OmRu, ShivIka & Daksh FF(Shot12@Pg19) 25.12.16 - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: wafa.M

🤣 I swear I Had a hearty laugh 🤣

I am trying to picturise Shivay ne itni mushkil se propose kiye lekin usi time OmRu ne entry maar di 🤣

Sach mei Saaya banke hi rahenge sab... 😉

Loved it ❤️

Continue Soon... 😊



Abhi tou sirf shuruaat hai 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ha ha ha i can so imagine the scene...lo
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Posted: 8 years ago
it was damn hilarious. ..lol..continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shot12: Confession!

Rudra tried to recover from the fall by turning it into a set of push-ups. Om didn't know how to react, he just pulled Rudra up and turned to get out as quickly as possible without even looking up. "Ruko tum donon, k-kya kya suna tm nay?" Shivaay came towards them and asked standing behind them.

"K-kuch bhi tou nahin. Hum ander aa rahey k O phisal gaey". Rudra exchanged few glances with Om and winked at him as they tried to figure out if Shivaay was angry or will just let it go. "Donon?" Shivaay asks. "Haan Bhaiya! Bhai jo hain. Sab kaam saath saath he karen gay na" Om glared at him "Come on Rudra! let's go." and stepped ahead holding his arm. Rudra who always wants a bit of drama , found the action perfect to be enacted . He imitated Shivaay and sang " Mujhse Shaadi karongi?"dancing along.

Anika was so embarrassed, she wanted to sprout wings and fly away. No such luck, Shivaay caught hold of her arm as she tried to run past him "Hamari baat abhi poori nahin hui Anika, where do you think you are going?" Rudra who was busy doing his steps on imaginary music got kicked out by Om in frustration.

Anika's phone rang. It was Sahil's call so he didn't hesitate to answer it. "Hello Sahil, facetime pay call ker jaldi"
"Kyun kerun? Nahin kerunga"
"Mujhe kuch dikhana hai tumhein. Jaldi ker na". An excited Rudra wanted Sahil to witness the big moment in his sister's life. Sahil didn't respond. Rudra informs him about the latest development in ShivIka's relationship but the call got dropped. This made Rudra wonder maybe Sahil isn't happy with this.


"Om tumharey bhaiya ko rest ki zaroorat hai. Inhain gehri chot ai hai". She leaves

"Anika aik minute Shivaay ki baat tou sun lou" Om requests Anika

"Anika! Meine jo bhi kaha , I mean that." Shivaay comes closer to Anika

"Mean to aap ho Billu Jee.
You're afraid k aapk stocks gir jaengay jab everyone will get to know that Tia left you at the altar. I know this is the only reason you want to marry me? Isn't it?"Anika still couldn't digest Shivaay's proposal

"No, no Anika, you're getting me all wrong. Tia yahan hoti bhi tou, I would've proposed to you." Shivaay tries hard to explain

"Acha? Ye achanak Aesa kyun?

"Kyunk... Kyunk. I..I... Damn!" Shivaay stammered as words didn't cone out of his mouth.

Jab paas tha tou paaney ki aarzoo na thi
Jab honey laga door tou muhabbat jawaan hui


Rudra gets Sahil's call. Rudra was jumping up and down in happiness making the video crash. Rudra runs towards the poolside and sits at the edge of room's window.Rudra kept on switching to front and back cameras. Sahil asks Rudra to slap himself to know if it is not a dream. Out of excitement Rudra actually slaps himself. After a second he realised that Sahil fooled him again. He tells Sahil not to pass his comments in between as they'll know about them.

"What's with this tensed situation?" Rudra wonders

"Om, iska kya matlab samjhun mein?" Om's words struck Anika hard

"Anika, hamein bhi pata hai aur tum bhi janti ho k tum donon k beech koi rishta hai. Shivaay chahta hai k us rishtay ko aik naam day diya jaey." Om tries to explain

"Konsa Risthta O? Hamarey beech sirf aik he rishta hai aur wo hai boss aur employee ka..."

(Shivaay cuts in)" Is that all you think about me , Anika? You don't have any feelings for me" Shivaay couldn't believe that Anika thinks differently

"Hain na, feelings ka samunder hai". Sahil passes a comment

"Sshh!" Rudra again shushed him

Anika after taking a long pause"Nahin, mein aapk liey kuch bhi feel nahin kerti."

"Tou ye baat meri ankhon mein dekh ker kaho." Shivaay holds her close to himself.

