RiKara SS : Adhoore Hum :Epilogue on Pg 1: 07.07.17 - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
hello dear just now finished all the four parts
and I m speech less by way u wrote the entire story your single updates are kind on a ss itself it took me long to read all 4 in one go . I love all ur work I am slowly becoming fan of ur writings please update next part soon.
chapter 4 had all element and gauri departure was so emotional loved all
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
Read all 4 parts in one go and I love this so much... I wish this was happening in the show 😔

But I have to say that OmRu reunion had me in splits.. It's just sooo them

I had a feeling she was lying to him about her memory by the time I got to the end of part 3... You confirmed it by the end of part 4... Close enough 😆

I look forward to the end of this story 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me

Read the first part n then took a break from the forum for a while .. so here I am with three parts read at once n super happy too.. i am glad you are happy after reading my story😳 memory loss has been a track which was messed up big time for a fave couple of mine but the way you make up for it with RiKara in this story makes me come over that sadness a bit ..ohmigod... thank you so much dear😛😛 :).. it's a roller coaster with Omkara doubting her genuineness n then finally realising that he's been way to mean n then major revelation happens n Omkara is literally lost.. I loved their interactions then.. Gauri gave him space yet made him come out of his guilt n then Omkara trying to make amends n making a fresh start.. so glad u lieked the way i had taken the story😛😛KT episode was powerfully done just the way it should be thank you😃 n then finally then good bye n Omkara realising that she's got her memory back.. how beautiful is this..thank you so so much dear😛 can't wait for the next episode n the confrontation.. super excited .. the next part is not all that great... i hope i don't disappoint you guys much😳

Thanks for this one thanks for reading and commenting dear😛



Originally posted by: sweetcherry95

waiting for next part

plzzz update soon


In Shaa Allah will update it by tomorrow

Originally posted by: meiejrishbala

Hey lazy,hey rose🤗 i saw you writing in this forum so came to read this story too😊thank you so much dear🤗so glad to see u here...since i havent watched dil bole oberoi tv show i knew nothing about them(yup,i am stalking you😃😃hahahaha)...but i saw your post saying you are reading the girl with make believe husband by julia quinn...now i'm also reading that book too😊.did u like it? i was a little disappointed with the heroine😭..thanks honey😉😉 see ya hun



Originally posted by: pt311288

hello dear just now finished all the four parts
and I m speech less by way u wrote the entire story your single updates are kind on a ss itself it took me long to read all 4 in one go .yeah i kinda go overboard with the length😳 I love all ur work I am slowly becoming fan of ur writings please update next part soon.thank you so much dear... so hoping that i can continue entertain with my stories
chapter 4 had all element and gauri departure was so emotional loved all thank you so very much dear😛



Originally posted by: falala333

Read all 4 parts in one go and I love this so much... I wish this was happening in the show 😔 awww thank you so much dear😛😛

But I have to say that OmRu reunion had me in splits.. It's just sooo them heheheh i am glad u liked Rudra's bit... he is going to be more prominent in Epilogue😉

I had a feeling she was lying to him about her memory by the time I got to the end of part 3... You confirmed it by the end of part 4... Close enough 😆 HAHAHAHA no yaar.. she got her memory only in Part 4... From where Omkara's POV starts

I look forward to the end of this story 😊 I hope you'll like the remaining story too😛




thank you😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
Part Five Updated On Page One
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Omg this last part was just beautiful...
How Om was open to gouri...
Loved his shayaris too...
Sad that this is gonna end...
Waiting for epilogue
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
I love love love this chapter! Its so true though, Omkara isnt in love with Gauri just yet. And he doesnt pretend to be. But he knows hes feels something special for his "Chulbul" chiraya best friend and he doesnt want to live without her. Such an amazing chapter.
Though I have to say, as much as I love Om and Gauri - Rudra and Shivaay killed it in this chapter!!! They were hysterical with their suggestions lmao.

Cannot wait for the next chapter. And am so happy that you writing again Lazy! Missed you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Love, love, love this fifth part...
Adore how open and truthful Om was with Gauri. The various phases of their relationship were dealt with so beautifully!

Sad that its coming to an end... you made me cry at that last sher... it was perfection!

Can't wait to read the epilogue
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Oh this one was so hilarious
Shivaay n Rudra were giving omkara their own ideas
And they were just awesome🤣
Kidnap her...why??
Blackmail her...with what??
Suicide..my stomach still hurts

Omkara let her go
I was shocked
But only 2 weeks
He couldn't stay away from her

Shivaay wanted him to wait longer
Man his brothers are too much
Shivaay n Rudra need to improve on their ideas
But they came for her

Love seeing this new romantic Kara
He is missing the old n new Gauri
And his shayris
They were so apt for the situation

Superb update
Only 1 more left
Wish it could have continued longer
But whatever I am getting I am happy in that

Play keep putting up new stories on RIKARA
Love reading your work
Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
first of all i want to say ARE YOU KIDDING ME...!! This was a damn fantabulous, romantic, emotional, funny update. It wasn't mediocre from any side. Like really from any side.

I don't know from i should start.. First it was and emotional scene. Then shiRu ideas were ironically funny. In the saddest situation it made me chuckle. Khidki tod ideas of shivRu 🤣 🤣

Then it he said let her go 😳 after three weeks when she hanged the painting on wall it was such a Awww moment

Om's wicked one liners teasing her was making me go gaga 🤪 😳 😳

The last shayari of om from fanaah is my all time favourite it suits the situation so perfectly

Kudos to you girl 👏 🤗 i was literally grinning throughout the update [:D

P.s waiting for epilogue stop being modest ❤️
Edited by sumaiya10 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
Ohh god loved this story
Read in one go
Awesome story di

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