Rikara FF: Paradise Regained (Index: Pg1, Ch 11: Pg 32) - Page 13

Originally posted by: Aphrodite26

Sneak peak is making me crazy.. jaldi update karo..

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Poor Om is feeling guilty and you portrayed that perfectly

all the pent up guilt, his pain for hurting her for almost causing her to lose something she could never get back wonderfully written dear

and How gauri hugged him, to help him ease his pain and guilt despite herself being still broken unsure of her feelings for her husband was portrayed with such an expertise just WOW

Om getting naughty after hearing his Brother and his wife and Gauri blushing

both forgot that the minute they would give themselves another chance they could explore different layers of their marriage different feelings😉

update soon dear

Thank you afrin sara chipper treat and Megha.. Keep reading!

Originally posted by: BIaddict

Wowww...read all 5 parts in one go. Glad how you addressed all the unaddressed issues in Rikara in the show. This is how it should have been...sigh...but of course creatives just don't care to explore any of their unresolved issues😡

Thank you so much for getting them addressed through this FF. thoroughly enjoyed it and I wish the CV's read it and understand how to make the half baked Rikara story into a full baked one 😆

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Finally GKS convinced her Jatadhaari to forget everything of the bitter past and start a new life..though she's hurt she cannot see him suffering..neither she could stay away from him..bechari is in a dilemma..let's see yeh dil aur dimag ka jung kab tak chalta hain..

Waise I'm loving this MajnuKara...phone lock pattern mein G..wallpaper mein G..aur phonebook pe toh My G...haaye..!! He's so much in love with his chiraiyya...

I laughed reading them witnessing some intimate conversation of Shivika..aaw..!! My bholi Ri..she couldn't even think aisa kuch chal raha hoga inside the room...awkward situation..but Kara enjoyed the sight of his blushing bride..aur pata nehi apne dimag me kaise kaise sanskaari pulao paka raha tha...

I totally enjoyed reading this chapter..there was emotional convos..as well as some light hearted moments..continue soonish..

Originally posted by: priyadil

Nice update dear..

Finally they sorted out the problem...

& Now om is in full romantic mood

What will happen...

can't wait ...😳

Pls update sooonnn...

Originally posted by: RingsOfSaturn

Really loving it.

Very nice update, liked the fact that they are talking, sharing emotions, building a foundation, taking it slowly.

Great work, looking forward to next update.

<Chapter 6>

Omkaara came in late for dinner, since Gauri wanted to have a late dinner. They were joined by a still blushing anika and a teasing Shivaay. While Gauri and Anika, were inside kitchen, the brothers sat around chatting away.

"Om.. you wanted to speak with me regarding that studio space agreement, right. sorry main toda busy tha. bolo what's that u wanted to discuss?" Shivaay started a casual conversation.

"Haan..righhhtt.. you were busy.. i just came by in the evening.. got to know you were.. u know ..very busy.." Omkaara gave a satirical reply with wicked smirk

Now it was shivaay's turn to blush for a brief moment.

"Oh comeon OM, koi aur jaane ya na jaane, tum toh aise baat mat karo.. you know how it is right..?" Shivaay wasn't the one to heed.

"I wish.." Omkaara sighed.

"What.. kya keh rahe ho?"

"Kuch nahi kuch bhi toh nahi." Omkaara avoided the question with a sheepish grin.

"Om, sab teek hain na.. you guys got back after such a long struggle. i assumed sab teek hogaya hai.." Shivaay grew concerned at his brother's sullen face.

"Sab teek hain shivaay, its just that we had a mountain of mu between us, so u know gauri is taking time.. and i am perfectly fine with it. So we are sorting things out and taking baby steps" though omkaara wanted to sound perfectly normal, his voice did express restlessness and yearning.

"So you guys didn't..." Shivaay stopped looking at his brother.

Omkaara looked into his brother's eyes, "Not yet" He glanced away.

"Om.. Gauri sabse choti hai.. she is like bachi to me, you know. For her age, she has displayed immense maturity and will in her life. She will definitely understand you very soon. Usne abhi tak asli Omkaara ko dekhne ka mauka nahi mila. Jab tumhaari pyaar dekhegi, she will fall in love with you all over." Shivaay comforted his long haired brother.

"You know shivaay, her love is the purest, unrequited and selfless than mine. Sometimes i feel that i don't deserve that kind of love, for all that i have done to her" Omkaara let out a glimpse of his guilt.

"Aisa mat kaho OM. Humhaari family mein, sabse neik, saaf aur naram dil insaan tum hi ho. You are the most sensitive, honest and emotional person that i have ever seen. Tum definitely aisi love deserve karte ho, for all that you have done for badi maa. Infact you guys are just perfect for each other." Shivaay hugged his brother by shoulder.

"Thank you shivaay" the conversation had to stopped as the ladies walked in.

While anika filled Shivaay's plate, gauri came in to place the bowl of curry in Omkaara's plate. Om extended his hand to get it from her, when his hand snapped hers. The bowl of curry all gloriously red, fell on his perfect white kurta spilling it across from abdomen till the knee.

