RiKara SS : Adhoore Hum :Epilogue on Pg 1: 07.07.17 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMG.! I am loss of words to describe this fic. The story the concept everything is just superb and perfect to T. This what i wanted to read. This is what we all wanted to read

Gauri ka bholapan and om irritation tasting his own medicine. I even laughed at few scenes. Its night and everyone's sleeping and i can't help myself from laughing and thinking this is so perfect i love it.

Kudos to you for this idea 🤗 Please continue soonnn now I'm waiting eagerly to read more
last part literally brought goosebumps 😭 please update soonn
P.s sorry for such a long comment i just can't stop myself from describing how happy I'm to read this one 😊 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
awesome...loved it yar...
wow memory loss...I really wanted this to happen in the show...so om is now guilty for wat he had done to gauri and she had forgiven him...
at last she had got it back too...so that's why she is leaving...I really hope that om will stop her
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear kuku,
Wow wat a update. You have expressed the pain of Om beautifully. The hurt,the guilt he his facing is described beautifully. Ri in her memory loss trying to make Om realize that she had forgiven him. Still Ri in confusion whether she loves him or not. And more confused regarding the marriage truth.


Then Om asking how can she forgive him easily has he done the worst things to her. Still unable to digest the fact tat he has gone so low and hating himself and finding opportunity to redeem his deed and saying to marry him and life long will make up to her.

I think Ri would have gained her memory during her nightmare as she was behaving differently in the morning. Om had not noticed tat.

Om and Kali fighting really shows how much Om was angry as kali has made Ri's life a hell. Challenging each other and kali provoking Om and Om showing his anger and hatred is well described.

Then Ri is tensed about Om and Om in need to meet Ri shows how much they care for each other. Finally Ri understands her job is done and as Om wished she is ready to leave the house. But as not realized that Om had found about her regaining of her memory.

Waiting how Om will stop Ri and make her comeback n his life. And how both will propose each other. Update asap.

With love,
Divya :-)
Edited by Rumadiv - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Loving this story.. You have a great way with words , I could picturize all that you wrote while reading this story ..
Waiting for the next chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Just finished reading all four parts posted my friend and I must say... it's beautiful.
Just wonderfully done... I love how you managed to keep Gauri character intact even if she's lost her memory and your Omkara is perfection too!

Can't wait to read more!


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dazzles

Can't wait long...
Plz update today itself...


will try to post it by next week😛

Originally posted by: lourel24

Damn!!! You build up your story so beautifully. Loved it.


thank you so much😃

Originally posted by: Naina280599

OMG!! She got her memory back and he realised that right away. I am loving your SS so much. I can't wait for the next part, post ASAP please!!!


yeah... but he did take a little time in realizing.. since she woke up with her memory... thank you so much for loving my story dear... will post the next part by next week

Originally posted by: alinaza

Oh. My. God. She got her memory back! I will be honest, I was so sad that she was leaving that I didnt even pick up that Gauri said Omkaraji. hehehehehhee

This was such a wonderful chapter. So many things happened. I am so curious as to what Om painted. Was it their first wedding? I somehow feel she might have gotten her memory back at that point. yup he painted their first wedding... as he has realized that wedding meant a great deal to Gauri... no... she woke up with her memory...

Where to from here Omkaraji? Cannot wait for more Lazy! next part is pretty boring



Originally posted by: pt311288

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wow really grt ss loving it please write more on rikara 😊


thank you dear... will try to post more stories😳

Originally posted by: sumaiya10

OMG.! I am loss of words to describe this fic. The story the concept everything is just superb and perfect to T. This what i wanted to read. This is what we all wanted to read that is so sweet yaar... thank you so much dear😛😛😛

Gauri ka bholapan and om irritation tasting his own medicine. I even laughed at few scenes. Its night and everyone's sleeping and i can't help myself from laughing and thinking this is so perfect i love it. awww thank you yaar... i am so glad, u find it interesting and i am so glad, i cud write something that u guys wanted to read😛

