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Genie

@writergenie17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#521

Chapter 24

She knew how he felt huh? Cheeky li'l thing... I love this Gauri yaar. We should keep her drunk and chatty always. 😆

Poor Omki... his drunk wife is seducing him. And stopping short, just to confirm some heavy emotional stuff. Bechare ko to definitely paagal banake chodegi lagta hai. 😆

Awww... he said it. He told her just what she'd been craving to hear from him. Just like he wants to hear those three precious words from her, she needs proof of his trust in her. And he just gave it to her...

Awww again... humara Omki poora gantleman ban raha hai. So sweet. Uska khayal rakh Omki...

That was a great update Karthi... felt so nice to see these two sort things out even if one of them is blind drunk.

Chapter 25

Someone's hungover!

Awww... look how far our babies have come... sleeping wrapped around each other.

Someone looks like they're in a good mood after that super relaxing sleep huh? 😃

Oh poor thing is traumatised by the return of her memories... I love it!

Awww... Anika's godhbharai... ye to kabhi nahin hona show mein with the way they're bent of seperating ShivIka atm...

Don't put the cart before the horse Omki... pehle biwi ko pata, phir bacchon ke baare mein sochenge 😆

Awww... two little Dabangg princesses and one li'l Jatadhari hippie. I'm melting here... sach mein

Good job Omki... I'm proud of you, putting your wife's studies first.

She's still worried if something would happen to separate them again... hmmm. You gotta let go of your fears Gauri.

Eeek... Honeymoon! Oh am I happy now that I don't have to wait for the next update!

Lovely chapter Karthi... simply lovely

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#522

Chapter 26

AniRi's conversations are always gold... par aaj to sixer maar diya yaar. That was a lovely interaction... Anika clarifying ki Gauri ko apne fears ko peeche chodke Omki ki taraf dil khol kar badhna chaahiye.

Awww... Om was talking to Gauri's painting when she wasn't around... And Oh...that painting was of her on their wedding day!

And she's come out of her shell... my girl's decided and she knows what she wants! 👏

Karthi you're killing me here with this epic romance yaar... you write so well and I so want to see this now.

Teasing Gauri and naughty Omki ka combo to mujhe maarke hi rahega.

Woah... When Gauri knows what she wants, she gets pretty bossy about it!

Well... we're at the resort and they both kow why they're here.

That last part was very gracefully done Karthi... very expressive without being explicit.

Kudos on a great update! 👏

Can't wait to read more...

Lo ho gaya... maine apna vaada poora kiya. 😃

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#523

YAAASSS!!! FINALLY THEY BEXAME ONE SOUL.. WOOHOO!!!
I LOVED THIS UPDATE..
*DANCING IN GLEE*

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yayini

@yayini

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: writergenie17
Chapter 26

AniRi's conversations are always gold... par aaj to sixer maar diya yaar. That was a lovely interaction... Anika clarifying ki Gauri ko apne fears ko peeche chodke Omki ki taraf dil khol kar badhna chaahiye.
Awww... Om was talking to Gauri's painting when she wasn't around... And Oh...that painting was of her on their wedding day!
And she's come out of her shell... my girl's decided and she knows what she wants! 👏
Karthi you're killing me here with this epic romance yaar... you write so well and I so want to see this now.
Teasing Gauri and naughty Omki ka combo to mujhe maarke hi rahega.
Woah... When Gauri knows what she wants, she gets pretty bossy about it!
Well... we're at the resort and they both kow why they're here.
That last part was very gracefully done Karthi... very expressive without being explicit.
Kudos on a great update! 👏
Can't wait to read more...

Lo ho gaya... maine apna vaada poora kiya. 😃

Me giving jhappies.. 🤗

Thank you.. that was one long ipdate.. sorry I couldn't comment on your ff.. I was busy completing this. I will unres tomm for sure. Thanks for taking time to give it n your comments.. you know I love your feedback right.. I adore your style of writing and when you compliment my ff.. it's a big thing for me.. yeah.. the Sr.. its was very tricky.. I have to maintain the essence but it shouldn't be explicit.. very very tricky to write. I wrote deleted again wrote deleted certain lines to maintain the effect.. phew.. it's over😆

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Naina

@Naina280599

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#525

I really liked this chapter. I love the Aniri bond. Rikara scenes were too good. I loved the way they were teasing each other xD Tbh i do feel weird reading too sensual stuff when it's written straight away and so i skip that. But this was an amazing chapter. So wonderfully written. I really loved the way you write. Waiting for the next chapter. Post soon :)

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diya07

@diya07

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#526

Love u yayi 🤗 for the efforts u put in to ur passion which is writing and obviously for making our days better with ur daily dose of Rikara❤️Being a fan of a certain couple n writing just to satisfy the scenes which u wish to see 😆n being naturally a writer and u write bcoz u r a fan of both writing n the pair is different...and u proved time and again that u obviously fall in the second category..with right amount of passion feelings and everything in short ...this was a beautiful update yayi...the way u always mix emotions with sensuality is wonderful which makes it serene n never vulgur...😳

Yaaayyy🥳gauri in black sari...ahhh..how wonderful it was to even imagine a smiling omkie in his old self...how gauri said yes to the trip was cute n wonderful...finally...it happened😆

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#527

Omg...it was palangtodh update😆😛

Awesome..superb..👏👏

Plz update next part asap😳

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#528

ayyyeeehhhayyyeee!!!!

kya update hai...please soon ise agar tum khatam karogi to uske baad please iska ek part 2 ya...ek continueation start kar dena...

btw thanks mera reqst fulfill karne ke lie 🤗

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Rati0992

@Rati0992

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#529

Hey !! Read ur heal my soul n lost n found both ve written brilliantly loved it <3
keep writing keep shining ⭐️

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#530

sorry about commenting later!!!!

but when i was reading m grinning ear to ear...haayy kaaah aisa ek hot scene serial me v mil jaye!!!

baarish me bheeg gaye ek sunsaan si raste pe ek choti se kutiya me om n gauri dur dur tak koi nahi...barish bhi badh rahi hai or dono ka pyaar bhi...haaayyy

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