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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar

i know om have no interest in ishaana because he was now madly in love with his wife...but still om unknowingly giving her hint that he is happy because she is back which is not true...And ishaana thinks that om had still feelings for her and he is ready to fight to Get him back...but wat she was unaware is om had no interested in her as well as she doesn't know who is gauri and wat she is capable of...I really wanted to see the sheerni side of gauri and the protective side of om
both will be a treat to watch
i am really loving this story and will be waiting for the next update
with love
aparna


Thanks Aparna for such a lovely comment!

I'm glad you liked the last update... when you're convinced of something, or you want something pretty badly, it's easy to see what you want to see, which is what Ishaana is doing now. No matter what Om is really doing, she sees what she wants to see from him and interprets it the way she wants it to be.

Well, she's gonna be in for a rude awakening but not for some time now... for now, lets concentrate on finding out more about OmRi...

And of course, Gauri isn't gonna take any advances on her jatadhari lying down... It's gonna be a lot of fun so stay tuned!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Aarathi85

Wow wonderful update...loved...waiting for the next one ...and i wish ishana will get her answer through gauri and om by their closeness...


Thanks Aarathi for the lovely comment... I'm glad you liked the update. Ishaana will come to know about the truth... but it'll be some time before that and till then, we get to see OmRi and some other nice people who we've not seen for some time... 😆

Stay tuned for updates!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

Nice one... Really loved th way you described Ishaana is getting the wrong idea and in her delusion and omkara his gaurd is set i will be glad it will stay forever...


Thanks for the love Ila... Glad you liked the update.

Ishaana sees what she wants to see and interprets things to fit her liking at the moment... we'll see how that goes. Omki is definitely not gonna let things get messed up for his wife or family but will he be able to cover all the bases and ensure nothing bad ever happens?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: twerping

This was really good! I love the way you are showing the difference in what is going on in Om's head and how Ishaana is interpreting his actions. Of course, my senses are telling me to beware the vibes that Ishaana is setting off but hopefully whatever Om and Gauri have built together will stand the test of a sort of ex-flame. Moreover, love the bonding between the various family members...and hoping that Gauri successfully manages to steal those hair ties for good. Om really does look delectable when he wears the hair loose.

Thanks for the PM!


Thanks Twerps!

I love reading your comments... they're always so fun!

When we develop tunnel vision, we tend to see what we want to see. That's what Ishaana is doing atm. Omkara is still a bit guarded but we'll see what happens in the future...

I've always thought that Gauri will fit into the family like she's always been part of it, once all the MU and angst is dealt with. Before the Chulbul phase, Gauri and Omkara may have met ~5 times at most and she was going on about her pati her shaadi and her sasuraal. Gauri is a very people oriented person and she's gonna fit it anywhere, especially whre there's a big dramatic family like the Oberois.

About the hair ties, Omkara got the message when she stole his hair ties... let's see if he listens to it. I also love it when he looks like the original IB Omkara... his long hair just slays. I started watching him because he had long hair.

Anyways, exciting updates coming, so stay tuned!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Genie... 😃... so we move on with the story n wham we meet Ishana...

How deluded is this lady really... dont even feel an inch bad for her ... sorry... she's got this microscopic view of hers all set at each n every nano emotion that crosses Omkara's face n the worst bit is she thinks that all of it are reactions to her sudden reappearance.. *epic faceplam*... this girl needs a reality check... asap...

Omkara is worth-pulling-cheeks kinda cute... he's in this world if happiness n the very name Gauri lights up his face n makes me go aweee.. though with Ishana i do want him a little more alert but then he doesnt really know the ulterior motives... Gauri wasnt really there much but then still she pervaded all through.. arent she charming... cant wait for the party now though Ishana does make me cringe a bit... but dekhte hain na...

Your eye for detailing is amazing... makes for smooth reading... loved the way the narrative flowed seamlessly tracing the emotions of Omkara n the way they were interpreted by Ishana... yeah... did feel like shaking her up from her stupor but anyway...

Chalo thanks for this... :))
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me

Genie... 😃... so we move on with the story n wham we meet Ishana...

