MDT UNNAMED V2.0 SHIVIKA : (17,20) - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAKIVIAM


Rudra will not leave kids he already imprinted on them,
Anika obviously with shivay ,she already misses him so much that she hate him now.
Om donon bhai picnic gayen hain tho woh akela kyaa karega.

bakee log one day visit mey aathey rahengey
till shivika feel it is necessary for them to go back


So vanvaas will happen after shivika reunite?😳 it will be fun to see rudra with the kids...picnic🤣
I wonder how the story will go when the vanvaas track starts
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That basically depend on onscreen shivay.
if he do some stupidity he will suffer here.
if he was good then thing good to him
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAKIVIAM

That basically depend on onscreen shivay.
if he do some stupidity he will suffer here.
if he was good then thing good to him


Omg😲😭🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 6

Anika expected Daadi to ask for kids and tried to show them to her forwarding Aayu.

Daadi "Anika mujhey nahen dekhna ,nahen dekhna."

Anika was shocked as were all present there but Aayu found someone else very interesting and moved his hands like waving which he cant do.Jahnavi know that is for her and wasted no time.Anika silently handed Aani to Pinky as well ,as told by daadi they left the room.

Daadi "Anika main kyon nahen poochoongi,kaisey bhee nahen ,bahuth saarey sawaal hain main koi nahen poochungi."

Anika just nodded.

Daadi "Hum sabh jaanthey hain Anika who donon billu key bachey hain ,tum kuch math kehna."

Daadi "Mujhey yeh bhee nahen jaanna tum aur billu key beech mey kyaa huan main bass itnaa janthee hun yeh time bhee badal jaayega."

Anika was about to say something but Daadi didn't let her .

Daadi "Ek baath bathaathi hun main undonon sey jabh thak nahen miloongi jab thak tum donon khud mujhey saath aakar nahen milwayen."

Anika was silent hiding her emotions successfully.

Daadi "Main tumsey baath karna chaahthee hun ,meri Anika sey,"

Daadi "Anika tumhey patha hain main itnee koshish kyon kiyya tumhey hummarey saath rakhney."

Daadi "Tumhey naukri mey rakhwaayi,jabh Shivay ney tumhey nikalwaaya tho tumhey waapas ussey hee bulwaayee mainey kabhee tumhey koi naukar nahen dekha mere dil ko pehley hee patha thaa tum aur billu ek doosrey key liyen bane hon."

Daadi "Main jabh tumhey pehli baar dekha thaa tabh hee mujhey pata thaa ehsaas thaa tum merey apney mey ho."

Daadi "Jabh tum naukri chodney waali thee ,tabh bhee mujhmey yeh yakeen thaa tum waapas uss ghar mey aaogee."

Anika "Yeh nahen hoga daadi."

Daadi just smiled.

Daadi "Mujhey ek madad kar saktee hon kyaa,main yeh nahen pooochoongi billu ko maaf kardo."

Anika "Maaf karney ka koi baath hee nahen hain daadi."

Daadi "Patha hain,main yeh chaahthi hun mujhey mere Anika waapas kardo jo Anika mujhey daadi kehthee bhee nahen balkee maanthee bhee thee mujhey uss Anika ko waapas kardo.Poorey Oberoi's ko ek mauka dedo."

Daadi "Ek baar billu ko mauka dedo ,tumhaarey beech kya huin kyaa problem hain main kuch nahen jaanthee."

Daadi "Main basss itnaa jaanthee hun tum jitnaa Shivay ko pyaar karthee hon utnaa he Shivay tumhey pyaar kartha hain."

Daadi "Jabh sey ussko yeh patha chala hain who bhee hummara billo nahen rahan tootgaya hain,baath nahen kar pa rahan hain .Koi nahen jaantha usskey dil mey kyaa chal rahan hain who kissey ko batha nahen paayega koi ussey samjhengey bhee nahen na main na inky na unkey bhaai,sirk ek hee hain jho ussey samajh saktee hain tum."

Daadi finished her words and waited for Anika to respond she didn't get any Daadi wanted same Anika to think of Shivay for once.

Daadi "Anika Pinky ko bulaon."

Anika left to call Pinky.

Pinky was trying to make Omkara hold the baby she is happy or more than happy she was not thinking of what is gonna happen next ,even Anika is now unsure of what will happen next.

Jahnavi noticed Anika and called her to sit beside her.Anika told about Daadi calling Pinky and she left leaving Aani with Omkara .

Rudra "Deedi aap kaisey pehchanthey hon koun Aayu hain koun Anirudh."

Jahnavi "Hum pehchan saktey hain we mothers have super power."

Rudra "Dikhney mey tho donon ek jaisey hain."

Rudra "NaheN na." confused.

Anika "Nahen"

Jahnavi "Yeh tho mera baby Aayu hain ,I know you champ." He was drolling over her trying to grab the necklace hanging down its too glittery.

Jahnavi "who ,Aani hain na Anika ."

Anika nodded.

Rudra "Aap ney kahan Anirudh hain ,Aani kaisey."

Anika "Sahil bulatha hain tho mujhey bhee aadat hogayee ."

Rudra "Yeh tho wohi baath hain naa RUDRA - RUDY ,ANIRUDH - AANI."

Rudra was trailing Om to grab Aani his new found buddy.

J "Shivaay ko bhee pehley mainey hee dekha thaa,jabh Shakti aur Tej donon nahen they,"

J "Om key saath bhee yahee huan thaaa,Ru was lucky jabh who huan tha ghar mey sabh they."

