O Saathiya. A RiKara OS ft Rudra (Current track)

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Priya_Iyer

@Priya_Iyer

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey ppl🤗

I am back with an OS on the current track. This one is dedicated to Priya Di who asked me to write a short Drabble on Gauri's POV on the current situation. I went ahead and wrote what Om is going through too. Om's side of the story had become too painful and a tad bit dark. (I myself was bawling my eyes out😭) I had edited it and made it lil less angst-y as the upcoming track is gonna be fun.🥳So here it goes. Scroll downwards for Om's POV. . :-)

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It was dark outside as she looked out of the window without staring at anything in particular.

She felt a detachment with life that she has never felt before. She smiled without humour. Love did this to her. Her faith in love in particular.

After shouldering the relationship alone for months, the weight of it had crushed her leaving her completely broken. She didn't get the one thing she wanted above all. The one thing she yearned above all. His trust.

Unbidden, the last time she saw him came to her mind. Silent tears streamed down her face as she remembered what he thought about her.

"Sachai Ye hai ki tumahara us Arjun ke saath affair chal raha hai."

His words had sliced her heart open, leaving it bruised, shattering it to pieces. Yet, every single broken piece belongs to him, still. After all this time, he still has her everything. He always will.

She had left him taking only her self respect with her, leaving the rest of her for him to have. Her faith and love will always belong with him. She will always belong to him.

And now as she stood there alone, detached and numb, being a feeble shadow of her former self, she couldn't help but accept that Love Hurts.

Edited by Priya_Iyer - 8 years ago

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Priya_Iyer

@Priya_Iyer

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Posted: 8 years ago

Om's POV. I know yesterday we got a ShivKara scene that had me wanting for more to be honest but in my mind I gave that Haq to my adorable Ru. 😆 As I mentioned this is the less painful version of what I had originally written.

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"I want you to love me the way I love you"

"Aaj ke baad Gauri Kumari Sarma ka saaya bhi nahi padega aapke zindagi mein"

"GAURIII""

Omkara woke up screaming her name. He frantically took the three pieces of the card he kept under the pillow and looked at the words that shook his very being. Dear Omkaraji. I love you. Your wife, Gauri. He touched her name reverently. He clutched it to his chest protectively and sobbed.

Rudra hugged his vulnerable brother and allowed him to cry it all out.

Last week, He had found his brother on the road staring vacantly clutching torn pieces of paper and mumbling incoherently. He had to call his eldest brother knowing only he could bring his O back. He shuddered remembering how they had to drag him away from that spot.

"Maine apne haathon se apni khushiyon ko jala daali, Rudra. Main itna badnaseeb kaise ho sakta hoon " he whispered bringing his little brother's concentration back to the present.

"Usne m..mere liye...Maine u..uske saath".. he hiccuped.

Omkara couldn't continue. Loud sobs wracked his body as he remembered what he had said. What she had done. What he had lost.

"Maine usey... Maine Meri Gauri ko humesha ke liye kho diya hai, Rudra."

"Kho diya hai toh phir se dhoond laiyye, O. Find her. For once choose your own happiness. You deserve to be happy, dammit. Khushiyon se bhaagiye mat, bhaiya. Unse dariye mat. Bachpan se dekh raha hoon, aap humesha doosron ki khushiyon mein khush hote aa rahe hain. Par aapki apni khushiyon ka kya, bhaiyya? Kabhi toh unhe chuniye." Rudra cried shaking his brother. He cannot see his brother in this state anymore.

"Kis muhn se jaaon? Kis Haq se?" Omkara replied wiping his tears, feeling disgusted at his own self.

"Ussi Haq se jo Chulbul Bhabhi chahti hai aapse. Give her what she wants and get what you need. " Rudra said in an hopeful tone.

Omkara remained silent.

