RiKara SS - ARRANGED LOVE - TEASER UPDATED Pg 6 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
Wow that was such a refreshing and wonderful start of Rikara journey.
The simplicity of this story makes it more endearing to read.
Loved both om and gauri's characters.
Superb.
Continue soon.
Thanks for the pm too.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thankooo Afrin 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Aawww..!! Omkara is so much lost in his newly wedded wife's beauty..Shrenu or should I say Gauri (yaar jo bhi hain ek hi baat hain) is such a beauty that could attract anybody...humari cute and khubsooraat chiraiyya...nazar naa lage kisi ki..both of them are so adorable...Gauri being a simple girl whose world circled around her mother never had a plan of getting married..but fate wrote something else for her and brought her to Omkara's life...it's not a love story yet...not even like fairy tales...it's simple yet so beautiful..waiting for their journey of ishqbaazi to get started...lighthearted stories se meri stress kam ho jaati hain..haaye..thanks for this...their first night and Ri's rocking avtar..I'm still on my lala land.. 😳

Baat toh sahi hai tasnim ... Gauri hai hi itni khoobsurat ke chahke bhi nazar nahi hat ti and when she is married to kara ... Uske mann mein kya kya khayaal aa rahe honge about her beauty ... I am yet to explain that ...
I put in this chhotu si back story because her character had to be sketched a new ... But she is still the same ... Dabang womaniya 😉
You got me right ... This for time being even of story of a couple is not a love story ... Its the beginning of their journey ... 'Ishq pe hoga yakeen ... Ishq ho jaane ke baad'
The main aim of this story is to be light hearted and romantic ... Somethings that lessen my stress levels ...
Ahaan ... First night ... As this one is an arrange marriage ... We cannot expect them to rush into physical intimacy ... Both of them are mature not to behave in such a way either ... But there are ecpections and understanding ... They know what being a husband and wife means ... ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Lo jii..I'm back with another pakaoing comment after reading the chappy two...Ale ale..!! Kuch hi minutes mein do do update...main khushi se pagal hi naa ho jaaoon..I had a genuine smile on my lips while reading this..the "She would like" and "She wants" ki list made it more adorable for me...loved how she slept again with his hand settled on her bare stomach, how she drooled over her just bathed shirtless husband, how dramatically they interacted each other, how she screamed seeing a lizard, how our Kara kept staring his wife draped in nothing but a towel, how he put sindoor in her mang, made a mangalsutra for her..loved how she leaned against him feeling herself so lucky by having him in her life..I loved everything about this..like I said earlier that it's not a love story yet..but ayega zid pe to qayamnat hogi..I know I know it's not that kind of over dramatic SS...and I'm loving every bit of it just because of it's simplicity..a simple story line and your magical touch us equal a perfect treat for us...their journey of ishqbaazi/becoming the soulmate of each other whatever I say is already started...I can't get enough of it even after reading two two parts in just an hour...this is so so so beautiful..

You don't pakaaofy me 😡 SAMJHI!
And about the two updates ... Ek likhne ke baad main itni excited ho gayi ke Maine doosri bhi likh Di 😆 I felt so happy ...
About what she would like and what she wants ... Its what she has thought about to begin to level up their relationship ... She wants it in a slow gradual manner and that too very romantic ... The artist in him has raised her expectations even more...
His hand on her stomach ... She is trying not to feel nervous when he wants to touch her and what he did in sleep is a simple gesture for her to soak him ...
A drooling scene was a must for me ... After all Omkara is her husband ... She has every right and reason to drool.
Om knows that it is very difficult for her to adjust her self in a new home and especially when it is a circus like the oberoi mansion ... He is just giving her reasons to chuckle ...
That's Gauri's natural instinct and antic ... She hates lizards ... But we should thank the lizard because we got a moment ...
Ri in towel was was just continuity ... And after all its important for him to see his wife ...
He has realized that rituals are very important for her and so he gifted her the mangalsutra ...
Par yahaa na zidd hogi na qayamat hogi ... Sirf kahani hogi ... Not at all dramatic ... Its a simple beginning of a journey ...
Thank you tasnim 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: dafla

I MADE THIS FOR YOU..oh my god how can om be too perfect ..I am having this stupid smile on my face after reading this..having read a sanskari and emotional is of urs I thought this may be like that too..but om went to sleep in the couch and I was like what is happening here..then came the dabbang gauri ..gauri rocked and om shocked..even I was shocked seeing her bold.then you went romantic and the mangalsutra part made my romantic heart fly to heaven..soo damn cute..loved it loved it..

Dafla 🤗
Om is Om. YES! And very perfect. DOUBLE YES.
he has realized how important it is for her to have the signs and symbols of a bride ...
Not overtly emotional and sanskaari was time being I just made it a light hearted romance ... Like feel the flare of heat kind of romance because they share a level of understanding and comfort is what I will establish ...
Couch 😆 was just eager to do a new and improved first night couch scene and then Gauri rocked ... Om shocked ...
Gauri is a dabang womaniya ... Having her own share of life experiences she is really mature and she knows what to expect out of a marriage ... RiKara is compatible and romance is a compulsion ... Wrote the sindoor and mangal sutra bit because ... Mujhe yeh show me dekhna hai
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: fariah25

Awww awww awww ! 😳

Arranged marriage turning into love... This is what I alwaays dream of...
And This was LOVELYYY ! BEAUTIFUL ! DREAMY !... everything...😊❤️
I love ur choice of words and the way u frame every sentence pooru..
To take a reader into a beautiful imaginary fantasy land penned down by her is a writer's greatest achievement I believe... and that's exactly what you did here...👏
Loved it.. And will be waiting for the updates..
❤️

Fariah 🤗
Arrange marriage can make a lot of things simpler for RiKara so I thought of taking it that way ...
Thank you fariah ... It takes a lot of effort to put every word in place on my part ...
When you say such beautiful words to me ... I feel like I am an achiever ...
Will update soon
Thank you
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Naina280599

Oh my! This is so lovely. I had a smile on my face while reading this. Loved how they were lost in each other's thoughts. GKS rocked on their first night :D The 'she wants' and 'she would like' lists were lovely! Loved that Om made that mangalsutra for her, aww! In love with this SS already; simple yet so beautiful! Waiting eagerly for the next chapters!

Thank you so much Naina 🤗
They were engaged and now married ... Trying to know each other more ... There are many romantic thoughts ... More to come. GKS is a lady who made a decision and got married ... She is expectedly looking forward to this marriage ... Now that Om wants to gift her something ... What can be better than a mangal sutra? ... Simple yet beautiful ... Exactly it is going to be!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688

Aawww 5hat was so adorable

Loved it

Thank you 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: indigal07

This is such a sweet story Pooru!! I loved how Om could not stop staring at his Gauri in so much awe. Kinda reminded me of the Kaise Mujhe Tum Milgayi Kismat pe aaye naa yakeen song. Loved how he had so much affection for her.

Also loved how Gauri listed all the things she wanted. She's such a strong, inspirational and dabang womaniya! 😃

And that last part where Om MADE her the mangalsutra...hayyyeee This man just keeps raising the bar on what a dream husband is like.

Love it love it! Please continue soon! 😳

Aali 🤗
'Kaise mujhe tum milgayi' that is what he is thinking and thanking his mother ...
You got Gauri absolutely ...
And Omkara ... He is a dream ... He is a husband and trying to be better at it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: minamma

This is such a cute thing

My rikara are adorable cute babies
Awww loved them

Thank you 😳

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