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh that is an interesting Start dear
I like it that you tried something new with Gauri and Shivaay being introduced as soon to be husband and wife
Can't wait what you have in store
😊
Edited by GoWithTheRhythm - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved the start.
Where is Omkara?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yay! My first response. I've been toying with the idea for quite a while. Finally wrote it. Thank you for your comment. Hope you enjoy:

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Oh that is an interesting Start dear

I like it that you tried something new with Gauri and Shivaay being introduced as soon to be husband and wife
Can't wait what you have in store
😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you. Omkara is getting ready for the wedding.

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

Loved the start.
Where is Omkara?

Edited by StarryStarryNyt - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So, Shivaay and Gauri? That is something new. Okay, as long as in the end its Omkara and Gauri, is it fine. Lets wait for the update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you. Keep an open mind. It was supposed to be Rudra but I think Shivaay is better on paper.

Originally posted by: sara1990

So, Shivaay and Gauri? That is something new. Okay, as long as in the end its Omkara and Gauri, is it fine. Lets wait for the update.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Shivaay and Gauri getting married and Rudy is Gauri's bro..that's interesting...continue soonish..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you. I like RuRi together.

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Shivaay and Gauri getting married and Rudy is Gauri's bro..that's interesting...continue soonish..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very interesting start !!!!
Lots of question in my mind

Continue soon

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