O Saathiya. A RiKara OS ft Rudra (Current track) - Page 3

Originally posted by: dbo_savina

Love has broken her, but love is healing him. How i wish to read more of it. Call me greedy, but can you please update the next part at the earliest? Wonderfully written, Piyu. Can't wait to read more!

Love,

Savina

This is so beautiful..you showed both Omkara and Gauri's pov so perfectly...
Gauri, the dabang chiraiyya was broken beyond repair..only the man whom she loved could do this..she was hurt..she thought love only hurts..but she could never hate the person who gave her so much pain..she knew her heart still belonged to him..
Coming to Omkara..the man has suffered so much in his life that he couldn't dare to trust her blindly...I can connect myself with him..she left him making him realise that what she meant to him...and he was guilty for every word he uttered to insult her...he accepted his fault and decided to rectify them...that's how Omkara is...
Loved the matured Ru you wrote here..yes he isn't baccha anymore..isse padhke mera OmRu shipping ek level up ho gaya.. 😆

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

<font color="#cc0066">Jana jhoothe thhe khwaab sab kuch raakh ho jaane ke baad ...</font>

<font color="#cc0066">Ishq pe ho hi gaya yakeen ... Khud ke khatam jaane ke baad ...</font>

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<font color="#3300ff">Sach mein dhalne lage kisse ... Dil se Judd jaane ke baad ...</font>

<font color="#3300ff">Ishq pe ho hi gaya yakeen ... Ishq ho jaane ke baad.</font>

Abhi muqammal nahi Hua,,
Abhi ek qissa baaki hai.
Dil jab apni pe aayega
WO waala hissa baaki hai!!

Originally posted by: kashishsr

Ok, so you just set OmRu GOALS!!! I want it!I want it!I want it!!!!

Honestly I would have loved Rudra to have this talk with Omkara, because honestly he is the one who saw the connection with ChulKara. I feel like this was genuine advice, whereas what we got in the show was a bit of a guilt trip. I love ShivRi, but Shivaay is (after the older generation - who SUCK at healthy relationships) the worst person to go to for relationship advice... Heck, he didn't even believe in love until recently, and set WORST husband goals at one point - which has much improved recently. I feel like if he had said to Om that I see why you did what you did (because Shivaay has had similar moments), the scene would have been more digestible to me.

Gauri losing 'vishwaas' - this kills me girl. It's so realistic and I feel her heartbreak. The knowledge that by leaving him she has left everything but her self-respect... that is SOOO Ri! The girl we saw in the initial episodes of DBO would have had the same thought process.

Thank you so much for this piece. A lovely read😊.

Hi kashish,
OmRu are goals for me! I love ShivKara too but Omru ke liye special place. ^_^ and yes I missed Ru yesterday! He would have in his own jocular way boosted Om's morale. Anyways, Rikara scenes leave lot to imagine. I was expecting one breakdown moment from Om. But CVs! Its good Kunal is a great actor and his heartbreak was visible when he sinks to his knees and reads the words from the card.. Sigh!

Thanks much for reading it dear.

Hugs!

Originally posted by: minamma

This is beautiful

Hope you are continuing this

Would love to read further

Hey thank you for reading it! :)

I will see whether I get inspired to continue this. :) will defo try. :)

Originally posted by: _era_

OMG piyu this is the best POV shot i have ever read. ...😭👏.

girl u should write more...it's so unfair to not use ur writing talent. ...

Rudy making om realise was very beautifully hearttouching...only Ru can do that imo...

From Love hurts to love heals... a very beautiful Realisation. ...

Absolutely brilliant. ...👍🏼

Thanks for writing this ...Do write more. ...

Hey dear.

Thank you for liking it. :)

Yep OmRu hold a special place in my heart. ❤️

I will definitely try to write more. :)

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Deaaar both POVs were beautifully written
Each word emphasizing on each emotion thez bith went through
Wonderful

Thank you dear for liking it. :)

Originally posted by: rikara94

Piyu darling🤗

You know what boths pov are really well written..loved

Amazing..

While reading 2nd one i cried ...so emotional piyu..

And loved rudra part..he making om realize was superb...

Its very beautiful and awesome realization

I always love omru❤️

"Mai aa raha gauri"

Thanks for sharing this wonderfull idea..

Jyothii,

Meine iss baar bhi tujhe rula Diya? 😭

Thanks for reading and liking it dear.

And i love OmRu too. ❤️

I have loved OMRU .. adored them.. Om is always next to a mother to Ru. And nobody understands om better than Ru. Yeh bhi sahi hai. Ru gets his exact thoughts and he can be the best person to share with in this situation. Omie has to come out of apprehensive state and has to go get her. which he is doing anyways..Awesome work Piyu..

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

This is so beautiful..you showed both Omkara and Gauri's pov so perfectly...
Gauri, the dabang chiraiyya was broken beyond repair..only the man whom she loved could do this..she was hurt..she thought love only hurts..but she could never hate the person who gave her so much pain..she knew her heart still belonged to him..
Coming to Omkara..the man has suffered so much in his life that he couldn't dare to trust her blindly...I can connect myself with him..she left him making him realise that what she meant to him...and he was guilty for every word he uttered to insult her...he accepted his fault and decided to rectify them...that's how Omkara is...
Loved the matured Ru you wrote here..yes he isn't baccha anymore..isse padhke mera OmRu shipping ek level up ho gaya.. 😆

Dear,

Thank you for liking it. I couldn't get that omru scene out of my head. And the shivkara scene they showed had me wanting more. I wanted one emotional scene of Om. Sigh! And yes OmRu are ❤️