RiKara SS : O Mere Dil Ke Chain ( Part 5-last- updated 30/05/17 )

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello everyone
Seeing as everyone was writing something i couldn't stop myself
so here it is. i know the title is weird and there will be spelling mistakes. THIS IS ONE SHOT AND THERE WON'T BE ANOTHER PART.
NO PROOF READ.
ENJOY

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This starts from when gauri gets drunk and then omkara says hurtful words to her and asks her to get out.

And this is what I imagine gauri should do. actually there are many ways to do this but i am sharing just one way.

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" aap chahte hain ki hum get out ho jayen toh hum get out ho jayenge gauri says determined this time.

This wasn't the first time omkara had asked her to get out and she had always tried, always did what he told her to do then why can't he see? He loved chulbul, didn't he? Who was chulbul? It was me, it was always me. It wasn't like chulbul was a different personality, he was just a mask. Why can't omkara see the things she did for him as chulbul. Is he soo blinded by his hate? These were the questions that plagued gauri now-a-days.

What is she to do? Listen to him and hurt his family aur listen to his family and hurt him. She realised that she has always kept omkara on a high pedestal. It was time he got down from his high horse. He thinks he knows everything when in reality he knows nothing about her, not a thing. Tomorrow morning first thing that she is going to do is leave this place.



Next day

"jhanvi aunty aapne gauri ko dekha? Mil hi nahi rahi hai, tayyar hona hai pooja hai, itni tayyariyan karni hai... anika is interrupted by gauri "bhaujayi hum yahan hain anika and jhanvi turned towards gauri to see her with a bag as if she was going somewhere.

"kya aap sab ko bula sati hain? Humein aap sab se kuch kehna hai gauri requests anika.

After a few minutes the oberois gathered in front of her. "shivaay gauri hum sabse kuch kehna chahti hai anika informs shivaay and wait for gauri to start.

Gauri sadly smiles when she sees omkara standing with a bitter look as usual.

"humein samajh nahi aa raha ki kahan se shuru karein? Bade bhaiya, aapka bahot bahot dhanyawaad jo aap humein yahaan lekar aaye. Itne saare logon ka pyaar mila humein, bhaujayi ke roop mein ek behen mili humein. Par ab hum yahan aur nahi reh saqte

Till now om wasn't interested in what she was saying but hearing this he raised his brows.

"yeh tum kya keh rahi ho gauri ? tum iss ghar ki bahu ho shivaay asked gauri.

"hum toh patni bhi nahi ban paye to iss ghar ki bahu kaise bann saqte hain? saying this she left everyone confused

"muje kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai, tumhari aur om ki shadi ho gyi hai toh fir? anika asks the question.

Gauri tell them how om married her "omkara ji ne sirf humari jaan bachane ke liye ye sab kiya, vo iss shadi ko nahi maante

" yeh shaadi hai koi khel nahi, uske maan ne na maan ne se sach nahi badlega ki tum om ki patni ho. Shivaay says getting angry at om.

"shivaay... om starts but gauri stops him

"ek minute... bade bhaiya hum bas yeh kehna chahte hain ki humare beech jo ye rishta hai vo zyada lamba nahi chalega. Kahan omkara ji aur kahan hum.

Gauri then joins her hands in namaste " hum bas yehi kehna chahte hain ki omkara ji ko dukh dekar hum iss ghar mein nahi reh saqte... before she could say anything more omkara yells at her

"bas karo yeh drama gauri bahot ho gya, tum mujhe kyun villain bana rahi ho? Apna sach kyun nahi batati sabko. Kaise tum yahan sirf paiso ke liye aayi ho? this angers gauri but unlike other times she stands upto om

"aapko lagata hai aap sab jaante hain omakara ji? Aap kuch nahi jaante toh mat boliye. Mana aap bahot ameer hain, mana ki vo sultana aapse paiso ke liye shaadi karna chahti thi par iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki sab aise hote hain? Ki hum itne gire hue hai. Aapka ek paisa nahi chahiye humein. By now gauri was crying.

"hum toh bas chahte the ki aapke mann mei jo humare liye nafrat hai vo kum ho jaye. Aapse vaada kiya tha humne ki sultana ko yahan se nikaal kar hum bhi chale jayenge. Bahot she liye humne... aap humein bura bhala bolte rahe aur hum sunte rahe kyunki hum aapki bahot izzat karte the par ab nahi. Bhool gaye the ki aapka sirf naam Shankar ji ke naam par hai, aap bhagwaan nahi hain. Apni soch aap apne paas hi rakhiye aur ab aap kya hum iss rishte ko nahi maante. Jitni nafrat aap humse karte use kahi zyaada ab hum aapse nafrat karte hai omkara singh oberoi. Gauri's words stunned everyone into silence but omkara's mind was telling him that she is just being a drama queen.

"aap sab se maafi chahte hai par humein jana hoga saying this she moves towards om and stops in front of him. She removes her engagement ring and puts it in his palm.

"chalte hain

Saying this gauri turns and picks up her luggage and leaves the oberoi mansion forever.

Gauri knew that this marriage still means a lot to her and she could never hate omkara. She didn't know what she was going to do now, suddenly she stopped walking when she heard someone call her.

Before she could take a step out of the front door a voice stopped her.

"gauri !! she turned to shee that dadi was there holding the other end of the bag she was holding. "tu kahin nahi jayegi hearing this om immediately objected "dadi ... "bas kar om abhi meri baat khatam nahi hui hai

~ The Beginning ~

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I hope you all liked it

Waiting for your views on this.




|| I N D E X ||

Part One

Part Two

Part Three

Part Four

Part Five

~ The End ~



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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome Loved it
om is doing a great mistake...his words are like poisonous venom...he is becoming just like his father..
I really don't know how will he react when he realize that
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Posted: 8 years ago
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can u please continie this if possible
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Posted: 8 years ago
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truly.. he is becoming like Tej .
CVs ne humare purane Om ko lauta do.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hopefully you can continue this. It was really good.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it. I was going to say please do continue but then your strict pre-declaration that it's going to be only one shot, I stopped myself but that doesn't mean I don't want the next part. 😉😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it could you continue it plzzx
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Posted: 8 years ago
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What how can this be an OS
U can make a full fledged FF
On this fantastic plot

Gauri did exactly what she should have done
She is not taking all the crap
And moving on with her life
There is a limit to bear everything
And Gauri did the right thing

Wonder what will dadi do
And how rikara will handle the situation
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This should be a ss or ff then ff
Anyways fantastic thought

She is here doing what a swlf respective girl should do
Nice prologue

Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm and waiting for the next one as well


~Aditi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome Loved it

om is doing a great mistake...his words are like poisonous venom...he is becoming just like his father..
I really don't know how will he react when he realize that



Thank you for you comment
It is true bt sometimes I think its not his fault that he thinks so negative about gauri...
He has been through a lot too but that doesn't give him a right to hurt gauri.
But we have to wait and watch...

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