RiKara FS - Jo Na Keh Sake Hum Part 5 on Pg 15 (30/09) Complete - Page 14

Originally posted by: guy3

Really nice. Wish you could provide an index on the first page

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me

Genie 🤗 .. so so good to have ya back .. was missing ya .. n your RiKara .. makes me believ that my faves aren't misplaced .. Navratris kept me a little busy so couldn't read earlier .. but thanks so much for this story .. story of addressal.. majorly needed .. one meaningful conversation.. Thanks for this ..


Loved the way you explored the dynamics between RiKara.. everything fits in like a puzzle even Omkaras inability to give words to his feels or Gauris understanding of his situation.. n the Omkara misses Gauri makes me go aweee.. how cute is this .. absence does make the heart grow fonder n that's what happens as omkie lands in Bareilly n then what happens is what I want in the show.. a rehash of RiKaras golden period .. not that Gauri needs saving but Omkara standing like a shield in front of her is what I wanna see .. show se Bhagwan bachaye so thanks truckload for this .. n the convo with Omkara pushed to the brink of going crazy n with Gauri pushing just the right buttons is really emotional to read .. n then finally the barrage breaks lose .. n feelings come pouring .. n end in a picture perfect two wrapped in a bubble of cosy n warmth .. n if this wasn't enough .. you drop the love question too.. all that I wanna see again .. yes ... love is definitely gonna come knocking .. till then it's the two of them ready to take this journey of a lifetime.. what wouldn't I give to read their confession when love comes knocking.. hehe .. but for now this is just amazing.. thanks dearie for writing on RiKara :))

Originally posted by: roaiba

Arre Genie.. aap ne toh phir se iss chirayya ko blush karwa diya😳 You make so much sense lol this is how I react when someone compliments me even a little bit haha😆 And now you've got me fangirling and smiling like crazy because a) you just said ki aap meri fan ban gayi, I mean seriously me? Eeeks I think I need the whole jug of iced tea now☺️and b) because the last part was so... dreamy. Is that the right word? I don't know but it was A-MA-ZING!!!! Aap ho hi itni achhi writer👏 I'm on seventh heaven after reading it seriously! And haan, phirse sharma rahi hoon, apne future hubby ke baare mein soch ke.. my face is hurting from smiling too much, I swear I look like the joker rn😆🤣aur aap toh bare hi dildaar nikle, I would be honored to have you write a story for me😭 I'll let you know if I want something special. Huggies❤️

Originally posted by: Aarathi85

What an update...fantastic writing...romantic chapter...nice description og gauri and om in an emotional yet understanding state...thanks a lit dear gor such wonderful short stories...brilliant one..

Originally posted by: asrkasr

This was like a dream,with such descriptive writing and such actors playing rikara its so easy to visualise all this happening.Rikara has such huge potential and I loved how in this FS you have taken the
Unge to dive into Omkara's mind and heart and made him realise how important gauri is to him.True soulmates they are who have just started their discovery of their true feelings.

You seem to be staying true to your pen name by weaving such tales abt rikara.Can you pen down something starting from the track when gauri started taking her classes.Want to see a restless Omkara,that jealousy and finally claimung gauri as his only.That intensity and angst,if shrenal did this they would slay such scenes.But anyways its said there is no true love without a little jealousy,would love to read your take on this.

Originally posted by: Z.A.A

Hey, Genie!

Hope you're well and that life is back to normal (as normal as it can be ;))..you're truly living up to your name. This FS is all I needed to see on the show, but the writers have other plans apparently, that involve driving the audience away from the show, arghhh. The show has become such a let down, I don't even want to talk about it, sigh.

You have a way with words and this story is beautifully written. In my head, I have replaced what happened/is happening on the show with this.The dialogs deserve a special mention-they were amazing-made me cry!

Good luck with your Thesis defense, I am sure you'll ace it 👍🏼

P.S: Can you please pass on some of your creativity to the un-imaginative CVs 🤢

Originally posted by: perFICtionist.

whatte story! the genie strikes yet again! sooo beautiful and complete! you have put in just the right amount of pain, separation, understandings, misunderstandings, dabangRi, possessivekara, angrykara, hurtRi, understanding dreamy rikara and finally love!

Incredible genie! you have outdone yourself here at so many levels! the ending was just perfect! it didnt promise a happily ever after but a resolve that come what may they have each other!👏❤️