Apne dil ki baat tumse ye keh nahin sakta
Bin kahe bhi ab ji nahin sakta
Tumhein tou dil ka hal batana bhi hai mushkil
Ho paeyga izhaar aaj, lagta nahin ye mumkin


"Mere pass in fazool baton ka time nahin hai." She jerks his hand away

"Time nahin hai?.Pehlay tou sara din mere peechay pari rehti thi aur aaj baat he nahin kerni. Why anika." Shivaay stands in her way

"Mein aapk peechay pari rehti thi?" Anika was a bit shocked at his choice of words

"Anika, i'm sorry. I never meant wrong.. Tum tou janti ho k mere alfaz agay peechay ho jatey hain. Kaash Om say thori training li hoti tou aaj mujhe itni muskil na ho rahi hoti".

"Aap kuch bhi sochain mujhe koi farak nahin parhta"

"Ye tou Shivaay bhaiya ki line hai" This time it was rudra who passed the comment

"Are you sure, tumhein koi fark nahin parhta?" Shivaay stressed on the question

"H-haan! Mujhe kyun koi fark parey ga?" Anika fakes a smile

"Kya tum meri khushi mein khush nahin hoti?" Shivaay takes a step forward

"Mein pagal thori na hoon" Anika steps back

"Jhoot! Billu jee ko koi problem hoti hai tou poori raat mera sir khati hai Didi solution dhoondney k liey". Sahil couldn't help as Anika started lying

"Kya tum mere barey mein bilkul nahin sochti?" Shivaay takes One step per question

"Duniya mein aur bohat si achi cheezain hain sochnay k liey" Anika resists his questions" Billu Jee you've gone crazy!"

"Anika Didi jhoot kyun bol rahi hai?
Kal Billu k khiyalon mein itna gum thi k mere bag mein books ki jagah newspapers daal di" Sahil was correcting Anika

"Why Is it not okay Anika? Is it not okay that I have fallen head over heals for you?" Shivaay was feeling restless

Anika rolls ger eyes and picks up the words that were of her knowlege"Ab heals pehn k chaleyn gay tou girraingay he na. Pagal!"

"Anika, Let's just come straight to the point. I will just say it once so listen carefully okay!" Finally he was ready to deal.

"Uh- I-L-OVE-Y-OU Anika"! Shivaay puts his head in right place and tells her how he feels. These were that words she wanted to hear. She knew it would be difficult to make him speak his heart out but after a lot of banter he finally admits to his feelings.

A: "D-dadi ko patta chale..."

S: "Sab se zyada khushi Dadi he hogi"

A: "P-pinky aunty nahin maney gi"

S: "mom ko mein mana loonga" "This is not how you reply to someone who has confessed to you just now". By this time they were standing against the wall near the window. Rudra cleverly hid behind the sheer curtain. He wondered why exactly is he hiding?

A: "Sahil ko tou aap bilkul bhi passand nahin hain".

Shivaay felt like he couldn't do anything about this matter. 'What do I do now.' That looks even difficult than a confession.

"Sahil ko ye deal manzoor hai Billu jee. This is the best. Aik dum Dhinchak types. Sahil k dil mein tou kab say ladoo phoot rahe hain" Rudra couldn't do anything this time as they were close enough to hear everything. He hops over the window and stands in front of them with a stupid smile of his face showing them the phone that had Sahil on call. Shivaay was overwhelmed hearing Sahil accepting him as his sister's partner.
The family was happy with Shivaay's decision. Their wedding happened exactly like it was scheduled for the day.



The End!!
Edited by fizy_wizy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hahaha nice but why d sudden rush to the end yaar?
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Posted: 8 years ago
this part is so totaly awesome...n sooo funny...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND

Hahaha nice but why d sudden rush to the end yaar?


It wasn't rushed but I just wanted to finish it on the confession. To avoid confusion I hinted about tge wedding too 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
I was literally laughing while reading the update. It was so funny. 😆 Fizzu, you love poetry? It seems so, the Shayrs you've used in your story are really good. ❤️

Glad you finished this, total time vasool FF. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Areeba-

I was literally laughing while reading the update. It was so funny. 😆 Fizzu, you love poetry? It seems so, the Shayrs you've used in your story are really good. ❤️

Glad you finished this, total time vasool FF. 😳



I just like poetry till it's easy to be understood but I love remixed poetry( it has one original verse and the other you make up youreself 😆) I used to do that in Urdu exams, luckily got away with it everytime 😉

Thanks Ebu 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: fizy_wizy



I just like poetry till it's easy to be understood but I love remixed poetry( it has one original verse and the other you make up youreself 😆) I used to do that in Urdu exams, luckily got away with it everytime 😉

Thanks Ebu 😳



Hahah! I got it, I used to write Pakistani dramas OST as poetry reference and took that risk in board exam. So don't know how much I had scored in that particular section 😆

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