OmRu, ShivIka & Daksh FF(Shot12@Pg19) 25.12.16 - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: -Areeba-

Believe me Fizzy, when I woke this morning I had the same scenario in my mind where Mehndi wali may put S because of Sahil/Shivaay confusion. 😆 and you penned it down. 🤗
Mai bata rahi Ye wala part aa Sakta hai show mai.

It was cute. Let's see how Shivaay will see her mehndi. 😃 Nice update Fizzy and thank you so much for the PM.
p.s. Is it Fizzy or Fizzu?! 😛



This is why it's said "Dil ko Dil say rah hoti hai" 😆

Yeah I want it to happen on screen aswell.

There are many but i love fizzu the most 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
awesome update dear
loved it very much
plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
The mehndi part was uber cute, and the confusion- ROFL.
Waiting for the next!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
mehandi part was cute... everythng happens for a reason...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry Fizzy .. I was away from IF from last few days.. I read both 5 th and 6 th part today ... I loved it.. It has everything romance+fear+comedy+friendship+jealousy+tadibaaz Anika everything ... Perfectly balanced... I loved it so much...
Thank you so much for the Pm babe... I surely would not have wanted to miss this fun filled ff of yours... this light hearted piece of writing of yours has glued me here and all I want to say is keep writing kyuki dil mange more dost... 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: pritzz

Sorry Fizzy .. I was away from IF from last few days.. I read both 5 th and 6 th part today ... I loved it.. It has everything romance+fear+comedy+friendship+jealousy+tadibaaz Anika everything ... Perfectly balanced... I loved it so much...

Thank you so much for the Pm babe... I surely would not have wanted to miss this fun filled ff of yours... this light hearted piece of writing of yours has glued me here and all I want to say is keep writing kyuki dil mange more dost...😉



It's alright dost 😳
Wish to see you around 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
I love it Fizza 😳 I am thrilled to see Om went with her instead of that stupid ponytail...you can tell how much I hate him 😆 I can't tolerate him with Anika even in FF 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Shot7: Why does he always ruin it?

Anika who was awe struck by the sculpture made by Om as a wedding gift for Shivaay & Tia. She never thought ShiTia looked so good together. She gave the credit to Om's artistic talent that made them look good for the first time. Chacha was fuming with anger as he was carrying the heavy sculpture and Anika was unable to decide where to put it. Anika takes the sculpture from chacha.

Anika keeps on looking at the best spot when Daksh comes in playing with the ball and collides with Anika making the sculpture fall hard on her foot. She collapsed on the floor laying still for a minute in shock clutching her foot. She cried in pain. The family came running towards her.

Anika sobbing and points towards the sculpture. Rudra sees Anika's bruised foot. It was already swollen. He tells Daksh to bring the ice pack. Rudra gets up and calls the doctor. Doctor asks him to tell Anika to move her leg and walk a bit. If she can't do it then her foot is fractured and they'll have to take her to the hospital. Rudra informs Om and he supports & helps Anika to stand up. She took few steps and stumbled. Doctor was on his way. Om & rudra take Anika to Priyanka's room and accompany her till the doctor arrives. Doctor examines her foot. Luckily it wasn't fractures. Due to the bruise and pain doctor did the first aid and gave Anika some painkillers and sleeping pills as needed rest. She was worried for the broken sculpture more than her foot. Om tells her to forget about it and rest. He also tells her that He & Rudra will take care of the work which is almost done

The medicine was making Anika sleep but she was keeping her eyes open forcefully. She was afraid that Daksh might come in.

He opened the door slowly and gently without making any noise. Walking slowly towards her. He wanted to see if she was Okay . Never did he know that Anika will feel his presence. Though the image was blurry but she saw him standing beside her. She freaked-out. About to get up when he pushed her back sitting by her side on the bed.

"I'm sorry, I didn't know you were sleeping. I'll come later".

He stands up and was about to leave when Anika holds her hand. She didn't say a word but the grip of her hand said it all that she wants Shivaay to be with her. He sat by her side watching her sleep peacefully.

The strong smell reached his nose and he felt like gagging. He hated that. The colour of her mehendi was deep orange as if it was blood. He held her hand. He got something to work on. Moving his fingers on her palm he so wanted to understand the exact design. Working his way along he spotted something like "S" in the design.
Why is there an S? Did she write S so that no body knows it's Daksh? The tingling sensation wakes Anika up.

"Ye kya ker rahe hain aap Billu Jee" taking her hand off his and sitting up

"Mein ? Ya tum kya ker rahi hoon" Shivaay asks in surprise

Anika unable to understand what Shivaay wants to say as she was just lying down resting

"Tm ne haath per wo kiyun kiya"? Shivaay

"Dadi ne kaha tha. Isliey".

"Dadi ne tumhen bola S likhnay ko?" Shivaay stands up in a shock

"Dadi mujhe kyun kahen gi S likhnay k liey. Us ne galati se likh diya ab mein kya kerun" Anika gets irritated

"Aur tumne likhne diya?" The more questions Shivaay asks it makes Anika lose her mind

"Billu jee aap ki problem kya hai?
Mera haath, meri marzi.
B, D, S kuch bhi.
Aap Tia ki mehendi dekhiay na jaa k k usk dil mein S hai ya D" Anika pulls blanket upwards and is about to lie back

"Tia beech mein kahan say aa gayi." Shivaay holding the blanket sits on the stool beside her bed.

" Tia tou hamesha say he beech mein thi Billu Jee

Aap please jaeay mujhe mein itni himmat nahin k aapse maghaz mari kerun" Anika lies down turning her back towards Shivaay

"Himmat thi tou D for Daksh likhti na S for shonu kyun likha taa'ak sab ko pata chalta k tumhare dil mein chal kya raha hai"

Shivaay says and was about to leave when Anika tells him to stop and asks him what did he say. She asks why did he think that she'll write Daksh's pet name on her hand so that no one knows. He tells her that he is not a kid he understands what's going on between Her & Daksh. Thinking about how Daksh behaved with her and what Shivaay thinks about them she was speechless. She never thought that Shivaay sees them as a couple.

"Kya poori duniya mein S say sirf daksh ka naam hota hai" Anika looking at Shivaay who was turning his back towards her with his hands on his waist.

"Ab Shivaay tou tum likho gi nahin". Pausing for a moment and thinking what & why did he say that turns towards Anika.

"Ummm. ... What I meant was..."

"Aapka kya matlab tha mujhe is say koi farak nahin parhta.
Aapki jaankari k liey bata doon S for Salman Khan, S for Shahrukh Khan, S for Sahil bhi ho sakta hai... Aur haan meri bua ka naam bhi S for Sundry hai"

Shivaay has never seen Anika so angry.
He was embarrassed. He didn't know what to say in reply.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Shivaay always messes it up 🤣
Shivaay think anika and daksh as a couple😲
I loved it when anika showed dakdh her chandini🤪 thank god she told om everything...she has someone now with her to protect her...
Loving this story❤️
Update soon🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
haha!! Loved it! You really do come up with the funniest moments! 😆
S for Sundri bhi hai!

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