My RiKara Drabbles-#13-The blessing I received-Page 25

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My RiKara Drabbles
Index

#1-The Letter-This Post
#2-The Diamond Shines-Next Post
#3- Promise to Wait-Page 2
#4-Guariya Re !!!-Page 5
#5-The Confession-Page 7
#6-In Her Arms-Page 9
#7-What Is Love?- Page 10
#8-Love In Bus-Page 15
#9-Measuring Love-Page 16
#10-Dil Wali Gali-Page 18
#11-Adoring Her...-Page 21
#12-His First Lie-Page 23

#13-The blessing I received-Page 25


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#1-The Letter

Gauri glanced at the piece of paper kept on the side table...open, she moved towards it as she picked it up starting to read it.

"Gauri...I know I hurt you a lot, a lot, might be I gave you so much pain that no one can heal, not even time, I hurt you at the time you needed me the most, I pushed you away from me at the time you needed someone's succour the most, I hated you without any reason at the time you loved me , you needed my love the most, I never hated anyone as much as I hated you, maybe because I knew I had the right, the right to hate you because you, you loved me...You never retaliated because you thought you didn't have the right, you didn't because you thought I didn't love you but today, I wish to give you that right, that right to hate me, hate me as much as you wish, get angry on me as much as you want because I...I Love You..."

Gauri couldn't say anything, she just smiled, she kept smiling as tears took their way out of her eyes, they were of happiness.

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A/N:I hadn't written anything on RiKara since long so wrote it, I knows its not good but still a random try with no expectations, Will write more in future if I get ideas, Its not exactly a Drabble, not 100 words but still short so titled it Drabble.

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#2-The Diamond Shines

I looked towards her from the windowpane, sitting on a bench in front of my house, wearing a Bridal Lehenga. She was crying as rain drops were falling on her fragile body, something about her dragged me towards her, I went out and sat on the bench, next to her.

"Why are you crying?"

"Because my marriage was fixed with the guy whom I loved but I ran from my house on my wedding day...My parents would be hurt..."

" Then why you ran away?"I looked at her as she was still crying.

"Because I got to know that my best friend also loved him..."

"So?" I looked at her confused.

"So how could I snatch her Love?" Turning, she looked towards me for the first time.

"Did the guy also Love her?"

"I don't know..." She was still crying, I was losing my heart, my soul...in fact each cell of my body to her.

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A/N:Ok, I know I am back very soon but this Idea came and struck to my mind so penned it, its some 150 words so not a drabble again but short. I hope you liked it.

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Awesome drabbles.
Do continue and write more
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Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome drabbles.

Do continue and write more


Thanks dear...
Will do continue if I get more Ideas..😊
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Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Nice work

Would.love.to read.more
Update soon


Thanks dear,
Will write more if I get new Ideas...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome drables yar...
plz continue to write yar...
it was shot and sweet
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Thanks alot for the appreciation dear...😊
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Awesome drables yar...

plz continue to write yar...
it was shot and sweet


Thanks dear...
Got 2 more ideas already...😉
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#3- Promise to Wait


Omkara moved around the crowded station as he tried to search someone. His eyes landed on a girl, she was staring at him...smiling.

"Gauri..."

"Omkara..."Gauri ran towards Omkara hugging him tightly.

Still embraced into each other, Omkara asked, "I heard you excelled in your training Major Gauri...Now we can marry, Right?"

Gauri nodded lowering her eyelashes, they both still hugging.

"But..."Gauri raised her eyes to look into his eyes, she couldn't continue.

Alfaz The Kam Jahan Par...
Ankhon Ne
Baat Kar Li Wahan Par.

Omkara held her chin, "Gauri...Don't worry, I know your duty is most important for you, it is for me too because it is for our nation, for our India...I will wait for you to come back every month, it will be exciting by the way..." Gauri hugged him more tightly resting her head on his chest feeling his warmth, Omkara smiled.

He knew he lived in her Prayers, she in his Art.

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A/N: So this one dedicated to Our Nation, Our Army Officers, I got inspired to write this from an Advertisement, By the way the last line is derived from the poster of an old Movie 'Ek Vivah Aisa Bhi' which I happened to see a few days ago, I liked the line a lot so used it here with a modification...Hope you all liked it.
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read all three parts dear... Very nice.. And the last one is soo emotional... Jo aajkal epi mei nahi mil raha tha... After reading this I m happy.. Thank you yar...luv u piyu.. Keep writing...

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