Till I Found You - OnTrack ShivIka FF [ Discontinuation Note on Pg 31]

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Fantastic update
How Shivay can throw accusations on Anika just like that
But Anika is right that she should never forgive Shivay for pointing finger on her character
Please clear Shivay's misunderstanding and I want him repent all through his life for this
Update soon please

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Awesome update harshu 🤗

I just loved the way you portrayed Annika emotions yar... How can shivaay throw accusations on her like that... And i just loved the last part very much... where Annika decided that she will never forgive him... This will be the reaction which a girl shows to a guy who questions her charecter... How can he think about her like that because she is from a middle class family...

she should not try to prove herself... he doesn't deserve that... let him learn by himself and repent it...

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Khidkitod

@Khidkitod

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Harshu!!🤗

Yayyy!! Another story by you!!🥳Am so happy that u have selected that scene..This was mind blowing Harshu!!👏 Loved Annika's last monologue! Shivaay should understand her importance..at least once..Harshu..I have a request..Can you please give a proper and tough redemption for Shivaay??? In show,Annika forgave him so easily..Am very very unhappy with that..I crave for a proper redemption story of Shivaay..so if u can please give it..If not in this story,then in another story may be..😳 Not forcing,only requesting..😳 After this incident,Shivaay should face a tough time to get Annika back..

If you can,pm me whenever u update..😉 Big hugs!!🤗

With love,

Rusha

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: NarbhiForever..
Amazing update Di

Loved it specially last lines of Anika!!!

They were mind blowing!!!

Loved them to the core!!!

Update next part whenever you get time..

Waiting!!!

Thank you😊

I am glad you liked it.

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@BoonAndBane

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Ahaan ... Something that should have happened in the show after the confrontation. 😕

Annika's decision looked firm enough unlike the show.👍🏼👏

Looking forward to see how much Shivaay is going to regret over this.

P.S.: Is this a sad story? I like emotional stuffs but don't like sad endings. Is there no way for Shivaay's redemption?

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Seema84

@Seema84

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Amazing update!!! This is a quite old content but it's look like a fresh one... even that time also I wanted Annika to stand for herself !!!! I wish how u explained like that something we got from the show ... never mind we will get it here 😊 dear please try to update soon the next part...

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Shaina744
Really Lovely part...
Reminded me of that Episode where Daks kidnapped Anika...
You portrait Anika's emotions so nicely...
Waiting eagerly for next part... Update soon Di...

Thank you 😊

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DisneyDreamer

@DisneyDreamer

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Loved it. Love love...So excited to see next chapter

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1012277

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Hey Harshada,

Amazing chapter, Harshada. I'm extremely sorry I couldn't comment earlier. But I'm so glad you're writing about this. I did not like the fact that they forgot about this so easily in the show cause what Shivaay did was really bad. 💔

You've written this so so well. Could feel the emotions.

Going to try and stay updated with this fiction because I'm not really good at staying up to date with FFs or even SSs. 😆😳

Continue soon.

Much love,

Rhea :)