Shivika TS - What The Farak (Ragini Track) Final Shot, Pg 13; Sept 8th - Page 8

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Superb update

Ragini wondering what did pinky do & how can a mother do such a thing

Ponky was nice name...

Ragini could now see Pinky's facade

Shivaay watched d video of pinky blackmailing Anika & so he believed ragini

But he dint once realised that Anika had once pointed out at pinky

& He himself had lashed out at her reminding her that she is orphan...

Continue soon

Want to know d plan...

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. You have good memory. I was definitely going to draw on that. You have a good eye. Look forward to the update!

Originally posted by: CrzyPulviophile

I'm just loving it.
Shivaay needs to be whacked once in a while by Ragini.
Immature baby boy he is.
Everything is damn perfect.

Daisy

Thank you! I actually had a line where Ragini says that she'd smack Shivaay so hard that his brain would finally start working again. 😉

Read both parts and loved it wish Ragini was like this in the show as well I would have loved her for sure and Shivaay and Ragini making Anika jealous no Shivaay did that with Tia too to make Anika jealous he himself can't take jealousy well and yet he has no quelms in hurting Anika that way. He should not do things to Anika which he won't like/tolerate it done to him and his family members

Originally posted by: ithihaas

Totally loved it.

N(R)agini with her somewhat wierd antics and your characterization would have been great to watch on screen.

Little jealousy from Annika is no harm. But you would leave that to you as a writer knows the best what suits the characters being written or explored.

Alrighty, thank you so much! Glad you liked Ragini. Thank you for feedback!

Awesome.

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

love it

make anika jealous lol

Thank you! We'll have to see.

Originally posted by: bworm

Nice update.

Still not liking Ragini, you have done a good job with her. Unfortunately, the show has sown seeds that are hard to get rid of her.

If possible please no jealousy .no rags shiv scenes. I liked the fact that ragini called him out on it. Showin the mirror to rhem, their idiotic games us fine. Hurting each other in jealousy .. deliberate is not needed.. too childish.

Anika being jealous if b ragini is understandable. But to deliberately create scenarios ..unpalatable.

Atleast, sso realizes that his mom is responsible for the whole thing.

Give ragini her Siddharth...so we can be happy for her too.

Thank you. I understand your point. My intention was never to be greviously making Annika jealous. The scenes would be light. To bring Ragini her Siddharth it's not easy. It would be too random, but very possible. I do have that plan for Ragini. Thank you for your feedback, it's much appreciated.

I wish Ragini was like this in the show! Like, why in the show does it ALWAYS look like Shivaay is actually incapable of making any real friends (which makes no sense, he's literally the most famous business man in India, you would think he has actual, legitimate friends)? There was Tia, then Daksh, and now Ragini. Mallika was Shivaay's one true friend, and she was in the show for literally just a week, and it was only because she was having a major breakdown about her love life. Someone seriously needs to show this track to the writers, because it feels like Shivaay is being shunned for having psychopathic, lying friends in every track this show takes.

Originally posted by: DarkPhoenix93

Love it! Wish we had gotten this nagini!

Thank you! Yes, totally wish Ragini was this way. But I guess anything for drama.

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

love this take on Ragini, keep it up

Thank you! I'm glad you love it.