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Adithi555

@Adithi555

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Very nice concept...plz update soon... loving it..

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

awesome update yar...so they are all set to go to their college...two things that always present in your story is...first one...more than love you always concentrate on friendship...second thing is bindi...your every story will have bindi in it...I really think it's your favourite food...I totally enjoyed this update...Annika is a sweetheart...she cares for everyone...jessy aunty is right...shivaay is indeed lucky...so it was shivaay who said to hide their relationship...awww i liked his this side very much...he always gives her priority...he knows students will make Annika a topic for their discussion if they get to know that she is married...

so it's good...so now begin the college story of them...

I am eagerly waiting for the next update

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Areeba

@Areeba-ali

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

M soo in love with this fan friction. ❤️

I must must tell you that you write soo well.

Amazingly written. I love the part that how they are trying to understand each other and they are getting comfortable with eachother.

I am hooked to this story. And i am excited and egarly waiting what will happen next in collage.

PS. Update sooon

Edited by Areeba-ali - 8 years ago

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Rishiak47

@Rishiak47

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

I am jealous of Annika.

From where on the Earth can we get husband like shivay?

Just my inner feelings 🤣

Coming to the update. It was superb.

U r amazing as always.

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Rishiak47
I am jealous of Annika.
From where on the Earth can we get husband like shivay?

Just my inner feelings🤣

Coming to the update. It was superb.
U r amazing as always.

Your comment literally made me cough while munching my food 😆
Rishika.. Hope I can call you that. Such husbands are out of market 😆 You'll get them only in my fictions.
Thanks dear:-)

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vriddhi

@vriddhi

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

it's everything.. beautiful, cute, sweet, amazing... great... keep going..
Will wait for another one. ..
update soon

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black_hawk

@black_hawk

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

You describe everything so so so beautifully 😊

Writing is something which I think everyone can do but only special ones can bring that essence and that rhythm which differentiate a poem from an ordinary writing, which compels the reader to dwell more into that work.

You are one of them :)

Talking about this story.. it is very beautiful..boring toh bilkul bhi nahi hai...

In the second last chapter you said you have lost interest in this story and we can not force you to complete it. You can stop if you want...you said you can also leave from here... But please please please never ever stop writing... Write anything..anywhere you want ...but just keep writing...

P.S. - I am one of your die hard fans. 😊

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Jaslee Saggi

@jusschillin

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Harshada!!! What should I say?? Really, every time you update, it just gets better and better. I absolutely love their relationship, its cute with a tinge of formality. Can't wait for their new journey to start and them to open up to each other fully.

And no, the story is not getting boring at all? Absolutely loving every bit you present to us. You should really consider joining the creative team of Ishqbaaaz.

Seriously though, amazing amazing update, can't wait for their college journey to start. I felt that when Shivaay was talking to Anika about hiding their relationship because he didn't want anyone to take advantage of their relationship, I sensed some foreshadowing. Am I right? Things are heating up I guess, but its needed in every story I guess.

Eager to read the next part as always.

-LOVE

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moon99

@moon99

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

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but I loved it !!!! ❤️ and never ever think it's getting boring! 😡 😆 But I have to say that I am loving their relationship and the pace at which they are moving 😛

unres

Sorry. sorry, sorry, I know I took too long to reply 😳

But one thing I have to say is I LOVE FOOD AND I LOVE BHINDI!!!!!!! 😳 🤪
I am a little incy wincy bit crazy about food 😳

Now to the chapter, it was absolutely lovely! I mean the Shivaay you have created is just too PERFECT ( I know, it's how you roll 😆 ) , but I can't hep but think if such guys are even possible? 😲

I seriously am loving the way you are portraying their relationship and pace! It is just so beautiful and Anika slowing easing into her new life is so apt and cute!

I actually had a feeling that Shivaay was the one who wanted to hide their relationship, but I feel like he is going to be the one to come forth with their relationship.

Why do I sense a JEALOUS SHIVAAY coming up? 😉 😆

But seriously, I cannot wait to read once they are in college!!!!!!!!! 😃 😃
I am super duper excited!!!!!!!

EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

AND ONCE AGIAN DO NOT THINK THAT THE STORY IS GETTING BORING! I MEAN IT HAS JUST BEGUN!!!! ⭐️ ⭐️

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Mystery1234

@Mystery1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

This is Amazing Harshu dear🤗🤗

Everytime i read your version of Shivay ...i just o all the way AWWW

Where can we get these type of companions???? ***i guess the raw material required for their manufacture is not available**🤣🤣

You remember u told me that u will provide me ample opportunitites to dream my man to be as Shivay..??? and you have been successful girl😊...This species of men is not available on the earth.i guess we need to do the search operation on some other planet🤣🤣

Shivika taking baby steps in their relationship

Both are lucky to have each other in my opinion

The way they unerstand each other without the exchange of words is adorable😃

Loved it

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm😊

PS- I will be Reserving the comments from now on as i have my exam on 18 june and i don't wanna comment in rushon ur works bcoz i just love them...hope u understand😊

Edited by Mystery1234 - 8 years ago

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