Rikaara FF: Lost & Found (completed) index pg 1 - Page 16

Originally posted by: writergenie17

Edit note : This was a super late comment for chapter 10... will comment on chapter 11 as soon as I read it cuz you just posted your update as I posted this comment!

Hmmm... finally our Omki is starting to get a glimmer of understanding...

Great writing Karthi! Very satisfying chapter to read. You managed to convey the pain and confusion from both sides equally well.

Omkara needs to do a lot more, stick his neck out really far if he wants to reach Gauri's hurting heart.

But we know Gauri is also not unwilling to give this a chance... so good times ahead. Whether its for people who love watching Omki suffer or people who love watching the two of them get back together.

Thanks for sharing this lovely piece of writing with us, very excited to see what happens next!

Originally posted by: writergenie17

Read on for comment on chapter 11

Kuch zyaada nahin ho gaya Omki? Trying to take advantage of the situation huh?

Omie is an emotional whirlpool. He was always one when it came to matters related to him. To others he will advise like sant saadhu.. but WRT to his mother, ridhima, Gauri he will be someone else. Possessive, protective, attention seeking, emotional atyachar.. all that..

Jealousy jaayaz hai... especially if it is against Rishabh... who in my mind looks like Karan Tacker. 😆

Hmm I was imagining a more chirpy and slender person.. Karan Tacker is a good fit..😆

Nice long update that I literally devoured in minutes... Like the way things are shaping up but bechaara Omki's so deprived that he's jhaadofying thirsty-ass lines and pushing way too soon. Thoda sabr karna seekho baccha...

Remember Omie's thirsty-ass line during fakemance.. Actually that inspired me to write this one. When he can pull a really cheesy one during fakemance.. he will pull more during real romance..

Cheesy Omie.. 😆

Eagerly waiting for whats gonna happen next!

Originally posted by: yayini

Wild ideas running through my mind.. couple spa😲🤣. I guess omie see zyaada main desperate ho gayi hoon🤣

Originally posted by: writergenie17

Hum sab ke sab tharki hain yaar yahaan... 😆 we'll welcome any wild idea you choose to pen down. Har koi desperate hai acche RiKara scenes ke liye.

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Yeh mahashit ne mujhe desperate kar Diya..

Haan show main humhe kuch honeymoon ya resort Wala scenes Milne Wala nahi Hai.. to ff hi sahi