Enough! - A DBO-IB SS Chap 5 Pg 11(24/06)

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
You know wat you are an awesome writer...
The way you describe things na it's awesome
so many different versions of rikara story...
I am loving this

Thanks Aparna!

I'm glad you liked this first chapter... Its the same story na, we just have to find different angles to it and get writing. Sometimes I wonder if I'm being too repetitive.

Thanks for all the love, stay tuned for updates!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Naina280599
Yayy! Another Rikara story from you is a treat. I'm gonna love this one too, for sure. It's quite interesting. Post soon. :)

Thanks for the love Naina! I'm glad you're liking this one too

Will post updates soon!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Interesting start.
I am loving the concept of this story.
Gauri character is awesome and the moment of realization was very well written.
Looking forward to read this story.

Thanks for the lovely compliment. I'm glad you liked the story open so much.

Gauri is a great character and a lot of fun to write even when she's being sad or introspective.

Will post updates soon so stay tuned!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar
nice oen

Thanks Ila... stay tuned for updates!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: twerping
I love how you bring out Gauri's inner world...make everything she does and thinks make sense and at the end of it, help us, as readers to relate to her.
This was stunningly written. Can't wait for you to continue with this!

Twerps... another gem of a comment from you! Take a lifetime's supply of Hermione-style hugs!

I've noticed my style of writing involves a lot of exposition and introspectiveness. We always get to know what my characters are thinking and feeling but not enough doing or interacting with others. This is my chance to work on that and that's why I chose to have the ensemble... or mostly all of the, cast on this fic. Hopefully interactions and dialogues will flow smoothly.

I'm glad if you think all my exposition reveals an extra bit of information or another angle to you that makes a character easier to understand or more fun, more detailed and more interesting.

Thanks for all the love hun... Will be updating soon so stay tuned!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sara1990
Ginie, please do continue. Well will love to see Shivay and Rudra in action with Gauri as well.

Hi Sara... You will get to see Shivaay, Rudra and a couple of others get in on the action!

So stay tuned!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...
Loved it... How RI realised that the concept of happy endings and prince.charming are vague...you have to be.your own savoir...continue asap

Kabhi to hum ladkiyon ko ye realize karna padta hai na?... 😆

Will update soon... Thanks for the love

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: yayini
Yaar am loving Gauri more by each passing day and your chapter just potrays my exact thoughts.. She never shies away that she is just 5 th grade pass but uses her brains to get out of trouble. When all t he women in the household sit and cry or scheme and plot, she is the one to use her brain to get omkie out of trouble. I want to see obros with Gauri bonding.. Rudy is the best for that.. She doesnot need any prince in shining armour.. she can save herself. Girl is a rockstar⭐️
Superb writing.. Love Jango.. Love Dr. Dang ki snakes.. Love Freezerlana.. Spread Love😆😆

We're all loving Gauri more and more with each passing day... Omki included... at least canon Omki already seems to be under her spell...😃

I just love how Gauri accepts who she is but is always looking to better herself without being ashamed of herself in anyway. She is definitely one for action and I love that about her... kal bhi kitne saare ideas jhaad rahi thi! She definitely is a rockstar!

OBros with Gauri... I'm almost worried about writing that... But let's see how things turn out. I'm more inclined to explore the relationship between Gauri and her jethji... Rudy of course will be the glue that keeps everyone together...always.

Jango, Dr.Dang ki snakes aur Freezerlana require our love and affection... so thanks for that!

Stay tuned for updates!