RiKara SS : O Mere Dil Ke Chain ( Part 5-last- updated 30/05/17 ) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz

truly.. he is becoming like Tej .
CVs ne humare purane Om ko lauta do.

Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz

can u please continie this if possible

Thank you 😊
Yeah everyone wants that purana om but I don't think its going to happen any soon...
Gauri and om have a long way to go

Originally posted by: -Namita-

Hopefully you can continue this. It was really good.

Thank you so much
I'll try to continue this 😃

Originally posted by: lourel24

Loved it. I was going to say please do continue but then your strict pre-declaration that it's going to be only one shot, I stopped myself but that doesn't mean I don't want the next part.😉😊

Thank you so much 😃
I thought it will be fine to end it here with an open end... With many possibilities. 😆

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

Loved it could you continue it plzzx

Thank you for your comment 😊

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

What how can this be an OS

U can make a full fledged FF

On this fantastic plot

Gauri did exactly what she should have done

She is not taking all the crap

And moving on with her life

There is a limit to bear everything

And Gauri did the right thing

Wonder what will dadi do

And how rikara will handle the situation

Thank you so much dear 😃
You are right ... There is so much that can be written here
But it would be hectic for me as I have two SS already going-on
But I'll think about it

Gauri needs to stand up for herself as she did she n she was drunk
She didn't let him touch her and asked all the right questions which
she wouldn't dare ask him when she is sober
Omkara is frustrating me so much 😡
But I love him that's why I am tolerating this 😉 😆 😆

Dadi has taken things in her hands now and om cant do anything 😉

Originally posted by: ColorDreams

This should be a ss or ff then ff

Anyways fantastic thought

She is here doing what a swlf respective girl should do

Nice prologue

Please continue soon

Thanks for the pm and waiting for the next one as well

~Aditi

Thank you for you comment Aditi 😃
High time gauri stood up for herself 😊
I'll think about continuing this

Hello again.🤗

I didn't expect such a response on this, but all of you who commented here asked me to continue this so now I am excited as I will be continuing this story.

I won't drag it and keep this short and simple and the parts will be short too, its exam time so bear with me.

If you guys haven't noticed, I have changed the name of the story to " o mere dil ke chain just because I heard this song on the radio while writing this part of the story.

So here it goes...

ENJOY.

~

Part One

"gauri !! she turned to see that dadi was there holding the other end of the bag she was holding. "tu kahin nahi jayegi hearing this om immediately objected "dadi ... "bas kar om abhi meri baat khatam nahi hui hai

Dadi holds gauri's wrist and takes her inside. Everyone gets settled on the sofas with gauri and dadi and omkara standing.

"gauri kahin nahi jayegi omkara. Wo teri patni hai . shaadi jaise bhi hui ho, jin bhi haalaaton mein hui ho tum dono ne ek dure ke saath phere liye toh ab iss rishte ko koi nahi todh saqta dadi told this to omkara strictly.

" dadi aap kuch nahi jaanti, yeh ladki ek number ki besharm aur giri hui hai. Ek shaadi shuda aadmi se shaadi karne jaa rahi thi, iski wajah se thakurain ne suicide kar liya. Iska aur mera koi rishta nahi omkara accuses gauri infront of everyone while gauri keeps looking at him not breaking the eye contact with him.

"aur toh aur, jab maine kaha tha ki mujhe tumhari shaqal nahi dekhni toh tum mere ghar taka a gayi vo bhi chulbul bann ke. Tum mujhse jhoot pe jhoot bolti gayi aur maine tumhe apna dost bana liya he finishes not believing how foolish he was to trust her.

"enough is enough om om snaps out of it and looks at his mother. " maana ki gauri ne sach chupaya par tum yeh kaise bhul saqte ho ki uski vajah tumhari maa aaj yahan zinda khadi hai. Gauri ne har baar meri jaan bachayi hai aur tumhari madad ki hai. Before jhanvi could continue om spoke "main kuch nahi bhoola hun mom, sab yaad hai mujhe par iss gauri ne sab kuch paiso ke liye kiya hai

" gauri ne mere liye bahot kuch kiya hai om. Mummy ji, gauri bahot acchi ladki hai. Pehli baar jab mujhe pata chala tha ki ye chulbul bann ke humare saath reh rahi thi toh maine gauri ko ghar se nikal diya tha. Tumhein yaad hai tum kitne bechain the om kyunki tumhe chulbul nahi mil raha tha? Gauri ki loyalty test karne ke liye humne gauri ka ek test liya tha. Apparently, gauri ko yeh laga ki om ke juice mei poison hai aur isse pehle ki vo juice peeta, gauri ne pee liya, bina apni jaan ki parwaah kiye. Isse toh yehi prove hota hai ki gauri is perfect for Om jhanvi finishes and hugs gauri.

" toh yeh teh raha, gauri yahin rahegi aur tere saath rahegi om. Anika ja aur gauri ko uske room tak chodh aa dadi smiles at gauri

Anika takes gauri toh om's room while shivaay asks om to come with him.

"yeh sab kya hai om, itna sab ho gaya aur tune mujhe kuch nahi bataya? shivaay asks looking at on disbelievingly.

" main nahi chahta hoon ki voh ladki iss ghar mei rahe bas om says getting angry

"tujhe ho kya gaya hai om? shivaay asks trying to understand.

"yeh sab uss gauri ki galti hai, na main use kabhi milta na yeh sab hota omkara leaves angrily

Anika had just left the room and gauri was pacing around. She knew that om could enter any minute and shower her with his bitter accusations. The door to their room opened with a bang and she saw a fuming omkara standing. Om locked the door and took determined steps towards her. "yehi chahti thi na tum? Ki kisi tarah tum yahan ruk jao? Maine kaha tha ki chup chaap chali jana lekin tum toh itni besharam nikli ki naya drama shuru kar diya tumne. Omkara held her shoulders tightly.

He was hurting her again but this time she wasn't going down without a fight. She shrugged his hands off her. "bas kariye, bahot ho gaya. aapki pareshaani kya hai?" gauri asks frustrated

"meri problem tum ho" om shouts

"toh fir mar kyun nahi jaane diya humein? kyun bachayi humaari jaan. hum toh marr hi gaye the uss barf ke dibbe mei fir kyun bachaya aapne humein ?" having no answer om hesitated for a second.

gauri sighs "Hum jaa rahe the par dadi ji ne rok liya aur isse pehle ki aap humpe aur koi ilzaam lagaye hum aapko bata dein ki ab humein koi farak nahi padhta aap humaare baare mei kya sochte hain kyunki aap toh sach dekhna hi nahi chahte." And gauri leaves the room.

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Dadi had made the decision and everyone had to accept it. Gauri talked to dadi about leaving again but dadi didn't let her leave. Omkara and gauri were avoiding each other. Gauri always woke up early and came to sleep after omkara was asleep. This had become a routine. Not seeing gauri had its effects. Omkara was always looking for her unconsciously and his brothers could see that. Every morning he would her noises in his room while he was half asleep, Sometimes, a door opening and closing, tinkling of bangles and clicking of heels on the floor.

Omkara's anger was wearing off but he still didn't want to see her face.

~ to be continued ~

I hope you like it

Please share your views on it

Waiting eagerly, also if you want to suggest something scrap me, I could use some suggestions.

Ciao

Love, sonalika.

Please continue as soon as possible.
Finally Gauri started defending herself.
😊

Continue dear, really enjoying this.

The concept is moving smotthingly sonarika