"O, aapko pata hai hum sab Chulbul Bhabhi ko itna pasand kyun karte hain? Kyunki wo aapko wo saari khushiyaan de sakti hai jo aapko lagta hai aapko kabhi nahi milegi" Rudra continued as his elder brother listened quietly.

"Wo mujhe maaf karegi na? Main... Hum khush rahenge na?" Omkara asked in a small voice. It was filled with so much hope and fear both, that Rudra had to look away to blink back tears.

"Ofcourse O. Aap dono ek doosre ke liye perfect ho." Rudra smiled.

"You are right. " Omkara said, standing up. "Tu sahi keh raha hai. Main ladoonga. Uske ke liye. Khud ke liye. Humaare liye. " he continued. He looked at Rudra and smiled. "Mera bachcha itna badha kab hua?"

"Aap ke liye humesha chhota rahoonga, O." Rudra said emotionally while hugging his brother. "Ab jaaiye aur meri Bhabhi ko wapis laaiye."

Omkara nodded and thanked his little brother.

As he packed his bags a few hours later, he felt a lightness in his heart that he had never felt before. It took years and a tiny petite woman to make him realise that love doesn't have to hurt always. He finally accepted that Love Heals.

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Piyu

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Farri25

@Farri25

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Posted: 8 years ago

Oo thoughts swapped...

The one who believed that love heals it cures and its the best medicine now thinks that love hurts...💔

The one who was actually wounded by love and had started believing that love hurts now believes that love heals...😊

Lovely it should be and lovely it is !

Ishq bhi kitni nikammi cheez hai... pata hi nahi chalta kab kis roop mein aake sabkuch badalde...❤️

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Poorva Chakraborty

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

I am actually crying Pri, let me get hold of myself ... I will comment soon 🤗

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Savina

@Savinaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

Love has broken her, but love is healing him. How i wish to read more of it. Call me greedy, but can you please update the next part at the earliest? Wonderfully written, Piyu. Can't wait to read more!

Love,

Savina

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Z.A.A

@Z.A.A

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Priya, loved both parts..but Om's POV made me tear up a little. Damn, it's hard to dislike Om for his actions when he's hurting so much himself, sigh.

Great piece of writing, would love to read more of your work. 👍🏼

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Lasya

@Dexterity

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Posted: 8 years ago

He finally accepted that Love Heals.

Piyu, this was so beautifully penned. Though I would have preferred to read that more intense version also, coz I love such angsty intense and painful stuff.

Thanks for this Piece da !

Check your PM dabba once.

Edited by ...Dexterity... - 8 years ago

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

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Posted: 8 years ago

I liked it was Rudra consoling Omkara

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: fariah25
Oo thoughts swapped...
The one who believed that love heals it cures and its the best medicine now thinks that love hurts...💔
The one who was actually wounded by love and had started believing that love hurts now believes that love heals...😊
Lovely it should be and lovely it is !
Ishq bhi kitni nikammi cheez hai... pata hi nahi chalta kab kis roop mein aake sabkuch badalde...❤️

Jana jhoothe thhe khwaab sab kuch raakh ho jaane ke baad ...

Ishq pe ho hi gaya yakeen ... Khud ke khatam jaane ke baad ...

Sach mein dhalne lage kisse ... Dil se Judd jaane ke baad ...

Ishq pe ho hi gaya yakeen ... Ishq ho jaane ke baad.

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Farri25

@Farri25

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

Jana jhoothe thhe khwaab sab kuch raakh ho jaane ke baad ...
Ishq pe ho hi gaya yakeen ... Khud ke khatam jaane ke baad ...

Sach mein dhalne lage kisse ... Dil se Judd jaane ke baad ...
Ishq pe ho hi gaya yakeen ... Ishq ho jaane ke baad.

Waah ! Great ! 😊👍🏼

Shukr hai ke hua yakeen ishq pe aakhir, ishq ho jaane ke baad...

Dil se hamare dua hai nikli, mohobbat inki rahe sada aabaad...

❤️