Shivika TS - What The Farak (Ragini Track) Final Shot, Pg 13; Sept 8th - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
Hello Jesal!
Well I don't know How I didn't came upon this story in the past but now I'm glad that I got to read this fic which is just unique in it's own way. To be true I always wanted to see something like this on the show I really wanted ragini to be just like mallika who had been a lovely frnd of shivaay and had adviced him for his best. Please don't be offended If I had said something wrong because I'm frustaded to see why everyone came in between them need to be physcho? they can be like what mallika was. I'm totally pissed off by this. Ragini would have gotten a better character then this and I think for a moment that she would have been like this.It would have been a pleasure to see this on screen. I just love how you showed her much smarter then shivaay! Shivaay never uses his brain where he needs it most, and it's kinda irritating.I think watever you wrote about her thoughts reaharding him was to the point and just loved the part where she was acting like pinky and dadi smiled at it. And shivaay thought to jealous annika making Ragini scared to be killed by his ex-wife. It was just so cute. And would love to see shivaay and ragini making annika jealous. Do update it soon. You are great!❤️

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-Anya.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
Awesome updates yar
Totally loved it...
why CV's can't do like this...always bringing psycho's charector's to the show...
I just loved this concept yar...
if they had showed like this...how enjoyable it would have been...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
love this ragini
hehe ragini imatating pinky ponky
haha
shivaay knows pinky half truth
loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Superb update
Ragini wondering what did pinky do & how can a mother do such a thing
Ponky was nice name...
Ragini could now see Pinky's facade
Shivaay watched d video of pinky blackmailing Anika & so he believed ragini
But he dint once realised that Anika had once pointed out at pinky
& He himself had lashed out at her reminding her that she is orphan...

Continue soon
Want to know d plan...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
I'm just loving it.
Shivaay needs to be whacked once in a while by Ragini.
Immature baby boy he is.
Everything is damn perfect.

Daisy
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: NarbhiForever..


Amazing update dear!!

Loved it!!!
Loving Ragini here...
I am fine with Shivaay & Ragini making Anika jealous:)
Update soon..




Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the feedback.

I'll try to update as soon as possible.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Totally loved it.
N(R)agini with her somewhat wierd antics and your characterization would have been great to watch on screen.
Little jealousy from Annika is no harm. But you would leave that to you as a writer knows the best what suits the characters being written or explored.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
love it
make anika jealous lol
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Nice update.
Still not liking Ragini, you have done a good job with her. Unfortunately, the show has sown seeds that are hard to get rid of her.
If possible please no jealousy .no rags shiv scenes. I liked the fact that ragini called him out on it. Showin the mirror to rhem, their idiotic games us fine. Hurting each other in jealousy .. deliberate is not needed.. too childish.
Anika being jealous if b ragini is understandable. But to deliberately create scenarios ..unpalatable.

Atleast, sso realizes that his mom is responsible for the whole thing.
Give ragini her Siddharth...so we can be happy for her too.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Love it! Wish we had gotten this nagini!

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