She knew it was his favourite kurta and she felt terribly sorry.

"Omkaara sorry sorry.. haath se pisal gaya.. am very sorry" Gauri panicked slightly

"Its' ok Gauri.. chodo.. main wash karke aata hoon" He smiled a bit at her, and went off to wash.

Shivaay and anika were watching this, while something was cooking up in Shivaay's mind. A man knew better of a man's needs.

"Gauri.. idhar aao.. yeh hai special daag nikalne waale tissues. Wo white kurta is om ki favourite hai, tum naa iss tissue se jaldi wo curry ko wipe karo, kurta pe stain nahi hoga, warna even after washing wo stain reh hi jaata hai" Shivaay gave in a pack of some wet tissues and sent gauri out immediately leaving a bemused anika

"Shivaay aap pehle dhobi ki kaam kar rahe the, kya. daag nikaalne wale tissues main pehli baar sun rahi hoon"

"Anika.. kuch toh samjha kar.. Why i asked her to wipe on him?"

Anika's face widened with understanding while a smile crept up her lips..

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Omkaara was rushing to the washroom, followed by Gauri who came running at his back. She was puffing and panting at the speed which she came.

"Gauri..kya hua?"

"Wo Omkaaraji.. rukiye. yeh hai daag nikalne wali tissues. Shivaay bhaiyya ne di hai. isse pehle daag pochle, phir aap usse washing ke liye daaliye, yeh aapki favourite kurta hain na.. daag nahi chalega, warna"

Omkaara's eyes crooned, "Daag nikalne wala tissues?" What was his brother upto?

"Idhar aayiye, main poch lethi hoon"

Omkaara still couldn't understand the intention behind this small drama until she started wiping it by herself.

She held on to his waist by left hand, started wiping the stain with the tissues one by one, with her right hand, starting from his abdomen. He knew..He exactly knew now!

He wasn't sure if he should stop his innocent wife from doing this, or probably be a little selfish and savour her touch. While he was battling his mind, she had already wiped a portion on the abdomen and had shifted below.

Omkaara's mind stopped thinking thereon. All he could feel is something primal of the body, while his innocent wife kept wiping as if she is cleaning a frame of picture hung on wall. She was blissfully oblivious of the turmoils of the man, not even thinking otherwise about where her hands moved around. Omkaara stood with a pumped up fist, steering up his resolve to not dissappoint his innocent wife. But he couldn't at certain point, as he moved instintively closer and held her shoulders, as she brushed against his harder self.

"Omkaaraji, hilayiye mat. Bas hogaya. itni si baaki hai"

Omkaara cursed his stars for having to stand like a stone, while his wife touched him intimately, knowingly or unknowingly.

His primal desires stoked and burning in flames by her gentle rubbing up and down, Omkaara closed his eyes to focus on the current situation. She finally finished, admiring her work of having cleaned the stain fully, noticing that she had left a spot uncleaned. He couldn't help but let out a faint gasp, when she caressed it a little hard, not even realizing that his fingers dug deep into her shoulders.

Gauri finished her task finally and looked up on him with a victorious smile, Omkaara was in a sad state. He cursed shivaay inside for having to toy with his emotions in a cruel manner, though he knew it was for him. He frantically twisted his lips in a voluntarily smile, clutching her face.

"Please sone do.. aisa mat karo, dobara. Not until you are fine" He rushed to the washroom while she stood perplexed trying to decipher what the hell he meant.

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Omkaara was restless afterwards. Thanks to the great massage from his chirrayya. She had retired happily in her portion of bed, while he wasn't definitely in the mood to retire on the other side. He longed to touch her, feel her or atleast lie close to her.

He was looking at her every other second, pretending to drink water, while he accidentally or incidentally dropped the glass on the duvet. The cold water spilt on the duvet and his side of the bed and gauri squeaked.

"Omkaaraji, yeh aapne kya kar diya. dekhiya sab gila hogaya"

"Haan.. koi baat nahi.. main recliner par sojaata hoon" He prayed that his wife stopped him.

"Nahi aap bed pe sojayiye, main recliner pe sojaati hoon" His minion wife was a blisful surprise always!

"Nahi.. nahi nahi.. koi baat nahi.. tumhe har comfort dena mera farz hai gauri.."

After inspecting for few seconds, they agreed upon single thing. Omkaara moved closer to her side of bed, while she lay still. He didn't have a duvet for himself, hence had to share hers, to which she agreed. His phone was constantly buzzing to interupt this special arrangement, which annoyed both.

"Kya hua omkaaraji. aapki phone pe message ki notification aate rahi hai, shyaam ko bhi aise hi aaya tha"

His face twitched in irritation.

"It's that girl"

"Ladki? Kaunsi ladki?" Gauri's face reaction seemed to change suddenly

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Jealous Gauri... aha.. its a dream.. loved it..❤️

Jealous Gauri. Waiting for the next update. I am felling bad for Om now. Innocent wife has no idea what is she doing to her poor hubby. Shivaay rock by giving the idea to Gauri and of course our Chiraiya too innocent to think about anything. Lets see what happen next. I wonder who is that lady?