Enough! - A DBO-IB SS Chap 5 Pg 11(24/06) - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Loved it!
Gauri's revelation of her true identity before this bunch of Oberois was simply perfect!
It makes sense that Shivay isn't blindly trusting and the fact that she can back up her statements with some solid proof is sure to go down well with him. Rudra was a delight! And Gauri herself is sparklingly clever with great presence of mind. This in itself gives me so much satisfaction!
I am really intrigued now to know what this revelation will spell for Gauri and Om's relationship.
But for now it's Mission Kaali Thakur/Sultana.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar...its tooo interesting as well as humorous...gauri shocked everyone...so I think now everyone will go to help om...it will be more interesting...but the way I think now everyone gets that she is om's wife


Hi Aparna, Thanks for taking the time to comment...

I felt that the whole KT thing could've been handled much better on the show... the maha sangam they're doing now, could've been done back then and it would've been so good. But yeah, in this version of things, everyone's here and ready to help out. We'll see how that changes things around.

But for now, everyone knows Chulbul is Gauri but not that Gauri is Om's wife... they'll come to know in the next update, which is coming soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit

Superb yaar...

Now we need to see how Om is going escape??


Hi Shraddha, thanks yaar for taking the time to comment

Om's gonna escape but uske liye abhi time hai... Pehle thodi si planning karni baaki hai.

Stay tuned for the update!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: pt311288

Ha ha ha hilarious Rudy super awsm loving him

Mission om ko bachaooo next gym long update plz👏😉


Hi Prinku! Glad you're loving Rudy... this is the first time I've tried writing him. Hopefully, he'll be consistent with his canon character throughout.

Mission Om ko bachaao is on! Let's see what happens...

Stay tuned for the update!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Naina280599

This was totally awesome. Loved it. I liked the idea that Gauri herself revealed her identity. Love your take on DBO. Post soonnn. Much love.


Hi Naina! Glad you loved the last update. I've always wanted to give Gauri the chance to come clean by herself so this is what came out of that desire.

Thanks for all the support and love. Update is coming soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

Nice one really liked the way your revealed the that chulbul is gauri in front of the ShivRu and Anika and Soumya...

I really liked when rudra said O humaare liye Bhabha nhi bhabhi laaye hain two saying shut up rudra and gauri saying rudy bhaiya aapko kaise pata was amazing...


Hi Ila! Thanks for taking the time to comment...

Glad you liked the last update. I've always wanted to give Gauri the chance to reveal her truth herself... this is what I came up with for that. Let's see how things go from here...

I was giggling myself when I wrote that last line... Happy you liked it too!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Here comes our Gauri

The way she handled Oberoi's👏
Specially shivaay

It was hilarious
The way everyone was reacting
Chulbul sach mei bulbul Nikla
God Rudy was so happy


Hi Vrinda! Great to hear from you... thanks for taking the time to comment!

I'm glad you're liking this last update. This is my take on how the KT thing could've turned out if they'd brought the rest of the family into it. We'll see how things roll from here on...

Chulbul to thi hi Bulbul from the beginning... And Rudy is a generally happy person who doesn't over complicate anything... I loved writing him.

Update should be coming soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sara1990

Secret is out😉 Our Rudy is going to be very happy to get Bulbul Bhabhi. It will be hilarious and funny to see their reactions. I really hope Shivaay and the others believe her. Hope Jhanvi or Bua Ma could back up her or are you going to show them as per the DBO track??


Yup... secret's out and we'll get to see everyone finding out she's Om's wife and reacting to that too in the upcoming chapter. Rudy is definitely happy to get his bulbul Bhabhi... but will the others react the same way? We'll have to wait and watch.

I haven't rally worked up to the Jhanvi and Bua Maa parts yet... as per canon, they're also at the house where KT took everyone else and I haven't started writing those parts yet.

Thanks for all your love and support!

Update should be coming soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: GoldenEyes

Awesome!! can't wait to read how it will shape out


Thanks for taking the time to comment GoldenEyes!

Super glad you liked the update... The next chapter should be coming soon... so stay tuned
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: walkingoxymoron

So I was really disappointed with the whole Chulbul drama because it took away from the strong not-so-modern uneducated female belle we were promised in the initial episodes of DBO.

But I love how you recovered Gauri from the little lapse of judgement and made her the strong, clear-headed girl from the initial episodes and that too with Rudra's comic timing eased into it. I love Shivaay hasn't just defaulted to trusting Gauri because for him his brother's words would always take precedence.

All in all, I love it. and cannot wait for more of it. I hope this the chemistry we see between the leads in the coming episodes of the mahasangam because it's restrained as they're still strangers but they're still kindredspirit to an extent.


First off, love love love your handle! I'm gonna call you WO tho, if you don't mind..

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment WO... Super glad you liked the story so far.

I've always liked Chulbul as a character because it took nothing away from Gauri's essential core other than her appearance and Om's prejudiced hatred for her. Without his anger blinding him, it took him no time to become friendly with and trusting of Chulbul, who's fundamentally no different from Gauri.

I liked writing this fic, with so many different personalities trying to work things out, it's bound to have a little chaos thrown in. Every one of these characters is so unique and well crafted that fic writers like myself don't even have to make judgment calls when thinking up scenarios and deciding how they would react.

Thanks for the love and support, hope you continue to like where this story goes... Update should be coming soon...

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