Drabble Series: A Romantic Divorce (NEW-DRABBLE Pg 34) 25th February - Page 13

Once again the update was absolutely brilliant..once upon a time what was Shivaay's forte today the very same environment seems to suffocate Shivaay and take his life away from him..all this because of his one blunder where without thinking he introduced Tia as his wife to the world and he dug a pit for himself right at that moment and today for the sake of keeping appearances, he has walked in to a high society event with Tia and every minute Shivaay is spending there, away from Anika, it seems like life is being seeped out of him...and all he can think about is his beloved wife Anika and how he can kick out Tia, the Kapoors faraway from his family, his loved ones, protecting them...I am sure Shivaay will find a way soon..and turn the tables and ace the game...reading about Shivaay in the party seemed like, Shivaay's body though was physically present there, but his mind and heart were faraway with the woman who is his wife and his love...hehe...no wonder Shivaay leaves the event and heads to his home, where is heart lies...now coming to the scenario in the Oberoi household... hearing shouts and screams, Shivaay's first reaction is obviously panic, fearing for Anika's safety..but the reality is far off from a panic situation..Om, Priyanka, Rudra, Soumya, Siddarth, Mallika are playing hide and seek, with Sahil as the record keeper, how cute...Shivaay holding Anika seating her on his lap, close to his heart...awww..this was dreamily romantic...Anika telling Shivaay she has never been found, this is so poignant, for a girl like Anika, she has faced tough situations and never received love and maybe in her past no one tried to find the lost child in her, but with Shivaay he has always given her the assurity and proved through his actions that even if she is lost, he will find her at all cost...and Shivaay is going to play hide and seek just as his wife, Anika wishes...how sweet is this...I am loving it...and I am sure Shivaay will win the tougher challenge looming over their heads and keep Anika and his family safe...awesome update... absolutely lovely...keep up the good work going!

Hi Napster

Navin.. i dont have the gift if words like u do but i will try because ur writing not only deserves but demands it. Once again this update was beautiful as always but there was smthg bitter sweet in it. I don't know y but it moved me so much so tht my eyes misted. Even though there is nothing overtly sad or angsty in it (and i ve read a lot of such ffs) i felt sad for the man Shivaay is and the predicament he is in which in turn is making Annika cry. I felt sad for the fake world tht man is caught up in because he has taken up the mantle of keeping up the naam khoon khandaan of Oberois. Like in this case he almost missed hanging out with the ppl he loved and relaxing by indulging in childhood games because he has to be at a social event for no other reason except tht he is SSO and he has to meet the social obligations due to the Oberoi name. He has missed out on so many small joys of life and is only now realising it because of Annika. Tht makes me a bit sad. Now tht he has realised he wud never be able to go back to the hollow life he was leading even if Annika is not in the picture. He has sacrificed so much for his family and i dint think even they realise it. He needs tht one person to love him and with whom he can be just Shivaay and not SSO. Now tht he's found her hopefully he will never let her go.

hi wow buddy lovd it conti soonish

Please continue with the Drabble pretty please your writing is magical and intriguing at the same time..

Navin love!!

You outdo yourself each time. Kudos to you girl, this was yet again one of the best of the written pieces I have read and the realisation ...hands down wins

Another lovely piece from you! This was absolutely sweet and adorable - the best part being Shivaay's realization of his hollow world and how he's been chasing it for nothing. :)

I really need Gul Khan to sign you up a writer for this show ASAP!!! You would give us, the audience, everything we wish to see and more!!!

I am all caught up and oh my dear universe, these drabbles are simply divine, I love them so much.