OmRu, ShivIka & Daksh FF(Shot12@Pg19) 25.12.16

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shot1: Pg1
Shot2: Pg2
Shot3: Pg4
Shot4: Pg6
Shot5: Pg7
Shot6: Pg9
Shot7: Pg11
Shot8: Pg13
Shot9: Pg15
Shot10: Pg16
Shot11: Pg18
Shot12: Pg19

Shot1: The meeting that created havoc:



Tujhe tou yaad bhi nahin hoga Daksh, tu kiyun itna uchal raha hai? Om asks Rudra who was moving back & forth keeping his eyes fixed on the door waiting for Daksh

Rudra irritated , turns towards Om who had a smile on his face, Mujhe sab yaad hai, Daksh Bhaiya bhi aur aapki crush Ananya bhi.

Om's smile disappeared as he ignored what Rudra said. Per shayid aapko yaad nahin k apki crush ne kese aapki feelings ko crush kiya apne crush k liey .
Aapki shayri mein dard just like that tou nahin aya, Rudra says it more cunningly.


Mujhe laga tha k Shadi k baad thori akal aa jaey gi tujhme. Per mein tou bhool he gaya tha k tere pass tou dimaagh he nahin hai, Om gets irritated

Shaadi? Rudra turns around and spots Daksh standing at the door all confused.

Rudra gives Om a killer look which he ignores and goes to hug Daksh.

Good to see you after so long, shivaay ne bataya k tu shadi k liey aa raha hai.

Ye Roo ki shadi matlab? Aksh inquires

Rudra interrupts both and takes gifts from Daksh

Iski Shaadi? Daksh again asks as he is unable to believ seeing Rudra getting hyper like a kid seeing the gifts

Tu ander chal, baad mein baat karen gay. Om Assures a still confused Daksh

Shivaay coming down and has a big smile seeing his bestie with his brothers

Ye sab tou mere hain, bakiyon k kahan hain?
Asks the overjoyed rudra holding all the bags and moving inside

Wo la rahin hain.

Hearing this OmRu stop and look at Daksh with foolish look on their face. "Woh"?

Shivaay witnessing all this and walks towards them with his changed expressions.

"O Betay Ki" , behind them someone fell down scattering all the gifts. A red Dupatta flew and covered her head.

Rudra and Daksh ran to help leaving behind Shivaay with his arms open as he was about to hug Daksh

Bhabhi ye kya hogaya, aapne ghoonat kiyun nikala hai ab dekhain na raita phel gaya hai,

What's with that language, Shivaay flustered

Daksh who was already so confused by Rudra gives support to let the girl stand up.
She was struggling to come out of the veil but the threads of Dupatta were stuck somewhere with her clothes making her forget to let go of Daksh hand.

Tumko dekha
to yeh khayal aaya
paglon ke stock mein naya maal aaya!

"Rudra" Om and Shivaay unable to take Rudra's nonsense Sher

Haan bhaiya, an innocent rudra asks

Shut Up!

Shivaay's eyes still glued on Dhruv's hand.

Rudra starts gathering the scattered gifts.

Shivaay comes forward pulls Dhruv into a hug making him let go of the girl's hand.

Om helps the girl with the strangled dupatta. He lifts the veil and it is Anika who was fuming at Rudra on calling her Pagal.

Anika tum? Asks the surprised Om

On hearing Annika's name rudra stands up and faces her. After giving her a glance he screams.

Daksh Bhaiya! Aap aesa kese her sakte ho?

Anika Didi aapne bhi hamein nahi bataya. Aur kisi ko nahin mujhe,mujhe tou bata diya hota. Rudra starts complaining and almost crying

Kya bata deti, Anika inquires

Tujhe ho kya gaya hai aaj? Om grabs Rudra

Rudra breaks free and asks Daksh, Is say acha aap Ananya say he shadi ker laitey.

Shaaadi!! Everyone looks at eachother. A complete silence after everyone screamed in shock

This scares Rudra.

Shivaay could't control any more. He holds Rudra from ear, Listen carefully; Daksh meri Shaadi attend kerne aya hai & I asked Anika to pick him up kiyunk mein meeting mein busy tha , Om ko order complete kerna tha aur tu apna dimaagh zyada na chalya ker. Ab ja soumya dhoond rahi hai tujhe. Kaafi raita phela chuka hai

An embarrassed rudra: Mein tou bus Bhaiya per prank play ker taha tha

ShivAniKara & Daksh: Shutup Rudra




Bear with my ridiculous writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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too funny
please write another one want to see jealousy shiv


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Posted: 8 years ago
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rudra and his antics😆, always ❤️ loved it
Edited by Lesy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was fun! Please write more!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinku95

too funny

please write another one want to see jealousy shiv




I'll try 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Write more on Dhruv-Annika-Shivaay jealousy track. I've been literally dying to read J Shivaay OS written by our talented writers.😆

And that was cute, basically a cute start. I can't wait to read more. Please IB IF writers likhoo Na kuchhh 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Areeba-

Write more on Dhruv-Annika-Shivaay jealousy track. I've been literally dying to read J Shivaay OS written by our talented writers.😆

And that was cute, basically a cute start. I can't wait to read more. Please IB IF writers likhoo Na kuchhh 🤗



lol
I am sure the amazing writers are upto something. I can't promise as it was my 2nd but i'll try to meet the needs 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hahahaha I was all this while reading and laughing 😆... mast hai fizzy... ff bana de isse
Edited by pritzz - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pritzz

Hahahaha I was all this while reading... mast hai fizzy... ff bana de isse

Bus Chaen sa aa gaya hai tumse tareef sun k 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it! It was so in character, and so spot on:)

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