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Piyali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
rikara drabbles thread.great idea.omkara can't express his emotions directly. so a letter was the better idea to express it.loved om saying that he hated her thinking that he had the right to do it as she loved him and she didn't react thinking that she has no right. .but now he is giving her that right as he loves her.beautiful confession.but wish it had not ended.feel like reading rikara confrontation post letter reading

Thanks a lot for such a sweet review Jasmine dear...I am really happy you liked it...Sorry for ending but Drabble na so had to be short...😃

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Piyali

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Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
title is beautiful.loved his concern for her.she left the wedding place knowing that her friend too loved her.her sacrifice shows her pure heart.loved his question whether he too loves her.it's a question which I also had..whom does the bride groom love...but she doesn't know.you know...I really feel that it should have continued.I am restless to know more about them...their life and emotions

Aww...I am sorry dear but drabble na...it had to say a lot in few words...but you can imagine the rest in your own way if you wish...Thanks a lot for such a sweet comment...😊

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Piyali

@.Piyali..

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
a peaceful sweet os. before leaving omkara finding her and proposing her.beautiful. gauri running towards him as she saw him and embrace was sweet.so cute of him to understand her duties towards nation and willing to wait for her happily.loved it a lot

Thanks alot jasmine...happy you liked it..