The Joker l An Irreverent Daksh Drabble l Part 2 Updated Pg6 18Dec

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Anu

@chottekikhushi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Creepy, witty and brilliant!! I could totally imagine Daksh thinking all this!! Do write more!!

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: smitar
I love it!!!!! haan, koi dentist made a lot of money off Daksh.

A request to the genius munda, Daksh.

Costume mein bhi thoda khayal rakh. Bring your wonderful brain to focus on your costumes. Half the time you look like a circuswala. Clothes maketh the man, suna to hoga hi. And clothes definitely maketh the villain. So get going.

Smita! *hugs* Thank you so much.

Those 3/4 trousers and tight jackets with odd tassels and brass thingies are totally ugh. I agree, thodi class honi chahiye bande mein!

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: drafsul
Awesome ... brilliantly written

Thank you! :)

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: chottekikhushi
Creepy, witty and brilliant!! I could totally imagine Daksh thinking all this!! Do write more!!

Thank you so much! It just wouldn't go out of mind once that image of the Joker got stuck there 😆

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sree07
⭐️ rocking one 👏

Thank you! 😳

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Hey! First of all, thanks for the PM!

I am bedazzled by this piece. The macabre and sinister quality of The Joker came through so well! And the way you delineated Shivaay and Daksh's rivalry and how he insidiously sets the cat among the pigeons in the Oberoi mansion...outstanding! And I have to admit, the part about Dakshs teeth had me 🤣

Hope to see more of your writing on the forum😃

Edited by YeHoKyaRahaHai - 8 years ago

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: YeHoKyaRahaHai
Hey! First of all, thanks for the PM!

I am bedazzled by this piece. The macabre and sinister quality of The Joker came through so well! And the way you delineated Shivaay and Daksh's rivalry and how he insidiously sets the cat among the pigeons in the Oberoi mansion...outstanding! And I have to admit, the part about Dakshs teeth had me 🤣

Hope to see more of your writing on the forum😃

Thank you so much for your kind words, Amri 😳

The implausibility of Daksh's instant and over the top declaration of love, and that rictus grin of his is so annoying.

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smitar

@smitar

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+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Smita! *hugs* Thank you so much.

Those 3/4 trousers and tight jackets with odd tassels and brass thingies are totally ugh. I agree, thodi class honi chahiye bande mein!

His pants were torn at both knees. LOL! Bhikari lag raha tha. Anika at least thought him a carpenter. Wahi bahot he.

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LiveLoveLaugh96

@LiveLoveLaugh96

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Hahha loved it 😆

I dont like Daksh at all but great writingg and an amazing POV 👏

Thanks alot for the PM; would love to read more stories from u 😳

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: LiveLoveLaugh96
Hahha loved it 😆
I dont like Daksh at all but great writingg and an amazing POV 👏

Thanks alot for the PM; would love to read more stories from u 😳

Thank you! There's something rather uncomfortable about him, isn't there?! He just invites odd thoughts 😆