Shivika ff: Repercussions & Fallout (Sorry and a question)

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||REPURCUSSIONS & FALLOUT ||

Premise: After Tia's revelations, Anika's and Rudy's plan revealed. Rohit is Anika's childhood friend. They grew up in the same orphanage till she was adopted. He helps her find Dushayant.

SHOT 1

"So that was your master plan." His sardonic voice cuts through the haze that everyone seemed to be suspended in.

"Positively unbelievable...don't you think" I mutter, crossing my fingers, already picking up on his less than pleased demeanor.

"Do you even realize what you have done?" I unconsciously take a step back moving towards Rohit. "Don't you dare move away from me." He growls grabbing my arms, a gesture he seems to take immense pleasure in. I wince. How had I forgotten that MR.SSO's mind didn't quite work the way normal peoples does.

"I don't understand." I frown. "No one in their right minds would dare lift a finger against your reputation now. Everyone knows the Oberois are beyond reprimand. In fact I wouldn't be surprised if Tia..." I trail off as I see the fire in his eyes. He doesn't seem happy..."What did I not account ..."

"That is not what I am..." he thunders leaving me suddenly to fall back. I suddenly feel bereft.

"Do you...Do you have any idea...Do you not know what you have put me through in the last few days?"

"If it is anything close to what I have felt..." I mutter " I mean, all you had to do was convince Tia that you would marry her, and you seemed to be doing a pretty good job of that even without knowing the whole story. So it seemed pointless letting you on in. Now I on the other hand had to make sure that you would sit in that dratted mandap, but time dushyant's entry so perfectly that you wouldn't tie your self to that cheapde. Bade aiye mujhe batane waale ..."

His mutinous expression does nothing to reassure me. For the life of me I can't understand what is annoying him. Except if...even the thought hurts but... "Shivaay, are you...are you angry because...this means your deal won't go through." He stiffens imperceptibly and my heart sinks "Shivaay I understand business is important for you...but she was foisting someone's child on you Shivaay!"

"You think I'm mad because of the merger?!" He thunders incredulously.

I frown. Bhagad billa really doesn't make anything easy does he?

"Then...is it because you...love her?"

"Shut up Anika!...just just Shut up! If you can't even figure out why I'm angry then there really is nothing left to talk about" He grabs my arms and I wince.

"Woah dude...you're hurting her. You should be thanking her." As his hands tighten around me I want to kill Rohit for interfering. Talking back to Shivaay when he is in the ZONE is like waving a red flag infront of a bull.

" Lagta hai kissi ne apko tameez nahi sikhaye hain. Jab pati patni baat karte hain tho beech main nahi bolte. Itne bhi manners nahi sikhayen kya, tumhare mom aur dad ne?"

i feel Rohit stiffen behind me and instinctively squeeze his hand. This man will always manage to find the exact buttons to hurt my friends. Not today.

"Shivaay! You have no right to speak to Rohit like that! Aur konsi patni? Kiski patni? Aap tho tia se shaadi karne ke liye itne excited the. You will never, never speak to Rohit like that. Maafi Maango!"

The expression on his face sends shivers down my spine.

" Maafi maangana tho door ki baat anika, he will never breathe next to you again. Thank you for helping Anika, but Get the hell away from anika and get the hell out of here!"

" Okay he'll leave." i pause drinking in the surprise on his face before adding "But I leave with him." i take a step back afraid that he might just as well incerinate me with the fire in his eyes.

"Aap mariye apna tadi kisi aur ke saamne. Main apki raita phir kabhi saaf nahi karne waali." I say furiously grabbing Rohit's arm. Rohit raises one eyebrow, but doesn't risk saying anything. He knows not to mess when I am furious.

"Anika! If you don't leave his hand I will kill him." His soft voice chills me. I drop Rohit's hand unconsciously.

He look at me for a long second before picking up my hand, and i hate the way it makes my arm tingle. " Omkara, Rudra, find Rohit a guestroom. Away from mine and Anika's room. I don't think Anika would appreciate it if I accidently hurt her...friend. I and my wife need to have a long talk." he mutters before dragging me towards...our room.




