RiKara FS - Jo Na Keh Sake Hum Part 5 on Pg 15 (30/09) Complete

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#111

Awesome ending.

Loved it.

Very beautifully written.

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#112

Wohooo finally finallyy #muhkholomkara mission pura hua😆

Finally he expressed his feelings through words and she pinched herself amazing yarrr ..woh mai nai kiya is bar kara ne

And their conversation after expressing feelings was lovely..very well written..their emotions; feelings; expression and actions..i can imagine the whole scenario you did great job👍🏼 hayee finally after rain sequence hug mila..man ko shanti type

Its not just ending..its begnning..their journey of love started here in true manner❤️

And and and the one part made me laugh is dobara shadi krna chata hoon and rudy bhaiyya pagal ho jayenge..made me laugh coz after watching sal ki sab se badi shadi..darr lgta hai ab mrg se🤣 sach mein badi shadi thi almost two ya two and half month tak chali yeh shadi with ajeebo greeb clothes🤢

*sigh* amazing dear..i enjoyed a lot

Thank you so much for sharing this idea with us

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mina

@minamma

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#113

This is such an awww end

Would you write an epilogue..??

Please ehsaan hoga tumhara lolzz

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guy3

@guy3

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#114

Really nice. Wish you could provide an index on the first page

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#115

Genie 🤗 .. so so good to have ya back .. was missing ya .. n your RiKara .. makes me believ that my faves aren't misplaced .. Navratris kept me a little busy so couldn't read earlier .. but thanks so much for this story .. story of addressal.. majorly needed .. one meaningful conversation.. Thanks for this ..

Loved the way you explored the dynamics between RiKara.. everything fits in like a puzzle even Omkaras inability to give words to his feels or Gauris understanding of his situation.. n the Omkara misses Gauri makes me go aweee.. how cute is this .. absence does make the heart grow fonder n that's what happens as omkie lands in Bareilly n then what happens is what I want in the show.. a rehash of RiKaras golden period .. not that Gauri needs saving but Omkara standing like a shield in front of her is what I wanna see .. show se Bhagwan bachaye so thanks truckload for this .. n the convo with Omkara pushed to the brink of going crazy n with Gauri pushing just the right buttons is really emotional to read .. n then finally the barrage breaks lose .. n feelings come pouring .. n end in a picture perfect two wrapped in a bubble of cosy n warmth .. n if this wasn't enough .. you drop the love question too.. all that I wanna see again .. yes ... love is definitely gonna come knocking .. till then it's the two of them ready to take this journey of a lifetime.. what wouldn't I give to read their confession when love comes knocking.. hehe .. but for now this is just amazing.. thanks dearie for writing on RiKara :))

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Roaiba

@roaiba

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: writergenie17

I think I need some ice tea now... cuz I'm fangirling at being fangirled at... does that make sense?! No... business as usual I guess.😆

Roaiba yaar... main to aap ki fan ban gayi hoon.😃

I can't tell you how much it means to me that you like my writing. I am pretty sure I love y'all too!❤️

You really are something else and from your comments I too can tell that you are a beautiful and special person. Since i know you're not married, I can only wish that you get someone in your life who appreciates just how special you are. And you're right... I do love the hubs for all the right reasons.☺️

Thanks for all your love and support... I'm glad you're loving the story so far. The last chapter should be up soon so stay tuned!

Oh and PM me a story request... I would love to write something exclusively for you my super special friend! Can't promise to have it out in time but I would definitely like to write something for you.

Lotsa luv and hugs...

Genie

Arre Genie.. aap ne toh phir se iss chirayya ko blush karwa diya😳 You make so much sense lol this is how I react when someone compliments me even a little bit haha😆 And now you've got me fangirling and smiling like crazy because a) you just said ki aap meri fan ban gayi, I mean seriously me? Eeeks I think I need the whole jug of iced tea now☺️and b) because the last part was so... dreamy. Is that the right word? I don't know but it was A-MA-ZING!!!! Aap ho hi itni achhi writer👏 I'm on seventh heaven after reading it seriously! And haan, phirse sharma rahi hoon, apne future hubby ke baare mein soch ke.. my face is hurting from smiling too much, I swear I look like the joker rn😆🤣aur aap toh bare hi dildaar nikle, I would be honored to have you write a story for me😭 I'll let you know if I want something special. Huggies❤️

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Aarathi krishnan

@Aarathi85

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#117

What an update...fantastic writing...romantic chapter...nice description og gauri and om in an emotional yet understanding state...thanks a lit dear gor such wonderful short stories...brilliant one..

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asrkasr

@asrkasr

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#118

This was like a dream,with such descriptive writing and such actors playing rikara its so easy to visualise all this happening.Rikara has such huge potential and I loved how in this FS you have taken the
Unge to dive into Omkara's mind and heart and made him realise how important gauri is to him.True soulmates they are who have just started their discovery of their true feelings.

You seem to be staying true to your pen name by weaving such tales abt rikara.Can you pen down something starting from the track when gauri started taking her classes.Want to see a restless Omkara,that jealousy and finally claimung gauri as his only.That intensity and angst,if shrenal did this they would slay such scenes.But anyways its said there is no true love without a little jealousy,would love to read your take on this.

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Z.A.A

@Z.A.A

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#119

Hey, Genie!

Hope you're well and that life is back to normal (as normal as it can be ;))..you're truly living up to your name. This FS is all I needed to see on the show, but the writers have other plans apparently, that involve driving the audience away from the show, arghhh. The show has become such a let down, I don't even want to talk about it, sigh.

You have a way with words and this story is beautifully written. In my head, I have replaced what happened/is happening on the show with this.The dialogs deserve a special mention-they were amazing-made me cry!

Good luck with your Thesis defense, I am sure you'll ace it 👍🏼

P.S: Can you please pass on some of your creativity to the un-imaginative CVs 🤢