Kudos to you for this idea 🤗 Please continue soonnn now I'm waiting eagerly to read more
last part literally brought goosebumps 😭 please update soonn thank you so much dear🤗... but i am not very sure whether u will kike the next part... it is pretty short and pretty mediocre.
P.s sorry for such a long comment i just can't stop myself from describing how happy I'm to read this one 😊 😊 no.. no... i LOVE reading long comments😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome...loved it yar... thank you so much dear😛

wow memory loss...I really wanted this to happen in the show...so om is now guilty for wat he had done to gauri and she had forgiven him... yeah... she forgave him... but it would be a long time before he forgive himself.
at last she had got it back too...so that's why she is leaving...I really hope that om will stop her let's see😉




thank you so much dear😛

Originally posted by: Rumadiv

Dear kuku, Hello Divya😛😛

Wow wat a update. You have expressed the pain of Om beautifully. The hurt,the guilt he his facing is described beautifully. thanks dear.. so glad i didn't mess it up... i wasn't sure whether u would have liked a depressed Om.. I cudn't see Om being proactive to make it up to Gauri quickly... i always saw him breaking apart and going t depression before pulling himself together... Ri in her memory loss trying to make Om realize that she had forgiven him. Still Ri in confusion whether she loves him or not. And more confused regarding the marriage truth. yeah... she has the hard time... coz there are things only Om could tell her and he is in this state and she is too good to trouble him at this point.


Then Om asking how can she forgive him easily has he done the worst things to her. Still unable to digest the fact tat he has gone so low and hating himself and finding opportunity to redeem his deed and saying to marry him and life long will make up to her. yup... his world is going to revolve around Gauri now😳

I think Ri would have gained her memory during her nightmare as she was behaving differently in the morning. Om had not noticed tat. YUP... exactly.

Om and Kali fighting really shows how much Om was angry as kali has made Ri's life a hell. Challenging each other and kali provoking Om and Om showing his anger and hatred is well described. thank you so much dear😛

Then Ri is tensed about Om and Om in need to meet Ri shows how much they care for each other. Finally Ri understands her job is done and as Om wished she is ready to leave the house. But as not realized that Om had found about her regaining of her memory. yup... that's right... and she wud be explaining it in the next part😛

Waiting how Om will stop Ri and make her comeback n his life. And how both will propose each other. Update asap. don't know whether you wud like the next part... as it was pretty boring.. but i cudnt see it any othr way... will post it by next week😛

With love, Love yaa
Divya :-) Kuku😛



Originally posted by: firsttimehere

Loving this story.. You have a great way with words , I could picturize all that you wrote while reading this story ..

Waiting for the next chapter


thank you so very much dear... thanks a ton😳.. will update the next part by next week😛


Originally posted by: writergenie17

Just finished reading all four parts posted my friend and I must say... it's beautiful. thank you so much dear😛😛😛

Just wonderfully done... I love how you managed to keep Gauri character intact even if she's lost her memory and your Omkara is perfection too!
so glad u liked both their characters😛
Can't wait to read more!

will post it by next week😃😃




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Read the first part n then took a break from the forum for a while .. so here I am with three parts read at once n super happy too.. memory loss has been a track which was messed up big time for a fave couple of mine but the way you make up for it with RiKara in this story makes me come over that sadness a bit .. :).. it's a roller coaster with Omkara doubting her genuineness n then finally realising that he's been way to mean n then major revelation happens n Omkara is literally lost.. I loved their interactions then.. Gauri gave him space yet made him come out of his guilt n then Omkara trying to make amends n making a fresh start.. KT episode was powerfully done just the way it should be n then finally then good bye n Omkara realising that she's got her memory back.. how beautiful is this.. can't wait for the next episode n the confrontation.. super excited ..

Thanks for this one
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Posted: 8 years ago
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waiting for next part
plzzz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey lazy, i saw you writing in this forum so came to read this story too😊...since i havent watched dil bole oberoi tv show i knew nothing about them(yup,i am stalking you😃😃)...but i saw your post saying you are reading the girl with make believe husband by julia quinn...now i'm also reading that book too😊...thanks honey😉😉

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