Rikara FF: Paradise Regained (Index: Pg1, Ch 11: Pg 32)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi all,
Here i am with an FF on the current track with a slight variation. I have come up with an idea of Gauri being a little grey and pretending all's fine before the family, while still maintaining her stance with Omkie. She is hurt and is yet to heal fully while he is making every effort to heal the wounds he had caused.

So here is the prologue.. Hope you guys like it!!

Love,
Yayini

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Prologue

Gauri was wondering about the means to escape the place, as immediately as possible. She couldn't afford to risk her integrity by getting even closer to the possibility of marrying Ajay. Just then the door slammed open. Her Jatadhaari ex-pati barged inside, only to tape her mouth and blurt out in haste that he can't afford to lose her out to another man. He was about to abduct her, along with his brothers-in-crime not leaving any room to explain her situation that she herself was contemplating such an idea. She felt Oberoi Mansion might be the safest place for her, now that ajay is on the run to capture her and have his way with her. But she hasn't forgiven nor had any plans to reconcile with her husband, since her wounds ran too deeper for anyone to even possibly assess. His honest love confession did shake her resolve of staying apart from his oh-so-irresistible Jatadhari, but his dagger of words after that cruel seduction were etched clearly in her mind. Though he had accused her to be a characterless woman, it never hurt as much as it did that day. He seduced her, made love with his eyes, elevated her to a heavenly place only to provide her a hard fall. The fall was much harder than he thought.. Gauri decided to sort out her state of mind once they are in Oberoi Mansion, but things weren't going to be easy and clean

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Chapter 1: Pg 3

Chapter 2: Pg 7

Chapter 3: Pg 10

Chapter 4: Pg 13

Chapter 5: Pg 16

Chapter 6: Pg 19

Chapter 7: Pg 22

Chapter 8: Pg 24

Chapter 9: Pg 27

Chapter 10: Pg 30

Chapter 11: Pg 32
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AparnaChinnu thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#2
interesting start yar
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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How can you tease us like that ???
what will happen next? how will Gauri show him her pain?
What will Om do to win her back
so intense so intriguing
can't wait for the update
Pls pm me
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Posted: 7 years ago
#4
ohhh ...
Another nice FF ...
Just like all the previous FFs...
I read your all FFs and All are very nice and wl written
Congrats for your new FF too
Please uptate soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I had really wanted gauri to give omkara tough time
But gul ki to aadat hai chopsy krne ki
Ab sari umeede tumhare iss story se judi hai...
Please update soon
Would love to read more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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plzz continue... waiting to see whats happening next...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Karthi di..you're back..!! Yaaayyy...!! I'm already in love with this FF...so Ri didn't forgot anything her jatadhaari did to her..so we're going to get some manaofy scenes here...I really want to see how Omkara do the bharpaayi of his hurtful words...and a little bit of greyness in Gauri's character made it more interesting for me...continue soonish..plz...
Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I am new to this forum...
But I love rikara and shivika...
Wow...
It's awesome and mind blowing prologue...
Just loved it...
Do continue soon
And please pm me
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Karthi di..you're back..!! Yaaayyy...!! I'm already in love with this FF...so Ri didn't forgot anything her jatadhaari did to her..so we're going to get some manaofy scenes here...I really want to see how Omkara do the bharpaayi of his hurtful words...and a little bit of greyness in Gauri's character made it more interesting for me...continue soonish..plz...


Hey tasnim.. waise my mind was getting blown out of universe seeing the segments.. so thought this ff could save our moods..

Yeah gauri is gonna give omkara a tough time, especially when she acts lovey dovey infront of family and stays put inside the walls of their room😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

I am new to this forum...

But I love rikara and shivika...
Wow...
It's awesome and mind blowing prologue...
Just loved it...
Do continue soon
And please pm me


Hey dear welcome!!
Thanks for liking the prologue.. please keep reading😊

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