My RiKara Drabbles-#13-The blessing I received-Page 25 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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#5-The Confession

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"So marriage today, I think you are happy..."Gauri said staring deep into Omkara's eyes, They were sitting in her room, Gauri dressed up as a bride.

Omkara didn't reply, just nodded.

"Gauri..." Came the voice of Gauri's mother as she got up in an instant, leaving Omkara's hand that was in her hand, she started walking out while Omkara stared...heartbroken.

"Gauri..."Omkara called still sitting.

Gauri turned to look at him, "Gauri, I Love you..."Omkara was still sitting.

He wanted to say more but before he could, Gauri's hand was on his cheeks, slapping him.

"I am sorry Gauri, I know you don't Love me but I do from the time I saw you, today on your marriage, I couldn't pretend anymore to be your bestfriend...I might not be a well-established man but still, I do have a right to love and I...I Love you..."

"Who said I don't Love you...this slap was because you weren't faster in your confession..."Gauri said as she hugged Omkara tightly, tears falling from her eyes, Omkara stared at the wall in front him, smiling, he wanted the moment to stop...they wanted the moment to stop.

Iss lamhe ko rok doon
Yaa main khud ko is mein jhonk doon
Kya karun.. kya karun.. kya karun...


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A/N: So how was it? I got this idea from my first one shot on RiKara and the song is one of my favourite's...By the way, now its on your views, I have 1 more idea for now buts it is also emotional one so do you want to read it?? Out of the 5 posted till now 4 were emotional so asking it, Do reply.



Edited by .Piyali.. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Of course piyali bring it out. I love rikara being emotional...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Nice drabbles dear
Loved it!!
I love Rikara being emotional
:))
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
awesome update yar
Totally loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
wow awesome drabble loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Awesome drabble loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Fantastic brabble 👏⭐️
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Awww...emotional ...lovely... Superb epi piyu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
gauriyare..title was beautiful. naughty omkara wants to French gauri.but he himself got drenched.loved gauri saying that she is 2 steps ahead of him.rudra too helped her in her plan.guess he is the one who informed her of om's plan.cool.love rudra gauri brother in law Sister in law Jodi in the show as well as in this story
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
rikara as best friends. wow.on her wedding day how peacefully omkara confessed his hidden love and gauri slapped him for not telling this earlier.loved the confession and hug of rikara.
you can write anything as far as its on rikara

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