Tangled: A Rikara SS. *Completed* (Note on Page 44) - Page 14

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: eishe10

Excellent story😊



Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Another wonderful update
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
We thank you for a wonderful story dear, so reserve your posts for your Story ;) We don't mind waiting for replies
Coming to the update: YES! She is Jealous She is starting to fall for him
She knows how sincere and honest he is. Everyone deserves a Man as understanding , as naughty and as sweet as Om
Loved how she called him Zulfi Singh and how his wink caught her off guard
Hopefully they will go to dinner 😳 I wonder if Gauri will turn the tables and make HIM jealous that would be funny to watch- or could lead to their first kiss 😉

LOVED it dear :D
Continue as soon as you can

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Posted: 7 years ago
Ahaan..!! Now I got the meaning of do do kashtiyon pe sawar...so Mallika was his gf..and hearing that Mrs.ZulfiKara was jealous..she was falling for him...that was a turning point to their relationship..waiting for Gauri to realize her feelings...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Loved the update
Ri is J it's a good thing
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow... It's interesting and I'm loving it... jealous gauri
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ri was so jealous of Mallika
I just loved it
Even Omkara is teasing her

Now wish just Gauri realises this
That all her anger on Omkara
Is cuz she loves him

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
Hope no more problems coming ahead
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Posted: 7 years ago
She is jealous furious on omkara for not informing who is he...that was a treat to read..i just loved the innocent kara who tried to make peace with his little angry bird...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Reserved. Thanks for the idea guys!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Read all 6 parts

Loved the build up
The plot the twist n turns


Shivaay definitely had plans
Glad Omkara came on time
It's funny how no one knows Omkara
Gauri thought he was jobless

Loved how she was jealous
And her reaction to who Omkara is
Mallika was expected
But she is different than what I was expecting

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon


I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Shivaay was hurt by all the events in his life. Omkara wanted to make a name for himself without the Oberoi now. Gauri is silly!

Gauri is in for a surprise. I always thought the whole Mallika track was pointless but I loved her entry and character!

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