I KEPT YOUR PRIDE FROM DYING - RIKARA FF PART 6 Updated PG 11

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- I KEPT YOUR PRIDE FROM DYING - PART 1

Hi guys...back with my FF. The last one I had written was in the RAGLAK thread. Those who have read my FFs before know about my genre of writing. I love independent and strong female characters. The characters in my story essentially are the same but the timeline will vary.

JANUARY 2014

"You have once again proved what a cheap and disgusting woman you are!"...his eyes were burning with anger and he was fiercely gritting his teeth. "When I did not accept you as my wife, you disguised yourself and entered my house as a servant...so that you could come closer to me and gain my attention. You partly succeeded in your mission...and half of my family thinks you as a wonderful "boy"...but I know your truth"...he paused for a moment..."You are nothing but a home breaker and a gold digger"

He waited for her response...she was quiet...this irritated him even more

"Look here...I do not want my family to get hurt or shocked because of you"...he said in a cold, low tone..."Please leave immediately...whatever has passed between you and me right now shall remain within this room...and I don't want my loved ones to get hurt because of someone like you"

She was still quiet...an eerie silence existed in the room...

Now he lost it..."For heaven's sake...speak up...why did you do this...explain"...he demanded

Finally with much pain and with a heavy voice she spoke

"When I came here Sir, I did not have any expectations...and now that I am leaving...I shall give no explanation...You have your right to think what you want about me...and I have my right to not defend myself. Sir, you have always been there in heart and emotions...and you are still there. But from now on...the better judgement shall supersede the emotions. I wish you all success and happiness in life...I shall take your leave...You are right about one thing...your family members must not be hurt by my actions"

With these words she rushed out of the room...

He stared behind her...for a moment his emotions were mixed...this was not the exact response that Omkara Singh Oberoi had expected from Gauri Kumari Ssarma.

...

JANUARY 2017

"Bhaiyya...the work of my fashion store is in full swing"...Priyanka Oberoi beamed with delight. She was finally coming out of her brothers' shadows and was planning something for herself.

"I have shortlisted some designer and boutique brands who would be supplying the apparels"...she continued as her three brothers Shivaay, Om and Rudra listened..."Have spoken to some of them."

"But tomorrow...is an important day...I have a meeting with a leading designer boutique head...she is doing amazing work and has attained amazing success over the past year. This year she was awarded the Emerging Fashion Designer of the year."

"Okay..." Shivaay said "what's the name of the designer/brand?"

"The brand name is GS and they have two bestselling outlets in Mumbai with a niche clientele..."...Priyanka continued..."The designer's name is Miss..." she was cut short as her phone rang "Excuse me...need to receive the call...its urgent"

When she returned after the call...only Rudra was sitting...Shivaay and Om and left for a meeting.

"Hey Prinku...I shall attend the meeting with you" he said..."You know the elder two aren't very much interested in this...but I love FASHION"

Priyanka smiled...Rudra continued..."What name did you mention?"

"I haven't yet" Priyanka laughed..."Her name is Miss Gauri Sharma"

...

JANUARY 2017

She stood in the balcony of her house staring at the deep blue sky...the vast expanse...endless. Her white anarkali...was a stark contrast to the dark evening...but hadn't she always been the epitome of positivity and hope? So much had occurred over the past 3 years that she had no time to sit and think.

The day before she received a letter from Priyanka Oberoi regarding some exclusive designs with a Fashion store that the Oberois were planning. It was a matter of high esteem and prestige...but she did not know whether she was rejoicing or repenting. Business with the Oberois...a dream probably... but in her case it was a challenge

Of course, this was not totally unexpected...yet she did not expect it. But now she was ready for anything in life...anything including Mr Omakara Singh Oberoi.

Gauri Sharma had come a long way from Gauri Kumari Ssarma...and now she lived her life without any expectations and any explanations.

...

To be contd...

LOVE

PRIYA 😊



SUBSEQUENT PARTS

Part 2 : Page 4

Part 3 : Page 6

Part 4 : Page 8

Part 5 : Page 9

Part 6 : Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb plot I wanted the same plot some where down the line in serial too any ways it was
Interesting intruiging and nice written
Update soon waiting waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww...My Priya dii...amazing start...I still remember the last time I read your RagLak OS...it was wonderful and so is this...would be waiting for the story to be continued...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing start... The best part being strong Gauri.. Loved it and waiting for the inevitable showdown... Do update soon
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I'm in. You have no idea how much I love strong female characters. The start was captivating! Good luck for the future chapters!
Cheers,
Sakura
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi priya!!!
This is the first time i'm reading ur writing..
R u by chance a part time writer😆 yaar..
It is great ...simple and yet amazing writing..
I too love strong women...

Ps- Tum tho chupa rustom nikli yaar..😆
Agar mujhe pata tha ki tum likthi ho..tho i would've pestered u to write something soon..chalo ab pata chalgaya na..chodungi nahi tumhe🤣

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow Priya di...

Amazing...

I want RiKara's chemistry after writing the boring chemistry exam...

I like the way you portrayed Gauri's character...

Can Om get a slap from Gauri???😆
One of my wish...

Continue soon di...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome girl!!! This is the first time Iam into an AT.Itnis more interesting than the show.Waiting for the next part.Gauri now a strong independent girl.Way to go... 🥳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PriyA i didnt know you where a writer

Loved the first part alot

Cant wait to read the next part!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you guys for reading and commenting...😊

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