Tangled: A Rikara SS. *Completed* (Note on Page 44)

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Posted: 7 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm
THANK you for the fast Update dear :D
It was wonderful
Loved how he caught her before she could hurt herself
how they managed to talk like friends and how he heard about her Crush on Kara the Writer ;)

Looks like she was jealous when she saw that her Husband was eyed by those Girls 😆 Nicely done

And the revelation ! How Om wanted to see her reaction, how he simply said : That he would have dinner with his wife
JUST PERFECT
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You're welcome. It's your comments that motivate me else I'm very lazy to write.

Omkara to the rescue. These falls are so cliches but they do the job. Omkara is very easy going. Gauri still has her guard up.

They were goo goo eyeing him lol.

Omkara is simply sexy!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: NESRIA
Lovely
Loved OM style to riveal his
Gill kara identit
Gauri is un kowning Jim slowly

Aise mamlon mein Om ka dimaag kaafi chalta hai. Yes the truth is out now.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: priyadil
Nice update dear...
Gauri is jealous...upset with om for not revealing her about him

angry Ri ... loved it

Pls update soon...

I'm glad you like it. Gauri is less upset but more jealous.

Angry Ri, scared Om lol.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: music1
A jealous wife is s boost to a man's confidence in making her his. He is close to achieving it I guess:)

Ah yes. He is close but not there yet. Smooth seas do not a skilled sailor make!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: sh_aarohi
update soon
love it
Jealous Ri 😆😆

I'm glad you did. Also I have translated some of the hindi dialogues for you!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid
Another wonderful update
Loved it
Continue soon

Yay! I'm glad you liked it.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm
We thank you for a wonderful story dear, so reserve your posts for your Story ;) We don't mind waiting for replies
Coming to the update: YES! She is Jealous She is starting to fall for him
She knows how sincere and honest he is. Everyone deserves a Man as understanding , as naughty and as sweet as Om
Loved how she called him Zulfi Singh and how his wink caught her off guard
Hopefully they will go to dinner 😳 I wonder if Gauri will turn the tables and make HIM jealous that would be funny to watch- or could lead to their first kiss 😉

LOVED it dear :D
Continue as soon as you can

Thank youu! Thanks for the idea!

How can you not fall for him.

Ah yes! Everyone needs an Om!

Haaye these little moments. I get butterflies while writing them!

I dunno where to take it from here!

Thank you. Stay tuned!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#148

aww..i love this cute jealous wife

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Ahaan..!! Now I got the meaning of do do kashtiyon pe sawar...so Mallika was his gf..and hearing that Mrs.ZulfiKara was jealous..she was falling for him...that was a turning point to their relationship..waiting for Gauri to realize her feelings...

It actually means something else. She will realise it soon but not before getting insanely jealous!

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Posted: 7 years ago

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