How deluded is this lady really... dont even feel an inch bad for her ... sorry... she's got this microscopic view of hers all set at each n every nano emotion that crosses Omkara's face n the worst bit is she thinks that all of it are reactions to her sudden reappearance.. *epic faceplam*... this girl needs a reality check... asap...

Omkara is worth-pulling-cheeks kinda cute... he's in this world if happiness n the very name Gauri lights up his face n makes me go aweee.. though with Ishana i do want him a little more alert but then he doesnt really know the ulterior motives... Gauri wasnt really there much but then still she pervaded all through.. arent she charming... cant wait for the party now though Ishana does make me cringe a bit... but dekhte hain na...

Your eye for detailing is amazing... makes for smooth reading... loved the way the narrative flowed seamlessly tracing the emotions of Omkara n the way they were interpreted by Ishana... yeah... did feel like shaking her up from her stupor but anyway...

Chalo thanks for this... :))


Hi Neha!

So good to hear from you yaar!

Glad you liked the last update... Yeah, Ishaana is kinda having tunnel vision at the moment and Omki is quite lost in his own world of RiKara😃 He is so cute isn't he? Omkara in love was quite a bit of fun to write

Even if he's not all that alert, like Shivaay said, there's whole bunch of people looking out for him now... chief among them his wifey. We'll see a lot more of Gauri soon... the party is still being written, so many other plot bunnies are hopping across my little brain that its sort of like Bunny Burrow in there now *pat yourself on the back if you got the reference*

Thanks for all the love... I'm kinda OCD about getting my details right. I'll go back and read whatever I wrote like half a dozen times and change things every single time until I'm sorta satisfied with the way things turn out... it's exhaustive in a fun way but it also takes me a looong while to write something good enough for posting.

But enough of my blabbering on atm, stay tuned for updates soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yet again, I missed two chapters. I read it both in 1 go. I am so sorry for late reply. Omkie what have you done?? You gave false hope to Ishana. I really loved it that Omkie has turned into Ishqbaazi mode thinking about Gauri. Om's sherni is not going to be quite. Will like to see Sherni gauri soon. Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sara1990

Yet again, I missed two chapters. I read it both in 1 go. I am so sorry for late reply. Omkie what have you done?? You gave false hope to Ishana. I really loved it that Omkie has turned into Ishqbaazi mode thinking about Gauri. Om's sherni is not going to be quite. Will like to see Sherni gauri soon. Waiting for your next update


Come on Sara... you don't need to apologize for commenting a bit late. I'm always happy to hear from you guys, late or not. So stop apologizing.

Omkara ki Ishqbaazi to full speed pe chal rahi hai. Poor Omki is totally whipped 😃



Has no idea that he's giving any sort of signals to Ishaana, who has herself developed tunnel vision. Not a great combination...

Gauri is also quite laid back when it comes to their relationship but like she said already, she's not gonna just stand by and watch if some one thinks they can make a move on her man. It's gonna be fun to see what she does...

Thanks again for the lovely comment and stay tuned for updates!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi y'all

It was lovely to read and reply to a whole bunch of awesome comments once more...

For all you people who wanted more RiKara, here's your fix. This chapter is entirely RiKara cuteness... Hope you guys like this one just as much as you seem to be liking the others.

So without further ado, here's
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Chapter 8 - So baby pull me closer...

Around 4 in the afternoon, Omkara wandered up to his wife's studio looking for her, only to find her flitting between five different dress forms arranged in front of her, putting finishing touches on the outfits she'd designed for the family members for the party that evening.

Ever since the family had come to know of Gauri's talent at designing, almost all of them were quite insistent on being dressed by her, at least for special occasions. At first, it had been mostly out of their wanting to encourage her and give her the confidence to try and do the same professionally, but soon everyone fell in love with her sense of design and the way she incorporated each of their personalities into her design process. So now, any time someone in the house had a special event to attend or a party to go to, Gauri was the one they went to first. And she delivered... each and every time.

Recently, the Oberois had been seen gracing page 3 spreads on various magazines and fashion blogs more and more and everyone was raving about the mysterious new designer that they'd started to patronize. Gauri being who she was, didn't want any of the limelight and had preferred to stay relatively unknown, not using the Oberoi name or connections to get any leverage in her line of work. But her talent was gaining quite a bit of attention and her little boutique already catered to some illustrious customers including certain A-listers and movie stars.

