Shivika TS - What The Farak (Ragini Track) Final Shot, Pg 13; Sept 8th - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
love this take on Ragini, keep it up
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Nohsin10

Awesome update

I wish nagini was a good person



Thank you!

I wish she was too. But atleast Shivaay told her off. That was funny.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
Awesome update.
Loved it totally.
Enjoyed reading this.
Very interesting concept.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: DisneyDreamer

Loved. Especially the worry that Ragini faced about Anika killing her. :P



Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Nice story please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic update
Ragini got the whole truth and Shivay also got some evidences that pinky is the culprit
If you're making Anika jealous, you should also make Shivay jealous
Update soon please



Alright, thank you! I'll try to update as soon as possible. I'll think Shivaay getting jealous too.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
No, not happy with SSO-Ragini making Anika jealous ! He already got the truth half way and by his own detection then why be so obtuse n hurt her more !!!
But so far you have done amazingly well with the story and making Ragini a saner character, more relate-able and compassionate... 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: itzanya32

Hello Jesal!
Well I don't know How I didn't came upon this story in the past but now I'm glad that I got to read this fic which is just unique in it's own way. To be true I always wanted to see something like this on the show I really wanted ragini to be just like mallika who had been a lovely frnd of shivaay and had adviced him for his best. Please don't be offended If I had said something wrong because I'm frustaded to see why everyone came in between them need to be physcho? they can be like what mallika was. I'm totally pissed off by this. Ragini would have gotten a better character then this and I think for a moment that she would have been like this.It would have been a pleasure to see this on screen. I just love how you showed her much smarter then shivaay! Shivaay never uses his brain where he needs it most, and it's kinda irritating.I think watever you wrote about her thoughts reaharding him was to the point and just loved the part where she was acting like pinky and dadi smiled at it. And shivaay thought to jealous annika making Ragini scared to be killed by his ex-wife. It was just so cute. And would love to see shivaay and ragini making annika jealous. Do update it soon. You are great!❤️

Love,
-Anya.



Hello!

Thank you, I really appreciate that. I'm glad you like the concept in which I shaped Ragini.

You're not wrong. Daksh, Tia, Ragini, Vikram. It's all so boring and overdone. Mallika was very original. To be honest, I made Ragini smarter because I had to draw on her characterization. So I had to sacrifice Shivaay little. I wanted Ragini to be the one that provoked the Shivika reunion.

I'm glad you are enjoying the fic. I was hoping people were fond of those moment. I hope you enjoy the last chapter.

Thank you again and please look forward to the last chapter.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

<font color="#ff00ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Awesome updates yar</font>

<font color="#ff00ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Totally loved it...</font>
<font color="#ff00ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">why CV's can't do like this...always bringing psycho's charector's to the show...</font>
<font color="#ff00ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">I just loved this concept yar...</font>
<font color="#ff00ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">if they had showed like this...how enjoyable it would have been... </font>



I know! But the writers never give us what we want. Sad but who could help it. Only bring psychos to the show to cause more problems. Thank you though, I'm glad you could enjoy it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

love this ragini

hehe ragini imatating pinky ponky
haha
shivaay knows pinky half truth
loved it



I'm glad you're liking it! Thank you so much!

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