Rikara FF: Paradise Regained (Index: Pg1, Ch 11: Pg 32) - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
Excellent start😉 Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
tit for tat 😳
loved it especially the last line
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
Holy shit!.What was that last line.I really like
The concept is intriguing,gauri isn't someone to be revengeful that too to her jathadhari,but it will take time for her to trust again.Hopefully in this ff,I can read both their realisations of love.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
You are bang on yar...
This is wat I expected from gauri...
The last line...its not less than a verbal slap...
Omkara had insulted gauri so many times...she should at least do dis much...its about her self respect... so he should earn the forgiveness and for that he had to earn the trust from her...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: priyadil

ohhh ...

Another nice FF ...
Just like all the previous FFs...
I read your all FFs and All are very nice and wl written
Congrats for your new FF too
Please uptate soon.


Hi.. Priya!

Thanks for reading!

Hope you like the ongoing chapters..!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Pau91

Such a big contrast is Gauri witnessing in Omkaras behavior...the last line was just as a tight slap across Omkaras face👏


Yes.. its a 180 deg flip WRT to his character for her.. After getting a rude shock through that GGG aurat, there was a love confession and now this all my biwi thingy.. Yes Gauri does need time so does omkie!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrindagupta

What a concept

Really glad someone showed her angst
Gauri easily melting didn't go well with me
I wanted Bareilly track to extend a bit
But here u are with my wish

Gauri is upset
Wonder what she has in mind
Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon


Hey vrinda,

I would like to continue her angst for a while he is gonna go in all wooing mode.!! Lets see the tug of war of love!!😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: mailanchi

Mind blowing... especially the last dialogue by Gauri. It was very much required...I was not much in favor of Gauri forgiving Om so fast in IB. Thanks for giving this...Hope u will not take much time to update


hey maila..🤗

Yes..taht jhatka was needed for him to realize her depth of hurt!!
and now lets see how the role reversal gets interesting..!! while she acts all lovey dovey infront of family being all put inside the confined doors!!

Time for payback!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: fariah25

The last line ! 🥺 Me left gaping at the screen !

I didn't know it ended over there for a minute or 2 though as I was scared to scroll down... imagining their faces.n specially omki... but then when I got myself to scroll down.. there was nothing..🥱 😃
What happens next me very excited to see !
Update soon plz ! 😊


Hey fariah!!

omg thanks!! your excitement is flattering!
I hope i live up to the expectatin!! keep reeading dear!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: priya_86

Awesome Karthi...abhi toh tumhare FF ka hi sahara hain...baaki down the drain...

The last part..."kya aapko zyaada maza aa raha hain?"...i know what is coming up...😳


Pri aap se behtar kaun jaan saktha hain..!! U know me.. better!!
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