J "Anika tum jaanthee hon na Oberoi empire kitnaa bada hain,hummarey saath kuch bhee na simple nahen hotha thaa everything big."

J "Problems bhee bade,khushiyan bhee bade galath faimee bhee bade aur hum haarey tho haar bhee badi."

J "Nothing is that simple."

J "Mera hee dekho main Tej sey pyaar kartee thee,abh bhee kartee hun but usskey dil mey kyaa hain I never knew."

J "Hum almost separate honey waaley they,main ghar sey nikalney hee waaley thee,but you know kissney mera saath diya Pinky ney."

J "Hummarey beech kitney bhee problem hon lekin ussney mera saath bura nahen honey diyan."

J "It was just the reality ,she helped me fight back."

J "Hummarey generation mey kitney bhee problem huien hon humney ussey udhar hee rok diyan."

J "Humney Bachon ko effect nahen honey diyan I am proud of that main un teenon bhaion ko dekhthaa hun so it gives me energy and reason that main galath kabhee nahen thee unteenon ko dekhkar we forget everything and pray who kabhee nahen thootey aur bass unteenon key liyen I can go for anything."

J "Main akeley nahen hun issmey,Pinky hain tej hain Shakti daadi sabh .Tum jaanthee hon kyon."

Anika just nodded I know.

J "We are family,yeh ek wajaha hain we can be proud of that.We are a family."

J "Duniyan chaahey kuch bhee sochey ,unko kyaa dikhey in the end nothing matters,hummey koun kuch bhee sochey we all know one thing we will stick together to life."

J "Sabko Oberois ka power dikhtha hain ,properties business sab kuch dikhtha, merey liyen they are nothing but what really Oberoi's are in a family who kissey ko nahen dikhtha."

Anika "Aap mujhey kyon batharahen hon."

J "You are an Oberoi now,main nahen jaanthee tumhaari shaadi huin yaa nahen but dil sey tum Oberoi hon,tumney hummesha iss family ka respect kiyya ,protect kiyya like a true Oberoi,tum maanon ya na maanon you are an Oberoi ."

Anika got some call in her mobile as she has to leave,she couldn't ask for kids all are happy playing with them ,treasures of happiness in their hands.

Anika paused the call for a couple of second.

Anika "Aunty main abh jaa rahen hun, bachey royengey tho aap jaanthey hon merey room kahan hain."

She took the call and went back to her room knowing what it could mean ,they are now in the family nothing could happen to them when they are there .Shivay will get to see his kids for the first time she could not be there to see it she don't want to see it she can not control anymore she may break down infront of all she secretly always wanted to be there for that to happen she wanted to be the person but her fears always dominated.Now maybe today Shivay may get to see them feel them but she won't be there at moment to see that happening.

She sat in her room silently counting every second wondering how things gonna change,she missed them so much already would she be able to stay away from them even for a day,Oberois has enough to manipulate a court they could easily do this to get them.

Then she heared the knock in the door and he came inside he don't have kids with him may be he left them by his mom and aunt.He wanted to say something .He locked the door.

She didn't speak a word neither did he .He came silently and sat beside her .

Anika "Bachey?" she enquired about them.

Shivaay "I didn't see them,main nahen mila ,Mom key pass hain."

Anika was shocked she gave him a chance to meet them .

Anika looked at him to know what is happening and she couldn't.He hugged her as tightly as he can her arms moved around him holding him tightly in her reflex.

Shivay "I don't want them without you,mujhey tum jyaada important hon ."

Shivay "Mujhey tum aur hummarey bachein donon chaahiyen." tears flowing through his eyes her eyes.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
I loved jhanvis talk...
You understand jhanvi so well...
The ending was
I feel so bad for dadi...she has to go through so much pain in this age...
Haha i loved how rudra was asking how to identify the kids...it was cute to see him going behind his buddy...
I cant wait for the next update...
Please update soonnn
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
amazing update...
It's really sad to see DADI in such a miserable situation...
Really,the way u expressed about JANVI n her life struggles...very impressive...JANVI has a very strong personality...
OM is still struggling...haay, mein abh kya karu tumhe sikhaneko...sare obroi ladies millkar bhi na sikha paye...hmm,but u r learning...good...keep trying jaldi godh le paoge...
RUDRA the most cute character...haay,bechara confusion ka mara...apne bhanjoko pehchan nahi paraha...hmm,he is also learning...u also keep trying tumbhi sikhloge...
ANIKA angry with SHIVAY but still deep inside wants to see him holding their two little angles in his arms...n SHIVIKA scene...too good...
Loved it...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Continue continue...iss chakar me version1 mat bhul jana🤪😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Brilliant 👏 countinue soon yaar tumne cliff pe chod diya 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Read a few updates at a go...that was emotional stuff...love their talks...glad shivaay came to c her instead of going to d kids...step 1 towards redemption i hope...cant wait to c whats next...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Anika is not exactly angry at shivaay.
there was as much her mistake in it as was his,they did it together its not like shivay raped Anika.

this issue is messed up to roots that Anika don't know what wdnt right and what went wrong.

All she could see was her two kids she has none but Sahil in her life till then yet Sahil is adopted kind
first time anika has someone of her own her own blood who can never leave her their is new purpose for her life.
she never planned big things in her life but life brought something very big to her in form of them.

Same time Shivays wedding is fixed with Tia she will not tell him how can she spoil ones life to safe hers or whole Oberoi prestige in firezone.
And she know their is always a difference between her and shivay which will not let them together and so dhe prepared for it.
She decided never let them.know,she created a shell of anger and is protecting her kids from what she thought will take them away from her

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