Two Beating Hearts- A RiKara SS- Chapter 6:Page 11 - Page 4

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

can't imagine anyone. please put a pic.

Ok, can you give me some suggestions??

OH NO.I'VE NO IDEA.THATS Y I ASKED U.SINCE HE IS AN IMP character u can put a poll like last time.

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

OH NO.I'VE NO IDEA.THATS Y I ASKED U.SINCE HE IS AN IMP character u can put a poll like last time.

Ok dear, will try before next part...😊

Originally posted by: Aarathi85

Ohhh nice update...

Thanks a lot dear...😊

Originally posted by: maivelli

Superb

Thanks alot dear...

Chapter 3-The Battle of Fate

Gauri sits back on the floor and thinks"God , please...do the thing that is best for everyone..."

She suddenly remembers someone say "don't worry...God always does everything good only... Something that is best for us..."

Her lips curved into a smile"Sanchay... you were always the best... miss you so much...if you would have been here...you would have solved everything...I wish you were here...really...I miss you so much...but why I do I miss you...seriously never a day in my life has passed when I didn't missed him...is this LOVE ???" Gauri asked herself realizing that the words which she spoke were actually Sanchay's.

She leaned back on the bed sitting in deep thinking.

A few days passed , everyone was preparing for war...Gauri was tensed...she never wanted any war to take place due to her but it was happening now...she didn't knew anything else but only one thing...that she can't back off now...Omkara was indifferent...he had fought many wars in his life...though most were started by other kingdoms ...he never liked wars yet being a king he had to fight.

As he was getting ready he saw a picture behind the bed...yes it was the same incomplete portrait...he smiled as he held it...it was still incomplete" I love you Ragini and I would love you even if I die today..." he said as he kissed the the eyes.

He kept the portrait at its place and went outside...there he saw his mother.

Omkara spoke"maa...don't worry ...I won't let anything happen to any of us..."(though Vikram is her step son yet Jhanvi loves Vikram a lot)

Jhanvi "I trust you beta...may god bless you..."

She hugs him and then does his aarti...he smiles and leaves...

Gauri's mother is doing Shamsher's aarti when suddenly Gauri comes running and hugs Shamsher "I am sorry bauji...I am so sorry...I know everything is happening because of me...I am sorry..."

Shamsher breaks the hug and caresses her face" no beta...don't ever consider it your fault...you are my daughter ...my pride...i told you that day too that the decision is only yours so don't worry...even if anything happens to me..."

Gauri keeps a hand on his mouth to prevent him from speaking and hugs him again.

She then hugs her brother who caresses her hair and then leaves.

Her mother eyes Gauri with tears while Gauri remembers her words " maa...God never does wrong to good people..."

Gauri said as she went back running and sat near the Krishna idle joining her hands and closing her eyes just praying for the safety of her loved ones...

The battle started...the whole ground was filled with soldiers fighting for their respective kings...Omkara and Shamsher too were fighting at different places even without seeing the person against whom they were fighting the battle...the ground was getting filled with blood...blood stained dead bodies on the ground...seeing them Omkara had tears " I am so unlucky...because of me so many people die just to protect me and my so called respect...why god...why you made me so unlucky ...Ragini loved to play holi and had she ever seen me playing this holi of blood...she wouldn't even have been my friend...my life is just a curse...adorned in these jewels I am just a dummy from inside having no emotions of my own..." Omkara thought as he was fighting mindlessly remembering some beautiful sounds of anklets which gave some peace to his mind...on the other hand Vikram was fighting like an animal...killed anyone that came his way...no matter that person was his own..."Rajkumari Gauri...you are mine and I only planned all this for you and now I will get you at any cost..." he said as he killed someone from his sharp sword...

Gauri was sitting near the idle when the sound of wind opened her eyes...winds were blowing in full speed blowing the curtains of her room...her eyes fell on the diya that was about to blow off...her heart sank ...the fear of losing someone close occupied her mind...she tried protecting the diya ...the best she could do...Omkara was fighting when someone's sword reached his arm and made a deep cut ...he couldn't help but shouted " ah..." the person stared at him ready to give another blow but some strength came inside him suddenly...he held his sword in other hand and returned the attack...he was relieved...it seemed like someone's prayers gave him strength...he again started fighting with his other hand trying his level best just to defend himself and not to kill anyone...the battle lasted for 2 days...the continuous fighting led to many people's death and soon the soldiers of both the armies were dead...now only a few soldiers of Omkara and a few of Shamsher were left...luckily no one close to Gauri or Omkara died yet the pain of losing so many people was quite big for Omkara...he was just blaming himself while on the other side from 2 days Gauri was in the same position just praying in front of god...both had same feelings but were they destined to be together, only time had the answer...

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Author's Note: So Hows the Third Chapter friends? I hope you liked it. By the way, I just created a poll to decide the villian for this story, Here's the Links:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4908583/who-should-be-the-main-villian-in-two-beating-hearts

Please do vote for the one you think would suit the role.

Good start...
nice picture edit with the story... 👏

nice song...
misunderstanding...
thanks for the pm

Amazinggg idea of a historical FF on RiKara I think Gauri loves the person can be turn out to be Omkara only n he loving the person can be turn out to be Gauri only right 😕??Very beautifully written 👏eagerly waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: maivelli

Nice update soon

Thanks dear...Just Updating...