RiKara SS - ARRANGED LOVE - TEASER UPDATED Pg 6 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Aawww..!! Omkara is so much lost in his newly wedded wife's beauty..Shrenu or should I say Gauri (yaar jo bhi hain ek hi baat hain) is such a beauty that could attract anybody...humari cute and khubsooraat chiraiyya...nazar naa lage kisi ki..both of them are so adorable...Gauri being a simple girl whose world circled around her mother never had a plan of getting married..but fate wrote something else for her and brought her to Omkara's life...it's not a love story yet...not even like fairy tales...it's simple yet so beautiful..waiting for their journey of ishqbaazi to get started...lighthearted stories se meri stress kam ho jaati hain..haaye..thanks for this...their first night and Ri's rocking avtar..I'm still on my lala land.. 😳
Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lo jii..I'm back with another pakaoing comment after reading the chappy two...Ale ale..!! Kuch hi minutes mein do do update...main khushi se pagal hi naa ho jaaoon..I had a genuine smile on my lips while reading this..the "She would like" and "She wants" ki list made it more adorable for me...loved how she slept again with his hand settled on her bare stomach, how she drooled over her just bathed shirtless husband, how dramatically they interacted each other, how she screamed seeing a lizard, how our Kara kept staring his wife draped in nothing but a towel, how he put sindoor in her mang, made a mangalsutra for her..loved how she leaned against him feeling herself so lucky by having him in her life..I loved everything about this..like I said earlier that it's not a love story yet..but ayega zid pe to qayamnat hogi..I know I know it's not that kind of over dramatic SS...and I'm loving every bit of it just because of it's simplicity..a simple story line and your magical touch us equal a perfect treat for us...their journey of ishqbaazi/becoming the soulmate of each other whatever I say is already started...I can't get enough of it even after reading two two parts in just an hour...this is so so so beautiful..
Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I MADE THIS FOR YOU..oh my god how can om be too perfect ..I am having this stupid smile on my face after reading this..having read a sanskari and emotional is of urs I thought this may be like that too..but om went to sleep in the couch and I was like what is happening here..then came the dabbang gauri ..gauri rocked and om shocked..even I was shocked seeing her bold.then you went romantic and the mangalsutra part made my romantic heart fly to heaven..soo damn cute..loved it loved it..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awww awww awww ! 😳
Arranged marriage turning into love... This is what I alwaays dream of...
And This was LOVELYYY ! BEAUTIFUL ! DREAMY !... everything...😊❤️
I love ur choice of words and the way u frame every sentence pooru..
To take a reader into a beautiful imaginary fantasy land penned down by her is a writer's greatest achievement I believe... and that's exactly what you did here...👏
Loved it.. And will be waiting for the updates..
❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh my! This is so lovely. I had a smile on my face while reading this. Loved how they were lost in each other's thoughts. GKS rocked on their first night :D The 'she wants' and 'she would like' lists were lovely! Loved that Om made that mangalsutra for her, aww! In love with this SS already; simple yet so beautiful! Waiting eagerly for the next chapters!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Aawww 5hat was so adorable
Loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is such a sweet story Pooru!! I loved how Om could not stop staring at his Gauri in so much awe. Kinda reminded me of the Kaise Mujhe Tum Milgayi Kismat pe aaye naa yakeen song. Loved how he had so much affection for her.

Also loved how Gauri listed all the things she wanted. She's such a strong, inspirational and dabang womaniya! 😃
And that last part where Om MADE her the mangalsutra...hayyyeee This man just keeps raising the bar on what a dream husband is like.

Love it love it! Please continue soon! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is such a cute thing
My rikara are adorable cute babies
Awww loved them
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb..
Rikara's Simple , sweet arranged love..amazing...btw after reading this i feel like arrange marriages bhi achi hoti hai😆😆
I'm in love with this gauri and omkie here and I loved how Om could not stop staring her and and my fav part is *gauri rocked and omkara shocked* that was brilliant😃😆
Her list of things that she wanted..beautifull...your choice of words are wondrfull behna👏.i had smile on my face while reading this😳.and kahi na kahi i feel *she wants* list is your wish too😉
Shirtless omkara ...my dream.lizard part is very funny...Ri in towel☺️
Last part was amazing..he filled her maang with sindhoor and he made a mangalsutra for her hayee lovely yar


Edited by rikara94 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awww pooru this is sooo very lovely!! 😊
Blissful !! 😳

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