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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Loved the slow progression...
And. Shivaays logic and not declaring their marriage status in college was wise...

Plzzz cont soon


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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: pritzz

I loved it and last line won me😳




I am glad to know the same:-)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite




Your comment literally made me cough while munching my food 😆
Rishika.. Hope I can call you that. Such husbands are out of market 😆 You'll get them only in my fictions.
Thanks dear:-)


Out of market 😭

It's okay I can manage it till I get to read your fictions.
Really u r amazing.
Your updates are emotional and always create some powerful impression in readers mind.

Keep doing this amazing work 👏

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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Rishiak47



Out of market😭

It's okay I can manage it till I get to read your fictions.
Really u r amazing.
Your updates are emotional and always create some powerful impression in readers mind.

Keep doing this amazing work👏



That is very sweet of you:-)
It does mean a lot. This story was moving pretty smoothly till now but more drama or say a lot of new (mostly weird 😆 ) things are going to jump in the story now.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: aichaab

oh no this is amazing why would it be voring. Always looking forward to updates like the way you show the gradual progress in thier relationship




Thanks dear. I am glad you had a nice read.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Awesome beautifully wrritern
jessy is very sweet
shivika are really cute
countinue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite




I used to love Bhindi. It used to be my favorite😳But now, I like it. I mean I can eat but not much a fan of it.

By the way, I know why you thought so .. because of Love Is Beautiful right? I am thrilled, that you still remember.

Ohkay.. Yups because of Love is Beautiful. Who won't remember it when the story is damn beautiful
And in the above post it was *I actually don't have words to praise you
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: _fati_

Ohkay.. Yups because of Love is Beautiful. Who won't remember it when the story is damn beautiful
And in the above post it was *I actually don't have words to praise you




Thank you:-)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: water9786

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Hii Di..

How are you?

Update is super duper cute totally awww type in Shivaay's language.

Loved every bit of it.

First of all you have done chop of me by proving me wrong... Guess where

Arre when you gave teaser then I thought that Anika was the one who said all that {but somewhere I know you are not going by that way as almost every member who replied thought that she was Anika (have read five to six comments after that and in everyone Anika was the one..)}

Bhindi- Di in your story another story may be in Love is beautiful , you have used bhindi na when Anika made bhindi one day and Om made Shivaay eat a bite and he got emotional after that and went away from there as his sister Prinku used to make bhindi for him... Who was dead because of Pinky...

Now coming to story

Di please don't make Shivaay so adorable, cute, loving... just joking😆

You always left me speechless when it comes to him(not on track).

Loved each and every line of it.

Jessy is also so cute and adorable.

I will not say Shivaay is lucky or Anika is lucky because from my point of view both are more than lucky only and only if they are together.

Di one reason I love this story of yours is that I have listened this line so many times Friendship is the base of love... If she cannot be your best friend then she cannot be your lover... something like that and this story gives a clear view of that.

And last line

One thing was assured, that, no matter what comes their way... They would not let anything to separate their invisibly intertwined hands

Can I take it as a hint for further updates???

And it is not boring. It is amazingly awesome, superb... You know very well I love this story of your most with other one UNSAID.

Loved it Di but Love you more...

Take care of yourself

With Loads of Love and Hugs

-Chhaya

P.S. Do you love Bhindi?

If yes then I got to know about three things about you

1. You are a sweetheart.

2. One of your favourite songs is Tera mujhse hain pehle ka nata koi ( Please correct me if I am wrong)

3. You love bhindi...

Well I used to but not now. I rarely eat bhindi now as I don't even like them don't know about future as my choices changes very fastly😳😆 and don't ask me why I hit the like button of posts 8,9,10 ...
because I know I am gonna love them😊



Hi Chhaya😊 I am well. How about you?
Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed reading it.

I am in awe of your comment. Actually at loss of words. Do not know what to reply.
Well, if you want, you can take it as a hint but I can't say.

You too, take care, my dear.

Lots of love
-Harshada


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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
Wow beastie new thread Haa...
Congratulations dear...
Look lots of people loves your writing...
I'm proud of you...give me a hug darling...
I know main regularly comment nahi kar paa rahi hu I'm sorry for that but what can I do life is so unpredictable kuch na kuch chalta hi rehta hai main waha se nikal nahi paa rahi hu...
Anyways time milte hi sare update padh lungi...pinky promise...
Arre ye kya again bhindi...waise muje bharva bhindi bohot pasand hai... Amazing update dear... Love you...

Aankhe khule to dekhu tuje...bas yehi farmaish hai...,
Pehli to muje yaad nahi...tu meri aakhri khawaish hai...!!!
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