RiKara FS - Jo Na Keh Sake Hum Part 5 on Pg 15 (30/09) Complete

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Genie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: ahista
The perfect ending to a perfect story. Something so beautiful that I don't want it to finish. Loved their convo.

Hi! Thanks for the lovely comment yaar...

Hope to see you around on other stories!

p.s. May I know your name?

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Posted: 7 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: fariah25
Was lost in rikara dreamland...
It was sooo beautiful...
The hug in this one reminded me of the beeaautiful rikara rain hug... lovely.. passionate.. romantic.. it was everything !
Love everything that you write !
Thank you for this one..
Plz keep writing !
❤️

Ooh... meri writing ne aap ko humare hero Atif ki yaad dilaa di? Haaye... that's like the best compliment you could've given me luv.

And I'm so excited ki poocho hi mat...bhale hi humare RiKara ki kahaani is going to sh*t and IPK3 doob raha hai magar our Atif is coming back!

Thanks for the lovely comment and compliment!

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Genie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Naina280599
Such a lovely update! Won't call it an end as their journey just started. This is beautiful, Genie. Totally worth the wait. I loved this so much. I'm speechless rn, I don't have much words to say, neither will they do any justice to this amazing piece of writing of yours! The much needed hug, full of emotions was so beautiful! ❤️ I love their conversation specially when he finally confessed during his frustration and she pinched herself; that was so cute. You added that "zindagi ke safar main humsafar ho tum..." that was like an icing on a cake. I love this chapter so much!! Waiting eagerly for more of such wonderful Rikara stories from your side. A big hug to you for being an awesome writer 🤗

Naina oh Naina! 🤗

Thanks for being such a lovely friend and staunch supporter!

I love the amount of enthusiasm you have toward the ship and pretty much every story I post here. I'm glad I can entertain you and hope I am able to continue to do so.

Now that this one is done, I've started another FS called Humari Doosri Shaadi which will be a certified fluff-fest and a much needed chance to regroup since the show is going to the dogs... and not the DKD, which would actually be an awesome development!

I'm glad you loved this story so much... do check out the new one when you get a chance. Or you might've already read it and commented by now... I'm a li'l behind on things and catching up.

A big hug right back to you for being such an awesome friend and reader!

Lotsa luv!

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Genie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid
wonderful update

Thanks buddy!

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Genie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
What a perfect ending..!! I wanted to read more and more...the way a frustrated Kara expressed his feelings and a bewildered Ri pinched herself was really adorable..I don't know how to describe those moments in words...it wasn't love..but there was a promise of togetherness...their journey towards love just started and "Ayega zid pe toh qayamaat hogi..yeh ishq abhi masoom" perfectly suited the situation...thanks for writing this amazing piece on RiKara and sharing with us...can't wait to read more of your beautiful writings...till then take care of yourself..jhappies on the way...

Tasnim yaara...

With the way the show's regressing, I think all of us need your jhappies. Ration karlo kyunki aage aane waale kuch dinon ke liye main tumhare jhappies ke sahaare hi RiKara land mein jeene waali hoon.

I'm super glad you liked the end of this story. I labored over some decisions on the chapter and I'm happy they worked out well. Adding one of my fav lines from the entire show was a last minute decision... but it just felt right to put it in.

Having them recognize their feelings as love would be way too soon and very bollywood cliche considering not two days previously, they were having troubles enough to separate from each other, all due to lack of communication. So yeah... it's something, something special indeed but not quite the forever after sort of love yet. It might never become something truly legendary... but its theirs and its special enough to them... and us, I guess.

Babbling aside, I'm excited that my other FS is shaping up reasonably well, Atif is back and Shrenu is well again.

Hope to see you around on other stories! Hang in there!

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Genie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: ipkknd-fan
That was amazing
loved how it all ended and how they so perfectly conveyed their feelings

Thanks for the lovely comment hun

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Genie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: music1
Just loved loved the story and the ending was just the perfect cherry on the icing!!

Oh... that's sweet!

Thanks for the lovely comment... Glad you liked the story!

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Genie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: arshifansiri
Awesome ending.
Loved it.
Very beautifully written.

Thanks Siri!

I'm glad you liked the story and the ending...

Hope to see you around on other stories!

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Genie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: rikara94
Wohooo finally finallyy #muhkholomkara mission pura hua😆
Finally he expressed his feelings through words and she pinched herself amazing yarrr ..woh mai nai kiya is bar kara ne
And their conversation after expressing feelings was lovely..very well written..their emotions; feelings; expression and actions..i can imagine the whole scenario you did great job👍🏼 hayee finally after rain sequence hug mila..man ko shanti type
Its not just ending..its begnning..their journey of love started here in true manner❤️
And and and the one part made me laugh is dobara shadi krna chata hoon and rudy bhaiyya pagal ho jayenge..made me laugh coz after watching sal ki sab se badi shadi..darr lgta hai ab mrg se🤣 sach mein badi shadi thi almost two ya two and half month tak chali yeh shadi with ajeebo greeb clothes🤢
*sigh* amazing dear..i enjoyed a lot
Thank you so much for sharing this idea with us

Yahaan par #MuhKholoOmkara khatam nahin hua ki show mein #MuhBandKaroOmkara shuru kar dena padega. Haayeee... Kya ho raha hai show pe! 🤢 Jitne bhi RiKara fans hain, wo to pakka chhod ke jaane waale hain, saath mein aadhe se zyaada ShivIka fans ko bhi lekar jaayenge lagta hai.

Shaadi ka itna build up aur Shaadi hui nahin ki hum sab ki tain tain phish kara di! 😡

I'm glad you liked the story and it's ending so much. Shaadi ke naam se darr to lag raha hai ab magar kya karein, mere dimaag mein ideas aate hi aise hain. Jab show mein kuch nahin hota to mujhe dheron ideas aate hain... I am frankly very excited about writing HDS... so check it out when you have a chance.

Hope to see you around on other stories!