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Thank you Ridhima😊
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Originally posted by: Captainswan1

Hi.
Back again with my longer review

Chapter1:
I just loved this chapter so much. I loved reading Khannas pov and Shivika.
Aww, Shivaay is so worried about Anika. He had to go to the Railway station. Anika thinking that Shivaay hates her when he doesnt . All she can think about is Shivaay. This was a brilliant chapter. I loved reading it all from start to finish. I couldn't believe you left it there.

I am glad you liked Khanna's POV. Haha..


Chapter 2a:
Aww, Shivaay. I loved reading his pov. I just want to give him a hug.. He has feelings for Anika.
He just couldn't help himself, when he saw her like that.

Aww...
Poor man he is a complete mess.


2b:
The ending, Shivaay pleading to Anika to get up. Aw. He has a plan to stay away from her but it doesn't look like it will work.
Anika waking up - i loved reading her pov.
I love reading all the different pov.

I am so happy to know that you loved it. I was doubtful of writing different POVs in a single chapter. What if it disrupt the flow of reading? What if it confuse the readers?

2C:
Wow, what a update. What a chapter.
Shivaay is angry at Anika for using his own words back at him. The way Shivaay gave Anika the medicine, Anika being stubborn. It was a brilliant chapter. I loved Anika.

😳

3a:
Dinally, we are getting to know what happened before Anika left.
Shivaay made a mistake and now he is taking it all on Anika. He blames her because she is always on his mind when he should be focused on his business.
Shivaay.. Noo. He destroyed the proof.

He didn't destroy the proof. It is safe inside the memory card.😉

3b:
Awesome chapter. I loved the fight.
Goo Anika.
When Shivaay will find out the truth about Tia, I hope Anika just ignores him. Anika should just let him be, let him make his own mistakes, don't bother. Let him get married to Tia.
I love OmRu.

That's exactly what she is going to do. She tried her best and he didn't let her speak or show him what she wanted to.

4a:
I wonder if OmRu will find out about Shivaay and Anika being together.
I just love reading Khannas pov.

No they won't.

4b:
Aww, they both have feelings for each other, this attraction. Brilliant chapter.

😳

4C:
I love reading their fights.
They should just share the room, bed. Easy option. lol.
I really wanted Anika to blurt it out. She shouldn't have stopped

Haha... Actually I wrote something else first and then edited it the next morning... She is not someone who will hide such a thing. She is someone who will confront him.. But she herself have no idea why she didn't say that. She enjoys that fear in his eyes. May be she will get an even better oppurtunity and situation in the future to reveal it.😳

5A:
What a dream.
Shivaay is jealous.

😳

5b:
I just loved that Shivaay couldn't leave her. I know he left her again but he came back first. He couldn't do it.. She was on his mind, he went to her again. It would have been great if Anika was fake sleeping again.

That man is in love with her madly.
Haha.. What if she woke up when he entered the room or she sensed him beside her😉 You will get flash backs of their secrete vacation in the future.

6a:
Jealous Shivaay. Aww Anika knows.
Hope Dakshs plan fails.



All catched up.
I love reading all the different povs. I can't wait to read more.

Sarah
xoxo


Thank you so much Sarah🤗

I am so happy that you loved my wild cat and his wedding planner. Catching up with all the updates and giving reviews for every previous chapters, I am overwhelmed. It really means a lot.😳

If you want regular PMs buddy me.

Love
Krishna
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow Krish! You brought back all the old memories making me want the next chapter right now!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank u for taking us back in time. Glad that your shivay can use logic and probably can figure out who planned this all before the major misunderstanding creeps up. Loved how wonderfully you described her state of shock
Excitedaboutthe next part.
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Posted: 7 years ago
U made me relive those magical moments
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Posted: 7 years ago
Update soon... This was amazing
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome update yar
Totally brought me back to the beautiful memories of IB... and here shivaay is using his logic and that credits goes to you
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Posted: 7 years ago
This is amazing kichu...

Oh how I miss those days...Shivika's first hug and all...
You brought each and every one of those beautiful memories back...

Daksh as usual is a creep...My heart went out to Poor Anni...
Shivaay thinking rationally and trying to figure it out...

Can't wait for the next update dear...
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Posted: 7 years ago
This really brings back memories of those wonderful episodes of IB where Anika and Shivaay's story was just starting.
Loved the update! Plz plz continue soon!

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