Shivika Ts_Pal Bhar_ Sequel to MPBTC [Completed]

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farinaks

@farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Heartwrenching...full of pain
Tq fr pm
Literally I was crying all the time reading it
Continue soon
Pm me whenever u update

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Himanshi

@Blink_Cat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

ok... so this is highly emotional... kaise kar lete ho itna rulane wala update... when i c ur update ... befor start reading i put my tissue box beside me as it was too much needed for t moment...
shivaay start skipping his meds... then definitely he would have some problem during t function ... n his doctor would b there as may b her niece is sameer... anika would came 2 know abt his situation (may be)...
egarly wating 4 nxt ...; plz update soon
thanks 4 PM

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

glad my rudy is with his superman

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

Thnak you dear❤️

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Nohsin10
Awesome update 👏

Thank you Nohsin ❤️

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome update yar
in this story wat ever happens I wnt hate this Annika because here fault is Shivaay's and he had to suffer..
He let her go...and i wnt forgive him for this easily...
She had supported him in every situation and was even ready to give her life to save him and wat did he do
He abandoned her because she doesn't have Nkk...
so let him suffer...but Ya at the end..I still wanted to see them together but before that he should pay for his mistakes

Thnak you Aparna 🤗

Totally agree with you! 😉 I'm glad that you were able to understand me why I'm writting this.Making shivaay suffer this much! He needs this.Yeah he need this I know he had understood tht he was at fault but still he needs this.He choosed this by himself,No one forced him to do it and on top of that he know the consequences of it so there is no pity for him.No not at all! But still there is a smaller portion of heart which feels bad for him.I know it is really heart wrenching to see him like this,but he is responsible for this and he will suffer.

Sorry wrote alot! 😛 Just wanted to show my feeling regarding this.

Love yaa,

-Anya ❤️

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: water9786
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Loved the story dear. Awesome👏👏👏
Now I am 😭😭
and have to cry again in next updates😭

Well This was wonderful. Now at least Rudra is with him.
Waiting for next part...
Update soon😊

Hello Chhaya 🤗

Yaar I'm really sorry for making you cry my dear! But I hope you understand Why I'm doing this.

Yes,I think the next update will also be emotional.Never in my wildest dream I have ever thougth that I will be writing something so emotional.I'm really surprised by myself because out of nowhere I started writing such stuffs out of blue as if you know I only write Romance as well as humour but to my utter shock I started such stuffs.

But I'm really glad that you all are liking this.😃

Love yaa,

-Anya ❤️

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: itzanya32

Hello Chhaya 🤗
Yaar I'm really sorry for making you cry my dear! But I hope you understand Why I'm doing this.
Yes,I think the next update will also be emotional.Never in my wildest dream I have ever thougth that I will be writing something so emotional.I'm really surprised by myself because out of nowhere I started writing such stuffs out of blue as if you know I only write Romance as well as humour but to my utter shock I started such stuffs.
But I'm really glad that you all are liking this.😃

Love yaa,
-Anya ❤️

Hi Anya❤️

🤗

It's okay dear I understand.

Really then believe me your are doing a great job in it. So much pain, angst... everything is perfect yaar.

I am loving this inspite of the fact that it makes me cry😳😆

Love you too

-Chhaya