OmRu, ShivIka & Daksh FF(Shot12@Pg19) 25.12.16 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
Shot 6: Everything happens for a reason

Dadi asks Jhanvi whether the girls for Mehendi have arrived or not. Jhanvi tells her not to worry as they are here busy preparing the Henna.

Om sees Anika entering the main door who had a big smile on her face seeing the decorations around and was proud of herself when she felt herself banging on a hard chest. She saw Daksh standing in front of her.

She changed her way when he opened his arms to stop her. "I was waiting for you, and you know mujhe intezaar bilkul bhi passand nahin hai, phir chahey wo tumhara ho ya tumhari maafi ka" Daksh leaning towards Anika says with his arms folded behind his back.

She was not much affected by his presence.
"Ye sab Chandni ki wajah se hua". Anika folds her arms

"Who's this chandni now?" Confused Daksh asks

"Aap Chandni say nahin milay, tabhi... naraz thi mujhse , aap dono ka theek say HELLO HI jo nahin ho saka. Koi baat nahin." Anika being all sarcastic bends down & picks up her chappal. Shows it to Daksh who was surprised by this.

"Miliay Chandni say , theek thaak chalti thi lekin pata nahin kyun jab say aap aey hain ... (Looking at Daksh amusingly who's expressions changed drastically) ummm mera matlab hai 3-4 din say iska mood off sa rehta hai." Anika says controlling her laughter and waving her sandal here & there seeing Daksh being all uneasy.

"Statue" Anika suddenly says in a loud voice and Daksh follows. Anika hits Daksh's bare upper arm really hard with Chandni making him freeze for a moment.

"Aapko andaza nahin hai Daksh Ji Mumbai mein Dengue kitna barh gaya hai.
Meine aapko bacha liya...
Vese aap credit Chandni ko day dejiay ga.
Shabash Chandni!" Anika
Says excitedly.

Daksh was already feeling insulted by Anika showing her sandal but when he saw the red bruise on his arm and the burning sensation of the spot couldn't let him stay there any longer.

Om covering his mouth comes to Anika and giving her thumps up. They start laughing.
Daksh sees this and says angrily: "You'll have to pay for this insult, Anika"

"You always make me proud Anika". Om putting his hand on Anika's head. "But mein abhi bhi tumse yahi kahoonga k Shivaay ko sab bata dou". They both walk inside .

"Tumhen pata hai na Billu Jee ko meri batein drama lagti hain, Tia ki wajah se bohat baar chop ho chuki hai, ab aur nahin".
"Aur vese bhi unko apni shaadi per bhi kaam ki tension hai, mein aur tension nahin dena chahti"

"Do you care for Shivaay"? Om asks looking at Anika while she was thinking about something

"Anika puttar aagayi tu, chal tu bhi mehendi lagwa lay" Dadi takes Anika's hand

"Nahin Dadi' mujhe ye sab passand nahin" Anika placing her other hand on Dadi's
"Aur mujhe hisaab bhi tou kerna hai sab k kaam ka wo kisi bhi waqt atey hongay paisay leinay"

"Tou doosray haath se ker leina na...
Aaj mujhe kuch nahin sunana, tu mehendi laga rahi hai nahin tou mujhse baat kerne ki koi zaroorat nahin" Dadi leaves her hands and turns when Anika hugs her from behind that makes Dadi smile

"Aapk liey tou kuch bhi kerungi" Anika hugs dadi tightly.

Anika sits with the girls who were applying Mehendi. Anika gives the girl her left hand and tells her to finish it quickly and make it simple. Anika starts doing her calculations and calls someone. Anika argues with Karim Chacha on his payment and cuts the call angrily.

Anika looking at her Mehendi design"Arey wah, dikhnay mein tu choti ci hai per talent barra hai. Chal ab jaldi se khatem ker".

"Didi kiska naam likhoon"? The girl gets naughty with Anika who was already in a bad mood because of Karim Chacha.

"Tujhe bhook lagi hai?" Anika asks the girl

Girl nods a no

"Tou kyun mujhse 2-4 khana chahti hai, chal khatem ker isko" Anika continues with her calculations and struggles with it

Her phone rings continuously but she ignores. She sends a text saying "I'm busy" with a heart and sends.

"O My Mataa! , Ye shagun ki mehndi thi jo Anika ko lag gayi, ab kya hoga" Pinky gets all shocked.

Anika's mehendi was done. She gets up without seeing it and calms Pinky down. Dadi takes Pinky away and tells Anika to relax.

Anika looks at her Mehendi "Phel gaya raita"!
She looks at the girl and gets hyper. "Pehlay tunay mujhe Tia ki mehndi lagai, aur ab Tia k saiyyan Ji... mera matlab hai Billu Jee ka naam likh diya." Anika doesn't even let the girl speak.

"Per Didi meine tou S likha hai B nahin" Girl jokes with anika.
Anika explains that his name is SSO.

"Lekin aapko jiski call aa rahi thi wo tou koi Sahil tha". Girl tries to explain which makes Anika more hyper

"Sahil mera 8 saal ka bhai hai.
Aur tujhe kaha kisne naam likhney ko, idher aa tu mein tujhe seedha kerti hoon." Anika starts running behind the girl who tries to escape from Anika's wrath
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
its so good to see Anika fighting back Against Daksh 😉
Though it was Hilarious too 🤣

Shagun ki mehendi Anika ko... Acha hua 😉

Loving it... Do continue soon 😊
Edited by wafa.M - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
S for Sahil ki wajah se C for confusion ho gaya LOL. And Shagun ki mehendi was applied to Annika! How symbolic!
Nice update!

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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
accha hota agar Daksh ko acche tareeke se Chameli ke darshan milte toh.. cheapde kahin ka..
anika ko shagun ki mehndi lag gayi.. wow..
anika is such a sweetheart..
om knows about daksh harrassing anika..
i think bhai ko Shivaay se bata karni chahiye abt it.
continue sooonish.thanks for the pm..
update ko next time itttuuu sa lamba karna Fizzzuu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
Nice one!! I really hope something like this happens on the show too.. Anika with billuji's name on her hand!!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
🤣 im very glad tht atlast daksh meet the famous chadni. 😆
Continue soon,plz.
Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Ha ha ha...daksh deserved it...
Shagun ka mahendi n 's'😳❤️
S for sahil...lol
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Caught up with your fic and have to say, I am loving it! You have a wonderful imagination and the writing is very very entertaining!
Now I want to see Billuji's reaction on seeing the mehendi...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Believe me Fizzy, when I woke this morning I had the same scenario in my mind where Mehndi wali may put S because of Sahil/Shivaay confusion. 😆 and you penned it down. 🤗
Mai bata rahi Ye wala part aa Sakta hai show mai.

It was cute. Let's see how Shivaay will see her mehndi. 😃 Nice update Fizzy and thank you so much for the PM.
p.s. Is it Fizzy or Fizzu?! 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: twerping

Caught up with your fic and have to say, I am loving it! You have a wonderful imagination and the writing is very very entertaining!

Now I want to see Billuji's reaction on seeing the mehendi...😃



Thanks for the lovely compliment 😳
Yeah! Look forward to Billu's reaction 😉

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