My RiKara Drabbles-#13-The blessing I received-Page 25 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful drabbles⭐️
Thanks for pm
Thanks a lot dear, happy you liked them...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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#4-Guariya Re !!!

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Holi:

"Today, I'll show Gauri who Omkara is..."Omkara smiled to himself as he saw Rudra walking towards him.

"Rudra Listen, I need your help..."

"Bhabhi Ko pareshan karne ke liye, Haan" Rudra nudged Om saying this while Omkara passed him a glare. Rudra looked towards him lowering his eyes, he surrendered.

"Dekh, Gauri ko Yahan La...I have placed a bucket of water on the top, as I'll pull the rope..."

"Bhabhi will drench, Right... but Bhaiyaa, if I go, won't Bhabhi be doubtful, I think you should go to her and bring her here yourself, she'll not doubt..."Rudra cut Omkara in the middle while Omkara stared at him smiling, he liked the Idea.

Omkara moved towards the garden where Gauri was , smiling, he was loving his plan, he was at the door now from where he could easily see Gauri smiling and enjoying with Annika, she didn't know about his presence.

"Gau..."Omkara stopped in his words as a bucketful of water made its way on him from somewhere top, his long open hairs drenching completely. Omkara was flabbergasted but brought back to reality as he heard RuRiKa laugh.

Gauri walked to him smiling as she stopped just next to him.

"Hum do Kadam agge hi Rahenge..."She walked past him and gave a Hi-Fi to Rudra standing behind, all three of them were still laughing.

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A/N: So a bit lively, I don't know if it was good, I think not because I am very bad in humour, rest on your Reviews.

Edited by .Piyali.. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
i know its a drabble. but i felt that its not complete.it was a lovely story.so craving for more.

Originally posted by: .Piyali..


Aww...I am sorry dear but drabble na...it had to say a lot in few words...but you can imagine the rest in your own way if you wish...Thanks a lot for such a sweet comment...😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
First drabble letter was superb
Letter was very well written
Superb confession.

Another one diamond. Superb again
Guari tan away coz her bestie loved d guy she was marrying... She dint know whether he loved her or her frnd... But for her frnd she ran away.. so innocent & pure she is
Superb...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Haye d thrid one was even superb...
Gauri wants to serve d country
Om supporting her...
Liked it very much
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Haha... Om planned to drench guari in water
But rudi Gauri back fire his plan on him...
It was superb ..😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

i know its a drabble. but i felt that its not complete.it was a lovely story.so craving for more.


Oh Jasmine, That story was just to show the pure heart of Gauri, I would have turned it into an OS as well for you but courtesy my exams I can't...infact I am going on a break from 22 August till 22 September, If you wish soo much I'll convert it into an OS after coming, I am not sure about how I'll continue it but will try for sure...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

First drabble letter was superb

Letter was very well written
Superb confession.

Another one diamond. Superb again
Guari tan away coz her bestie loved d guy she was marrying... She dint know whether he loved her or her frnd... But for her frnd she ran away.. so innocent & pure she is
Superb...


Thanks alot dii, I am very happy seeing you give long comments...I am happy you liked them both...😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Haye d thrid one was even superb...

Gauri wants to serve d country
Om supporting her...
Liked it very much
Thanks 4 pm


Thanks alot dii, really happy you liked it..😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Haha... Om planned to drench guari in water

But rudi Gauri back fire his plan on him...
It was superb ..😆


Thanks alot di, happy I could make you laugh..😃

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