RiKara SS - Pretty Little Liars - interlude pg 13 (11/5/17)

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Hi,

I'm Sakura, those who read You and I Collide, may know me, for those who didn't; Nice to meet you!!🤗

So I'm basically trying my hand at some RiKara fictions and usually I write them on Alternative Universes. This one, you are about to read is similar in that sense. It has nothing to do with cannon's main plot, but the same characters and some prominent twists will be featured.

My Gauri is not your 5th pass from Bareilly, she is different and there are shades to her character than the absolute white and devotional girl we see on screen. Hopefully I'll manage to make you like her as the story progresses.

My Omkara is gray - yes - you read it right - he is gray and that too with a reason. He will do somethings harsh, make some bitter enemies and take some stupid decisions along the way, but then again I hope you'll stick with him till the end.

There is a character I've fished out from IB here, who is not featured in DBO, even in IB his importance is questionable. But, here he will play the kingmaker, keep your eye out for him. (Did you already guess who that is?😉)

About updates, they won't be frequent, but I will update whenever I can and I plan to finish it ASAP. Hopefully you'll be there to see this journey through to its destination.😊

I think that's enough for now enjoy the prologue below!

PROLOGUE


She had always known he was a gorgeous man; even without his eyes smoldering her with that golden fire in their dark depths, even without his fingers mapping every inch of her skin, or his lips tracing hers in sensuously gentle movements, she had been terribly attracted to him.

But now, standing there leaning against the threshold, her arms folded against the hastily buttoned up shirt that reached her knees; she wondered what a glorious sight he made in the crisp sunlight streaming in from the glass wall he was facing.

He had his arms folded, his back turned to her. In the golden light her eyes could trace the lines of his sculpted muscles, watch the shadows ripple over them as he breathed. His aura overwhelmed her, so much so that she could not stand the pull she felt anymore.

Her arms slid around his torso as she pressed her cheek against his back, smiling a little to herself. She could feel him stiffening under her touch, he did not turn around to embrace her.

"I was waiting for you," she muttered nuzzling against his skin.

"Why?" he asked darkly, "didn't get the proper headline yet?"

The step she took backwards had been a stunned one, her arms fell back to her sides numb from shock. He turned to face her, arms crossed and jaw tight. There was a fury burning behind his icy gaze.

"Because you've already got your story, right Miss. Gauri Kumari Sharma, reporter from Real TV?"



CHAPTER INDEX

Prologue - above

Chapter 1 - Page 3

Chapter 2 - page 5

Chapter 3 - page 7

Chapter 4 - page 8

Chapter 5 - page 10

Chapter 6 - page 12

Interlude - page 13

Did you find it worth your time?😃 Shall I continue to write?🤔

Please take a moment to give me some feedback.😳

Thanks for reading!😊😊

Love,

Sakura

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sakura... hiii... n yes me knows you 😆 from YNIC days but still its amazing to meet ya again ... n soo soon... yay... God bless ya girlie...

M hooked... kabhi bhi dena but updates dena zaroor 😆,,, please... n alternate universes are the best... alternate universes rock... its like the best of both worlds... one on tv n one in the world of imagination n with you stringing their tale together m happier.. 😃... just carry on... the prologue has upped my interest already... theirs hurt conflict attraction all rolled in this story of yours... n do you talk about our Rudy boy???

Okay so please... just carry on ... its more than worth my time ...😃

All the best to you n us for this new journey 😃...

Bye for now

Neha
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good to see you back
Please absolutely continue
Eagerly waiting for the next update
A dark Om sounds exciting
Interested to see what you do next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me

Sakura... hiii... n yes me knows you 😆 from YNIC days but still its amazing to meet ya again ... n soo soon... yay... God bless ya girlie...


M hooked... kabhi bhi dena but updates dena zaroor 😆,,, please... n alternate universes are the best... alternate universes rock... its like the best of both worlds... one on tv n one in the world of imagination n with you stringing their tale together m happier.. 😃... just carry on... the prologue has upped my interest already... theirs hurt conflict attraction all rolled in this story of yours... n do you talk about our Rudy boy???

Okay so please... just carry on ... its more than worth my time ...😃

All the best to you n us for this new journey 😃...

Bye for now

Neha

Hi Neha🤗
Me knows you too!😆😆 Nice to meet you too dear, I did say we'll be seeing each other soon!
Yes, I will update but it will be extremely irregular as my vacations are over I know right, alternate universes have a charm of their own and the traces of on screen magic.
About the prologue...I'll keep my lips tight shall I?
Yes, we're gonna need a lot of luck in this case.
Bye dear, see ya soon!
Sakura
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolove

Good to see you back
Please absolutely continue
Eagerly waiting for the next update
A dark Om sounds exciting
Interested to see what you do next

Good to see you here too!😃
I will update soon dear😳
I know right, there was a time when I thought he was gonna be the villain of IB😉😆
I hope you'll like my future chapters too.

Lots of love,
Sakura
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sakura, seems another super story is coming.. Prolog is awesome.. Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelSRJ

Sakura, seems another super story is coming.. Prolog is awesome.. Update soon.

I'm not sure about super but I'll try my best. Thanks dear! Will update soon!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww thanks a lot! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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i read " you n I collide" in one go
ur writing skill is like professionals i wonder if some where down the line you publish ur novel, in that case i might be the first one to buy it .


prologue seems intriguing update next part soon 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting
it's too different from the usual concepts
waiting for the next update

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