O Saathiya. A RiKara OS ft Rudra (Current track)

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kashishsr

@kashishsr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Ok, so you just set OmRu GOALS!!! I want it! I want it! I want it!!!!

Honestly I would have loved Rudra to have this talk with Omkara, because honestly he is the one who saw the connection with ChulKara. I feel like this was genuine advice, whereas what we got in the show was a bit of a guilt trip. I love ShivRi, but Shivaay is (after the older generation - who SUCK at healthy relationships) the worst person to go to for relationship advice... Heck, he didn't even believe in love until recently, and set WORST husband goals at one point - which has much improved recently. I feel like if he had said to Om that I see why you did what you did (because Shivaay has had similar moments), the scene would have been more digestible to me.

Gauri losing 'vishwaas' - this kills me girl. It's so realistic and I feel her heartbreak. The knowledge that by leaving him she has left everything but her self-respect... that is SOOO Ri! The girl we saw in the initial episodes of DBO would have had the same thought process.

Thank you so much for this piece. A lovely read😊.

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mina

@minamma

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

This is beautiful

Hope you are continuing this

Would love to read further

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Era

@Memorable_ERA

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

OMG piyu this is the best POV shot i have ever read. ...😭👏.

girl u should write more...it's so unfair to not use ur writing talent. ...

Rudy making om realise was very beautifully hearttouching...only Ru can do that imo...

From Love hurts to love heals... a very beautiful Realisation. ...

Absolutely brilliant. ...👍🏼

Thanks for writing this ...Do write more. ...

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Priya_Iyer

@Priya_Iyer

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: fariah25
Oo thoughts swapped...
The one who believed that love heals it cures and its the best medicine now thinks that love hurts...💔
The one who was actually wounded by love and had started believing that love hurts now believes that love heals...😊
Lovely it should be and lovely it is !
Ishq bhi kitni nikammi cheez hai... pata hi nahi chalta kab kis roop mein aake sabkuch badalde...❤️

Yes! In my mind it's how it should be. It also will be fun to see Om working hard to gain back gauri's trust. 😳😆

Thank you for reading and leaving such a lovely comment. 😳

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Priya_Iyer

@Priya_Iyer

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_
I am actually crying Pri, let me get hold of myself ... I will comment soon 🤗

Aww Di 😭

Will be Waiting for your comment. 😳

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Priya_Iyer

@Priya_Iyer

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Z.A.A
Priya, loved both parts..but Om's POV made me tear up a little. Damn, it's hard to dislike Om for his actions when he's hurting so much himself, sigh.
Great piece of writing, would love to read more of your work. 👍🏼

Hi sweetie,

Thank you for reading. 😳

Yes it's hard to be mad at him when we know how much he is in pain, himself. Sigh! 😭 But god bless, he gives us so many reasons! 😆

Thank you for reading dear. :)

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Priya_Iyer

@Priya_Iyer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ...Dexterity...
He finally accepted that Love Heals.

Piyu, this was so beautifully penned. Though I would have preferred to read that more intense version also, coz I love such angsty intense and painful stuff.
Thanks for this Piece da !

Check your PM dabba once.

Lasya 😳

Thank you dear for reading and commenting. I love angst and intense stuff too. Awaiting your OS now. 😳