Even with her boutique taking up much of her time, Gauri always put her family first and really enjoyed designing for them. With the party that evening giving her another opportunity to dress her favorite people to the nines, Gauri was in her zone, her mind flying through different ideas as she pinned something here, tucked a fold there and worked herself up, basically re-thinking every design decision she'd made on these outfits. Almost on the verge of changing pretty much everything on the outfit she'd designed for Anika, Gauri felt herself being pulled back into her husband's warm, solid chest, his arms wrapping around her petite waist and his chin rested on the crown of her head.

"I know what you're thinking right now... Stop. Tumne hum sab ke liye jo bhi design kiya hai, I am sure perfect hoga. Chalo, ab mujhe batao kya tum mere saath aaj shaam ki party chod kar bhaagne ke liye taiyyar ho?"

Sighing as the feeling of being in Omkara's arms and his warmth pervaded through her entire body, Gauri snuggled into his hold, situated her head against his shoulder and pressed a small kiss to the side of his neck in silent appreciation for his understanding and the attempt to distract her from her imminent meltdown.

Om smiled at her, pecked her cheek in return and tucked her back into his shoulder

"Lekin seriously, this is turning into a production yaar... Bahar itna confusion chal raha hai decoration aur khaane ko lekar. I actually heard Anika yelling at some poor soul on the phone a few minutes back. Wo din ba din doosri SSO banti jaa rahi hai. I swear... agar mom nahin hoti na uske saath, to shaayad phone tod deti..."

Gauri giggled, her own hands finding their way on top of Omkara's, effectively keeping him there as she leaned back further, putting all her weight trustingly on him.

"Thank you... Aapne abhi yahaan aakar shaayad sab ko bacha liya aaj... I was rethinking everything aur saare designs ko probably bigaad deti. Phir kya hota Oberois ke izzat ka?"

"Falooda... aur kya?" he snickered

Giggling again, she slapped a warm, muscular arm playfully before pouting at him

"Seriously... We love it when you make beautiful things for us to wear. Magar tumhe itni tension ho rahi hai iski wajah se to we should probably dial it back..."

"Aisa kuch nahin hai... I just want everything to go well today. Aaj bus aapka birthday nahin balki aapke academy ka announcement bhi hone ja raha hai... To aaj bahut important din hai and I just want it to be perfect for you... for all of us."

"Aur tumne aaj tak baar baar ye prove kar diya hai ki tumko apne work ko lekar tension lene ki zaroorat nahin hai. You are amazing at what you do Gauri!"

She turned to kiss his neck again as a thank you, because in this position it was the only part of him she could reach... but her clever hubby captured her lips in his and turned what might have been a simple peck, into a full-blown make out session that ended with Gauri pressed against the wall with her arms wrapped around his neck, her fingers woven thru his hair and his hands on her waist under her kurta, fingers dancing along her soft skin.

Chuckling at her dazed expression and flushed face as he pulled away, Omkara ran his fingers along her waist once more, tickling her back into awareness and savoring the blush that darkened her cheeks once she was back to normal. He was leaning back in to kiss her once more when he ended up kissing her hand which had come up to stop his progress.

"Na... aur aage aapko jaane diya to hamara poora dopahar aise hi chala jaayega. Bahut kaam baaki hai aaj... Ab hume jaane dijiye, please"

"Gauri tum to shameless ho gayi ho yaar... poora dopahar! Kya kya soch liya tumne? Mere jaise innocent ladke ko corrupt karne jaa rahi thi kya?"

Shaking her head at his overacting, she pushed him gently, making him free her

"Aapne Rudy bhaiyya se is hafte kuch zyaada FaceTime kar liya lagta hai. Itni overacting to wo bhi nahin karte"

Walking back to another one of her outfits and fiddling with the dupatta on it, Gauri asked

"Waise... I am appreciative of the fact ki aap upar aaye aur hume distract kiya par aap yahaan humse kuch poochne aaye the kya? Ya kuch chahiye tha?"

