Till I Found You - OnTrack ShivIka FF [ Discontinuation Note on Pg 31] - Page 8

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U r on a roll girl ...you are writing on track ..yay !! And i am so loving ur take ..much much better than the show 👏 Harneet needs to read ur stories !

Superb update Harshada !! I have said it before and i will say it umpteen times again you are an amazing writer !! so looking fwd to the next chapters.


Happy Friendship Day to you Harshada ! How I wish we met before nvm I will follow you on all the forums 😆 Or wherever i get to read ur stories 😉

Keep writing !!
Much love
Meeta

Fantastic update

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Reserved...

I still got first page I suppose :D

You did Hun ❤️

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic update
How Shivay can throw accusations on Anika just like that
But Anika is right that she should never forgive Shivay for pointing finger on her character
Please clear Shivay's misunderstanding and I want him repent all through his life for this
Update soon please

Originally posted by: daisydee425

Awesome update

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Awesome update harshu 🤗

I just loved the way you portrayed Annika emotions yar... How can shivaay throw accusations on her like that... And i just loved the last part very much... where Annika decided that she will never forgive him... This will be the reaction which a girl shows to a guy who questions her charecter... How can he think about her like that because she is from a middle class family...

she should not try to prove herself... he doesn't deserve that... let him learn by himself and repent it...

Originally posted by: -Tadibaaaz-

Harshu!!🤗

Yayyy!! Another story by you!!🥳Am so happy that u have selected that scene..This was mind blowing Harshu!!👏 Loved Annika's last monologue! Shivaay should understand her importance..at least once..Harshu..I have a request..Can you please give a proper and tough redemption for Shivaay??? In show,Annika forgave him so easily..Am very very unhappy with that..I crave for a proper redemption story of Shivaay..so if u can please give it..If not in this story,then in another story may be..😳 Not forcing,only requesting..😳 After this incident,Shivaay should face a tough time to get Annika back..

If you can,pm me whenever u update..😉 Big hugs!!🤗

With love,

Rusha

Originally posted by: Rainzz

Ahaan ... Something that should have happened in the show after the confrontation. 😕

Annika's decision looked firm enough unlike the show.👍🏼👏

Looking forward to see how much Shivaay is going to regret over this.

P.S.: Is this a sad story? I like emotional stuffs but don't like sad endings. Is there no way for Shivaay's redemption?