Two Beating Hearts- A RiKara SS- Chapter 6:Page 11 - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow gauri is ready for fighting...amazing...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice story...I like the story concept...you r an amazing writer...pm me if possible...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow chapters are just Fantastic
totally enjoyed it
sorry for such late reply
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Posted: 7 years ago
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very interesting update
intense 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55

well written
hope gauri save
thanks for the pm...



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb story
Read all parts in a go
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Emotional update 😭Feeling bad for both Gauri n Om😔
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

war time.loved shamsher supporting gauri.you have not put shamsher's pic.so I imagined madhubala shamsher.ragini loved holi.but om is playing holi of blood and he is guilty.this monologue was lovely. this crook vikram only planned it to get gauri.shocking.hope nothing bad happens.did you decide who should be vikram?


Hello Jasmine, guess you didn't read chapter 4, I have update it on Page 4...Mentioned who is playing Vikram in that...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Emotional update 😭Feeling bad for both Gauri n Om😔


Thanks alot dii...Don't worry everything will be alright soon...
PS: RiKara in your signature❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 5-My Illusion!

She went out convincing her mind to fight...to fight with what is wrong...the sword which graced her hands when she used to lift it before was today making her shiver...afterall she was also like Om...never wishing to kill anybody...she ran out in the corridor where many soldiers were standing waiting for someone to come ...she attacked them immediately piecing her sword in one of them's arm...he winced in pain and listening this someone who faced other side turned...it was Vikram...he eyed her shocked as he eyed the blood stained sword in her hand.


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"Rajkumari Gauri..." he said as he stared at her.

Gauri eyed him angrily and then shouted while trying to hide her pain " your Omkara...tell him that if he won from my dad...he shouldn't suppose that he won from me...he got me because I will die rather than being with someone as cruel as him..."



" Rajkumari Gauri..." he again spoke coming close to her while she protected herself with her sword.

" Listen, I am not here to harm you...I want to save you...save you from my BROTHER..." Vikram spoke ordering his soldiers to keep down their swords.

" What..." Gauri questioned as she was extremely shocked.


" Yaa...my brother...he is a cruel prince...he hates everyone except for himself...he only forced me to take that marriage proposal for you as he was mesmerized seeing you...he started this war just to get you but I know that you hate him...I want to help you but for that you too need to help..." He said as Gauri never got that he snatched the sword from her hand while she was listening to him.

" Now ,please come...I want to talk to you..." he said guiding her to a room of her own palace.

Gauri nodded and moved with him...they reached the room...Vikram sat in one seat and made her to sit on other..." now tell me fast , how can you help me??" Gauri asked eyeing straight into his eyes.

" My brother...I told you na that he is a devil...I want to save your family...he has imprisoned your father and brother and is wishing to torture them a lot...I don't really think that the rest members of your family whom you have made to run away will be saved or not..." Gauri was shocked to listen all this and stared at him for an answer.

" Listen , I will do anything but please save my family...please..." Gauri said while tears started flowing down her cheeks.


" I have a solution...you just need to follow my instruction..." he said eying her victoriously while she was facing down trying to stop her tears.

" What solution???" she asked his plan..." Help me to kill Omkara...and then you and you family will be free..."(in mind: and I will get whatever I want including you.) " what, killing someone?????" she asked as she stood up.

" Ya...if you don't kill him , he'll kill your family..." he said standing up trying to keep a hand on her shoulder.

she moves back and shouts" He's your brother..."

" But before that a cruel king who just tortures his people..." Vikram replied still maintaining his calm.

Gauri was confused...what to do and what not , the question was haunting her mind...she didn't knew what to do...what was better " Not saving her family or not killing someone'" she was thinking this when Vikram said " Think everything later...first come with me, lets start our journey back because I know you love your family a lot, don't you??" Gauri stares at him and nods, thinking nothing.

Vikram nods at her reply and turns to go...he smirks and thinks " Second step too completed...now you are out Omkara..." he moves outside while Gauri sits in front of the Krishna idol in the room and says" I know God...I am gonna do the biggest sin in my life...killing someone but I am sorry, I'll have to do it, to save my family...I'll have...please forgive me if you can..." she runs outside with tears saying this.


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Om was in his sitting in his room eying the moon... it was full moon ..." God , thanks for whatever you gave me and sorry for the shame I gave...killing so many people...I can't even expect you to give my life...my Ragini to me because the wrong I had done to others will never leave my way..." he cries thinking that he can never find his love...his Ragini.


Gauri is sitting in the cart (the doli type) her heart has a lot many questions from her and so to find peace she looks out, at the full moon," I will find you someday Sanchay, I used to think this but no...from today...I won't even try because the sin I am gonna do, I don't deserve any happiness..." she keeps eyeing the full moon while Om too is eyeing the full moon...they both have decided to forget their love but can love be forgotten ever??

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