INDEX:

SHOT#1 Pg#1 (anika pov)

SHOT#2 Pg#2 (rudra pov)

SHOT#3 Pg#4(omkara pov)

SHOT#4 Pg#5 (Shivaay pov)

SHOT#5 Pg#7 (Anika's pov)

SHOT# 6 Pg#10 (Rohit's Pov)

SHOT# 7 Pg# 12 (Shivaay's Pov)

SHOT# 8 Pg # 15 (Shivika Pov)

SHOT#9 Pg # 18 (Anika Pov)

Shot # 10 Pg #20 (Shivika pov)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesomee yar..
you know if ever a guy named rohit would come to OM ...SSO WILL FINISH HIM...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hahahhaa, love it! hamara rohit aa gaya 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I always wanted a jealous Shivay
He can get so jealous that he confess his feelings
Update soonish
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was awsm...
Rohit aagaya... Shivay ko jalkukda Bana gaya😆
Loved it
Continue soon
Do pm when u update😊
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awaiting part 2 . . . . .


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WHoa Whoa WHOA !!! This is awesome !!! 👏
such an exciting read! 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
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SHOT 2

Rudra's pov:

I know bhabhi will face the brunt of bhaiya's anger, but I still can't help but be worried. The thing is bhaiya is used to being at the centre of things. He is so used to being the wall that I don't think he would be able to digest not knowing about such an elaborate plan. And also there's Rohit. If bhaiya is alpha male...then Rohit is definitely no less. I size him up cataloguing all that I know about him. Oh, definitely not the way I check out my female conquests, but if he were fighting for bhabhi...bhaiya is in for big trouble.

I narrow my eyes at the possibility. If Rohit were to win it would tear apart bhaiya. He just wouldn't survive. But if it provided an additional incentive for bhaiya to accept his damn feelings...

"So who do you think will win this round?" Rohit's voice cuts my reverie jerking me back to his presence. I look over and see that Om starts similarly. We look at each other and I realize...he's been thinking the same thing.

"Matlab?"

"Arey, they are obviously going to fight. And everyone back in my dorm room also knows how exciting shivika fights are. You should hear Anika describe their fights. She insists that she wins more than he does, but in my opinion he shuts her up just as much as she does. "

"Shivika fights?"

"Dorm room"

"Oh that's the ship name that I and Sahil came up with. And I go to college...used to. I got done last month. A little late for my age, but I started late. I guess I came just in time for helping out Anni with SSO's...well raita. But you guys haven't answered. Who do you think is going to win this round? Personally I think Mr.Oberoi. But don't you dare tell Anika. Woh mujhe kaccha chaba daalegi."

"Definitely bhaiya."

"Definitely Shivaay" Omkara adds.

"And I think that's because of me" I raise an eyebrow, wondering what makes him think like that.

"Because a jealous man doesn't fight fair." He explains, and I grin matching O's expression.

"So you don't...love bhabhi?" I ask...just to be sure.

"Of course I do! But not in the way your bhaiya thinks. But I don't think we should let your bhaiya know that. I think he needs the motivation to admit his feelings. Anika's convinced that he doesn't and can't love her."

"Kya? Bhabhi ko aisa kyun lagta hain? I know Shivaay doesn't show his feelings like normal humans, but anyone can see that he loves Anika." O protests immediately.

"Think of this from Anika's point of view. He did sit in that mandap today. And naam khoon khandaan etc. have always been so important for him. She doesn't think it is possible for him to ever except her as his wife, someone with no surname. Someone who has absolutely no idea about her life before she turned 8 years old"

"Bhaiya loves her. He might not know that himself, but he loves her"

"But, does that mean Anika loves him?" O asks, a frown marring his forehead.

"Now that is confidential information!" Rohit says grinning. And I cant help but match his expression. His laugh is like bhabhi's...downright infectious.

"Let's say hypothetically she does..." O says, still smiling

"Then?"

"Then" he pauses contemplating, his smile suddenly wiped out," she won't be doing anything about it because..."

"She has no hope" I add completing his sentence, a touch somberly.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow... Nice update 👏
Team OmRuRo to unite Shivika...
It will be something interesting... 😆
Please try to make the updates longer...
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊

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