"Actually... haan. Tumse kuch baat karni thi"

Omkara held her hand and pulled her gently to a couch situated in one corner of the studio.

"Kya hua Omkaraji... sab kuch theek hai na?"

"Yeah... nothing's wrong. Bas tumse kuch poochna tha... Aaj subeh tum Ishaana se mili"

"Haan... aur humne hi aapko bhi bataaya ki wo aayi hain. Unhone kuch kaha aapse? Aap pareshan lag rahe hain"

"Aisi koi baat nahin hai Gauri... Tumne aaj mujhse kaha ki main Ishaana ko friendship ka ek aur mauka doon. Tumhe Ishaana se milkar kya laga? Tum uske saath comfortable thi?"

"Omkaraji agar Ishaanaji ke saath friendship badhaane mein aapko humari fikr ho rahi hai to aapko bilkul bhi fikr karne ki zaroorat nahin hai. Hume iss se koi shikaayat nahin hai. Hum to bas aapki khushi chaahte hain... hamesha ki tarah. Agar aapko Ishaanaji ke saath dosti karne ka mauka mil raha hai aur aap unse dosti karna chaahte hain, to aapko humare baare mein sochne ki zaroorat nahin hai"

"Mujhe wo sab pata hai Gauri... I am not asking you ki tumhe mere Ishaana se dosti karne se kya lagta hai... Main Ishaana ke baare mein tumhari raai jaanna chaahta hoon. Us se baat karke tumhe kaisa laga? Tum uske baare mein kya sochti ho?"

His wife was looking puzzled at this question so Omkara clarified

"Dekho Gauri... I trust your opinion. Tum logon mein aksar achai hi dekhti ho magar tumhare opinions ki main bahut kadar karta hoon. Mujhe kuch ajeeb si feeling hui aaj jab main Ishaana se mila. Is baare mein maine Shivaay se bhi baat ki. I want to know ki tumhe kya laga"

"Humein to kuch ajeeb nahin laga magar humne unse shaayad hi do minute baat kiya ho... Agar aapko kuch theek nahin lag raha to aapko kuch kehne ya karne ki zaroorat nahin hai. Is mein koi zabardasti nahin hai Omkaraji"

He nodded his head slightly, as if not fully satisfied with her answer

"Acha... agar aapko aisi kuch feeling hai jo aapko Ishaanaji ke saath comfortable nahin hone de rahi hai to theek hai. Hum aur jethji hain na... sab kuch sambhal lenge. Agar aapko thodi si bhi michmichi waali feeling, jaise Anika Di kehti hain... aai, to hum ya Anika di ya phir jethji unko aapse door kar denge."

Omkara still looked vaguely troubled so she decided to distract him just like he had a little while ago

"Waise aap humare hain... poori tarah se. Aur hum aapko aise hi uthaake kisi ke haath mein nahin saunp denge. Hum aapki patni hone ka haq aaj poori tarah se jataane waale hain"

That made him smile a bit and he turned to her with a challenging expression

"Wo kaise?"

"Aise..."

She leaned closer to him, slid a hand into his silky hair and caught his lips in a bruising kiss that had him clutching her to himself quite firmly when she pulled back almost a whole minute later. Satisfied that she still had the power to turn her husband into a dazed but happy mess, Gauri leaned back in his hold and smirked up at him

"Agar tum aise hi apna haq jataati rahi aaj party mein, to main apne actions ki guarantee nahin de sakta. Aur hum dono ko party jaldi hi chod kar wapis aana padega"

"To humne kab kahaa ki humein poori raat party mein guzaarni hai?"

With a smirk, Gauri got up and walked out of the room, leaving her husband with only her dress forms to shake his head at, grinning about his wife's antics.

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That's that for Chapter 8... Hope you guys liked it

Please don't forget to like and comment your ideas, thoughts and opinions on this chapter and any random things you wanna share with me, I always love hearing from you

As usual, any and all feedback will be turned into a protein shake for my soul...

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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG!!! stunned to see ithni bold aur romantic gouri. Even Om was stunned
Just loved this version of gouri, because I have not come across this gouri in any of the stories.

Waiting yaar... update soonish ...
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